Very nice.  I liked the one word he says.

Okay, you got my knickers wet with this one.  I would love any bloody part of Snape.

Wow. Superb.

Mmm sexy. Lovely, can't wait to see what happens next!

Wow!  That was a perfectly brilliant description - beautifully written!  I've never thought of stubble as being particularly sexy on a man (although undeniably masculine of course!) - but then again anything on the dear Potions master would be sexy!

I can just see him unexpectedly and lightning quickly shooting out his hand to grab hers in a vice-like grip (that's very 'in character' in my opinion!)

I really hope you are going to continue this; it's way too good to stop here! :-)

Whew, intense, you've captured the essense of his physical being. What female in their right mind wouldn't stay, lol. Lovely start, looking forward to the next chapter.

Stubble.  The essence of male! :)

Nicely done... erm, more?  *puppy eyes*

WOw I even bring my hand to the screen as if to touch his jaw. Brilliant.

ooohh yes! Stay... I would!

Very sexy... thanks!

Did you have to end iit there?

Are you going to keep going?  Such a great tableau that you've started there. :) 
Hope to see more!!

So sexy, so lovely - who wouldn't stay??? This is a wonderful word-picture indeed!

you left mme wanting more

" stay " only one thing to say to that," yes Sir ".