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Consequences of Meddling with Time

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4: Chapter 4

5: Chapter 5

6: Chapter 6

7: Chapter 7

8: Chapter 8

9: Chapter 9

10: Chapter 10

11: Chapter 11

12: Chapter 12

13: Chapter 13

14: Chapter 14

15: Chapter 15

16: Chapter 16

17: Chapter 17

18: Chapter 18

19: Chapter 19

20: Chapter 20

21: Chapter 21

22: Chapter 22

23: Chapter 23

24: Chapter 24

25: Chapter 25

26: Chapter 26

27: Chapter 27

28: Chapter 28

29: Chapter 29

30: Chapter 30

31: Chapter 31

32: Chapter 32

33: Chapter 33

34: Chapter 34

35: Chapter 35

36: Chapter 36

37: Chapter 37

38: Chapter 38

39: Chapter 39

40: Chapter 40

41: Chapter 41

42: Chapter 42

43: Chapter 43

44: Chapter 44

45: Chapter 45

46: Chapter 46

47: Chapter 47

48: Chapter 48

49: Chapter 49

50: Chapter 50

51: Chapter 51

52: Chapter 52

53: Chapter 53

54: Chapter 54

Consequences of Meddling with Time

beaweasley2

718 Reviews   |   718 Ratings, 0 Likes, 174 Favorites )

Romance Smut post-HBP/HBP compliant Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 363,192 Words 59 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Aberforth Dumbledore Harry Potter Hestia Jones Remus Lupin Ronald Weasley Angelina Johnson Anthony Goldstein Cho Chang Colin Creevey Dean Thomas Ginevra Weasley Hannah Abbott Luna Lovegood Neville Longbottom Padma Patil Seamus Finnigan Susan Bones Dolores Jane Umbridge Mr. Granger Mrs. Granger Original Character Rufus Scrimgeour

Variety Challenge first runner up. Hermione Granger is given a Time-Turner and instructions to use it. Only, using a Time-Turner can be a little tricky if not used correctly: a mistake made in counting or a slip of fingers can make the user jump irregularly and thus she could accidentally alter her time line. And when such an accident happens, Severus Snape uses Hermione’s Time-Turner in order to fix a horrific wrong. However, it’s his younger self that becomes the one who must ensure that history is not altered.

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Chapters (54)

Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Chapter 8: Chapter 8

Chapter 9: Chapter 9

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Chapter 11: Chapter 11

Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Chapter 15: Chapter 15

Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Chapter 25: Chapter 25

Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Chapter 27: Chapter 27

Chapter 28: Chapter 28

Chapter 29: Chapter 29

Chapter 30: Chapter 30

Chapter 31: Chapter 31

Chapter 32: Chapter 32

Chapter 33: Chapter 33

Chapter 34: Chapter 34

Chapter 35: Chapter 35

Chapter 36: Chapter 36

Chapter 37: Chapter 37

Chapter 38: Chapter 38

Chapter 39: Chapter 39

Chapter 40: Chapter 40

Chapter 41: Chapter 41

Chapter 42: Chapter 42

Chapter 43: Chapter 43

Chapter 44: Chapter 44

Chapter 45: Chapter 45

Chapter 46: Chapter 46

Chapter 47: Chapter 47

Chapter 48: Chapter 48

Chapter 49: Chapter 49

Chapter 50: Chapter 50

Chapter 51: Chapter 51

Chapter 52: Chapter 52

Chapter 53: Chapter 53

Chapter 54: Chapter 54


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I love to write. A dreamer, a creator and filled with wonder, imagination and life. Sometimes I get lost in the other worlds I've read and in some I create. It's all good, I’m in good company. 

