I loved this, and the 100s style really suited.

It was sweet, in a very Snapish way (gee! how often can that be said?!)

Very nicely done!

Bravo Bravo!!!

Oh, hoorah! Those were perfect questions for her to ask, even when I thought she had wasted her first. She really made #2 and #3 count! Gemini, this was so much fun to read, and so well written. And that it was done in 100s added so much to the pacing. Great fic!

Awesome stuff... I really enjoyed this!

What an enjoyable read!One could say it was lucky that Snape overheard her conversation with Harry and chose to act on it.The setup was done brilliantly.Just one thing - if I recall correctly, Veritaserum has to mature a full moon cycle after brewing before it can be used. But as Snape told this Umbridge in OotP, we could argure he only said this as an excuse to not have to give one to Umbridge.

Where is chapter 3?

Doesn't it always! :)

Well done. It would probably take Veritasearum and a scenario like this for Severus to admit the truth to her. How very Slytherin of him.I really enjoyed this little drabble.

Yeah!! Very nicely done - sweet without sappy - thanks for posting!

Great story.  Loved the angst of chapters 1 and 2, then the poured-his-soul-out tension and relief of chapter 3.  "Do you want to kiss me?"  Great question.  Job well done.  Mischief managed.

This is so sweet and well written that (I'm embarrassed to admit it) it aroused me *blushes*. Again well done.

This was absolutely gorgeous, it really was. It was lovely to read something so tender and sweet.In that last part of this chapter, where he is laying his heart bare, I somehow had the image of Col. Brandon from Sense & Sensibility form in my mind.  (As a big Alan Rickman fan I can never quite distance anything SS says from the way AR would have said it!) Your tone of language and the melanchony, self-depreciating way in which he said it made that happen, I think.  In so many ways the 'tragic' character of Severus is similar to Col. Brandon's, don't you think?I'm just so glad that, in this, you have allowed Severus to have the happy ending he deserved, just like Jane Austen did for her character - something, as we all know, JKR didn't for SS!  Well done for this; thank you so much for sharing! :-)  

Awwww.  I do so love this one!

<i>The room grew smaller as she approached his desk.</i>Very emotive sentence that really brings the reader into the moment.

PLEASE TELL ME THIS ISN'T THE END OF THE STORY!!  Aarrggghhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   I LOVE IT!

Severus listening in on her - how rude but effective. I can't wait to read what she'll ask him! There's more, right?

I just found this, and had misread, thinking it was complete - what a teaser if that was the end! This is a wonderful series. I can't wait till the next installment!

Oh my!  This is good, I mean really good!  Simply can't wait for the next chapter now! I don't think I've ever seen this done before; not only is this a novel idea but the way you've written it is unique - well done you! :-)

aww! where's the next chapter? I love it!

I'm surprised he is willing to taste it. But of course he has the plan.

Hmm, what will she ask?  What will he reveal?  Where will it lead?  Can't wait to find out.  Love your drabbles!

Oh well done! can't wait to see if Hermione ask the right  questions. I'm glad he over heard her talking to Harry. Can't wait for the next Chappy

Oohh quickly i'm excited! LOL.

oooooooh!

What an awesome first chapter - I wish chapter 2 and 3 were up already! I'll stay tuned. Cheers to the author.