“Imagination does not become great until human beings, given the courage and the strength, use it to create.”― Maria Montessori
 “Our imagination flies -- we are its shadow on the earth.”― Vladimir Nabokov 
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June W

I hope she told the Aurors about the Confusing Concoction and possible Befuddlement Draught and spells they used on her; looks like her parents were also given potions and spells by the bad boys. Well, I hope Harry doesn't go ballistic and emo as he did in canon.Minerva's family sounds wonderful, especially little Kieran. I hope they stay safe in the war. May I cross my fingers for Emmeline Vance?Thank you for the new chapter!!!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

Yes, she did tell them about the potions used on her, but if you read carefully, you'll see that the Aurors gave Mr. and Mrs. Granger a Claming Draught, to help them remain calm and to see the incident with rational eyes. NOthing like angry and upset Muggles when your trying to suss out the truths of a situation.    Harry, you'll see, but then he's Harry.  I'm glad that you liked Minerva's family. Kieran was fun to type. Emmeline Vance... sure. But...  You are most welcome for the chapter. Thank you for reading and for the review.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

Yes, she did tell them about the potions used on her, but if you read carefully, you'll see that the Aurors gave Mr. and Mrs. Granger a Claming Draught, to help them remain calm and to see the incident with rational eyes. NOthing like angry and upset Muggles when your trying to suss out the truths of a situation.    Harry, you'll see, but then he's Harry.  I'm glad that you liked Minerva's family. Kieran was fun to type. Emmeline Vance... sure. But...  You are most welcome for the chapter. Thank you for reading and for the review.

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Pieredaes Muse

Thank you so much for the update! I really liked how you brought so many new perspectives to the summer events, which read little of in the books. I especially liked how you set up the attack on Amelia Bones as a result of Hannah's actions and am slightly nervous that Hermione's parents are with Emmeline Vance, who in the books disappeared during one of the summers (I can't remember which). Also, the idea of Dumbledore forcing Voldemort's hand was incredibly fascinating. I hope we can read more soon!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

I have another in queue. We'll see if I get it approved. I'm glad that you liked all the added details of the war outside Hogwarts, and the bit in France. Yes, since Hannah was in the DA, and in the Ministry, I added it as a cause for them to go after Madam Bones. One more reason. (Hannah wasn't in the Ministry in canon)  Oh, Madam Vance - yes, well, you'll find out very soon what happens there.  And yes, DDumbledore is directing the scene, and since he's dying, why not force Voldemort's hand...  Thank you for reading and for the review.

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AuntieL

Lovely update. I'm curious as to what the British Ministry hoped to do by interrogating Hermione. The crime committed against her happened in France -- they would have no jurisdiction.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

Exactly, but then Umbridge was involved in that decision. I'm glad that you enjoyed the update. Thank you for reading and for the review.

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Prof M McGonagall

I've spent the last few days reading this story and have enjoyed it very much. I particularly liked the development of the relationship between Hermione and Teen Severus and the hold that still has in their own timeline. This last chapter was very exciting! I can't wait to see what happens next.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

Thank you very much for giving my story a try. I'm delighted that you enjoyed it, are enjoying it thus far. Oh next is coming... Thank you so much for the review. Happy reading.

0/10

sunny33

Uh oh, another complication! :)

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

LOL yep. Hugs, sunny.

10/10

Sharn

Okay, wasn't expecting this at all.  The last interaction Hermione had with Severus was in the hospital wing and he was quite upset with her.  What is he going to think when he hears about this?Too bad Hermoine is so trusting.  But she seems to have gotten this trait from her parents.  Even they should know not to believe everything they read in the papers.  I was concerned to hear of the Ministry official who was at the Granger house to 'apply protection.'  At least Dumbledore and Severus were by as well.Poor Hermione.  Finally receives attention from an attractive boy (young man) who's about her age and he turns out to be a creep.  How can you show 'constant vigilance' when you're a bookish teenager and a boy notices you? I can't imagine how Severus is going to figure into this situation or what he's going to think. Hopefully, Hermione will get herself out of this situation safely (minus the Stunner to her shoulder). Severus will be relieved about that but what is he going to think/say about Hermione being in that situation in the first place.  Maybe he'll be proud of her wandless magic ability - or will he berate her for being without her wand in the first place!?  Oh well.Good job, Bea. Good chapter, even without Hermione/Severus interaction.  Although I expect some in the next chapter.  Please?

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

Hummm... You'll have to wait to find out. But no, he's not happy, however, this is war and she did do well... so far at least...   Would you expect to be attack by Death Eaters at a luxury resort in France? She thought she was on holiday - other than a bit of unwelcomed persuasion from her parents, it was a lovely vacation. Great beaches, great food, shopping…  So even though it was all a set up, it did come as a bit of a shock. You’re right, a attractive boy shows interest and he’s nice, charming, and a baddie. You’ll find out a bit of what Severus thinks a little bit later… and he does have opinions. I’m glad that you liked the chapter even without any SS/HGness going on. Thank you for reading and for the review ~

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Very Small Prophet

Snape points out that Mr. Diggory and Mr. Krum have access to books from the Restricted Section. Does that mean Miss Delacour is the only one at a disadvantage? Not surprising. She’s only a girl, and very few females actually matter in the Potterverse. They’re mostly window-dressing. Poor Fleur certainly is.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

No, but I didn't really want to give a 'list' of all just an example. I'm sure Madam Maxime would pitch a fit if her champion was denied access. The point was that Harry doesn't have access due to his age, so Severus is leveling the playing field, that's all. But I find your statement to be thought provoking. Thank you for the review.

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Very Small Prophet

Lupin, if you’re so noble and have completely rejected that evil fellow Sirius Black (who was willing to murder a schoolmate at sixteen using you as a weapon), why haven’t you told the authorities that Sirius is an unregistered Animagus? And why haven’t you handed that superb surveillance tool, the Marauders Map, to Dumbledore so he can better protect the school? It couldn’t be that you’re a spineless hypocrite, could it?

Also, I don’t believe for a minute Remus NEVER joined in bullying Snape. He wouldn’t have been accepted as a full-fledged Marauder if he hadn’t. The others would have seen his behavior as cowardly, not principled. After a friendless childhood, it was far too important for Remus to keep his only friends for him not to knuckle under to the pressure. Maybe after he was appointed prefect the others let him stand back more often and be their alibi (he could start telling them to lay off the moment a teacher was spotted), but they wouldn’t let him off the hook when they were in the forest unwatched, facing dangerously equal odds if Lupin failed to pitch in.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

Ifind that I'm in agreement with so many of your comments here. But how he was as a student is not how he is as an adult. Besides, Harry had the map, not Lupin. Interesting take on Lupin. Thank you very much for sharing theat with me.

Response from Very Small Prophet (Reviewer)

Even as a supposedly responsible adult, Lupin refuses to “tattle” about the Animagus form of his good mate the escaped convict. Lupin never learned to stand up to his friends, and could use a lesson in courage from eleven-year-old Neville Longbottom (someone who, unlike school-age Remus Lupin, never had a “gang” or a best mate).

Thanks for not freaking out over my sneers at one of fandom’s favorite characters. JKR did an amazing job of making Lupin superficially likable, though it was mainly in contrast to Snape. Yes, Lupin is a better teacher, but he’s not a better man. Not by a long shot.

10/10

HBAR

I do hope Hermione's parents don't force the issue of leaving the wizarding world.  It would be all wrong for her, but I can see how they would have a difficult time comprehending that.I started getting nervous when Hermione was invited to his house, his parents weren't thre, and some friends were coming over.  Yikes!  Good thing she is sort of a badass.  She learned from the best!I do hope you update soon.  Just who is this Lucian Laurent?

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

Not likely, but they did try. LOL yes, she walked into that one. You'll find out more in the next chapter. Oh, and you'll find out who he is next chapter too.  Thank you for reading and for the review.

10/10

June W

ACK!!!!!!! There better be a new chapter on the way soon.What are these guys, junior Death Eaters??  Too bad Severus isn't around, but perhaps he'll show up soon. She needs to learn Apparation ASAP and make her own emergency Portkey.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

Sorry! Yes, there is but I've a chapter of S-WP going in today first and as soon as one clears validation I'll update this one.  As to the guys... you'll fine out in the next chapter - which is really mean, huh, cuz, I have two in queue and you'll have to wait a bit.  I'm sorry. But thank you for reading and for the review. That doesn't make it up to you does it? 

Response from June W (Reviewer)

no, but I'm glad the next chapter is done and ready to be validated. thank you!

10/10

braye27

Good for you, Bea!  You had me hook, line, and sinker right till the end.  I began to get uncomfortable when Pierre invited Hermione for lunch and then said that a few friends would be coming over.  But the warning lights went off when he told Hermione that both of his parents were out of town.  Then when Philippe, the curly-haired French boy in need of a good shave, came waltzing in I wanted to snatch her out of there fast!  Tarnation!  I hope Severus finds Hermione before Lucien Laurent does.  Who is Lucien Laurent?  Not THE Lucien Laurent?  Famous footballer?  Thanks for another wonderful, action packed, nerve wracking chapter!!!Beth

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

Did I? lol yes, quite a predictiment, but she did well, and ... well, you'll see. You'll find out who LL is in the next chapter. You're welcome. Thank you for reading and for the review.

0/10

color

yeehaw    great chaper full of surprises           and it looks like hermione is doing a fab job fending for herself

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

Thank you very much. teehehe I surprised you.  Yes, she's learned a few things from Severus and... er... well, there is a bit more to it.  Thank you for reading and for the review.

10/10

Bettina

This chapter started so innocently and then SUCH a swing to the Dark! I didn't even become suspicious about the Grangers' being so well informed all of a sudden, just found you maybe stretched canon a bit. Well done! This excellent read was worth waiting for, but could you free Hermione from this floating sofa really soon? Please?

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

Yep, that's what I intended. Nope, this time only stretched canon a teeny bit, hermione went to France instead of ... does the book say where they'd ogne? lol nope, only Harry. floating sofa?  Okay... lol Thank you for reading and for the review.

10/10

kittyperry

Wow. What a chapter. Not expected at all. Fabulous though.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

Thank you very much. I'm so glad that I surprised you. Thank you very much for the review.

0/10

AuntieL

When he said he went to boarding school, I wondered if he could be a wizard. I did NOT expect them to attack her!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

Yeah, I know... But it - yeah he did. Thank you for reading and for the review.

10/10

sevibaby

1) Hermione's parents need to get their heads out of their you know whats.2) I hope Severus comes to the rescue.Loved the chapter.  Worth the wait.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

1) yep, but then they were influenced but ebil guy to think she would be better off out of the wizarding world.  2) one can hope he will... I'm delighted that you did. Thank you for the review.

10/10

Phyllidia

I was at first a little disappointed that we didn't get the battle after being hyped but you did a wonderful job in the retelling that I was quite satisfied.  Looks like they got a visit from an Unspeakable (seemed a little peeved that his territory had been invaded).Nice work with the brains and am looking forward to seeing how they affect the characters and story.Will you by chance be going into why some were affected by the Veil even tho' they haven't seen death? I am mostly sad because I have to wait for the next chapter but all happy at how the story is unfolding.  GO TEAM YOU!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

You figured out he was an Unspeakable!  You were the first to guess his sort-of idenity!  I'm sorry that the fight was only in a long synopsis, but I really didnt' want to rehash it and go into a whole retelling. I'm glad that you were not disappointed. Oh the brains were chosen for a reason, lol. and the Veil - are you sure that those who were affected had not seen death?I'm sorry about the wait, I wish the process was faster, but alas...  But thank you so much for reading and for the review.

10/10

Phyllidia

I absolutely loved your retelling of Fred and George's fireworks.  ESPECIALLY the teachers involvement.  I love seeing that fleshing out of them.  It was wonderful as is the rest of your story.I would support you financially were I able so you could do nothing but write.  Alas I cannot so I will have to wait for the rest of the chapters as you are able to get them out.  Sigh, it is a rough life we readers of fanfiction live.....

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

I'm delighted that you enjoyed the fireworks, and of course, since I get to show other view points - why not show the teachers! I wish the posting process went a bit faster, but I too have to be patient. I keep going, and trying to do my best. Thank you for being patient with me. and thank you for the review.

10/10

HBAR

Wow, a lot of ground was covered here.  I am pleased that you just gave the highlights of the ministry excursion.  There was no point in rehashing what we already know.  Still you put a spin on it by adding characters and events, not so much that it changed the outcome, but enough to make it interesting.The exchange between Severus and Hermione was kind of uncomfortable.  I think that she is young and it is showing, but also, she really didn't have much choice as Harry's friend but to follow him.  Severus I think is berating her because he is upset about what happened.  And it is the same situation I've had a couple of times where I lose one of my kids in a store and I go into panic mode.  When I find them I am all hugging on them, but once I am over that initial relief, let the tirade and lecture about wandering off begin.  So I think he will get over it, and maybe even feel bad for yelling at her.In the end, I felt like there were a lot of characters to keep straight.  I can't remember if we have been introduced to all of these players or not in previous chapters, and how important it is to know who each of them is.  I still really like the idea that there are Slytherins who don't side with Voldemort.Great chapter, as always!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

 That was my intent, to show what the additional characters did and unfortunately it did not make a big difference. I will show why in a few chapters, but for now, Lucius was right – they were teenagers up against fully magical adult wizards. I’m delighted that it was at least interesting.

You are so right, he is berating her because he’s upset, and that she didn’t’ trust him, but she misunderstood and had felt she needed to go. They will both get over it. Hopefully, they learn to trust one another… we’ll see.

As to the characters, I can share with you my Character’s sheet for the chapter. Just email me. Or if there is a specific group, I’ll sort it out for you. I have been filling in the gaps, and am glad to help if you want it. workingforweekends@yahoo.com

Thank you for reading and for the review. I’m glad that you are enjoying the story. 

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Mex

I love your story. I think that your description of battle on Ministry was written very well. It was there lots people and narration come to us clear and unentangled. When Hermione ended, Nevil smoothly reassume. Effects of the brains might be interesting, in canon was something of thoughts would hurt more than anything else. I´m glad that mugleborn have some advantage. Ron as bookworm would be witty, but it may not be that much innocent. I wonder how (in comparison wit canon) was Hermione better warrior, Severus trained her, she must be better. Who was that balding wizard with glasses? Dumbledor don´t looked at him amiably. What have you in plan with Lucius, he don´t be there in very bad light.Severus be angry at Hermione, but now  he have definitely reason. Hermione too take the part with Harry, that is too hot-headed Gryffindor. Hermione herself is "Gryffindor go to action" in emocial situacions than that consider all consequence and gentle niacin of all gestures. She told him, how could I to know what side you are on? That has had regular touched him. I'm curious how she apologize to him. Severus's (spell it that way? I'm in English autodidact that use for this review constantly dictionary) speech about James and Harry was pertinent even if he wouln´t be able to admit any good thing to James face to face (when he had chance).Rowling´s books was awesome, but they show us only one viewpoint. Golden trio plus some few character of all house, in Slytherin mostly Draco and other "bad". World isn´t black and white and yours Slytherins prove that. It give us other level, it is good. But I begin to loose oneself in separate Slytherins. Can you write out for me Severus´s "good Slytherin" and in what year they are? If itsn´t problem, I would be thankful.Anything else, in the Department of Mysteries had to broken up time-turners? Before this chapter I speculated whether Hermione get to past in battle, but this would be perhaps over-combination. Don´t you tell somewhere in review that she might get to past again?Thank for great chapter!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

Thank you very much. I’m glad that you didn’t find it too repetitious. Yes, well, the effects maybe a bit more than just hurtful, but you’ll have to wait and see. Yep, being Muggleborn, you’d look at things differently.  The guy – well, think about it, he didn’t speak, and was not too happy about the things that were destroyed or broken in the Department of Mysteries. lol Severus may be a bit angry, because he expected more of her. But you’re right, she is a Gryffindor and des foray into without really looking at the consequences sometimes.  Being told she had doubts hurt, sure, especially when he’d opened up to her, training her and all. Nope, Severus would never say anything nice about James and Sirius. lol I hated the all black and white bit about the books as well, how all Slytherins were evil and bad. Sucks.  The Time-Turners – yes the ones at the Department of Mysteries were all destroyed. However… there is still the possibility of a little blue box having one… maybe…

 

Here is the cast of Slytherins:

 

Graduated: 1996 (OoTP year)

Raymond ‘Darias’ Kennecott—he was a prefect, he is in Severus’ group as the leader, his father is a Death Eater/mother is a DE sympathizer, he vowed to decline taking the Mark (chap 30), he is a Occlumens, he is comfortable around Professor Snape, he owns a small beach house- purchased under the name Darias Holden(chapter 30), Seeing Serena Wilkins, and is currently in hiding)

Raithe Macrae—was in Severus’ group, father is a DE/mother is a DE sympathizer, he faces confrontation with squared shoulders & defiant stance25, he vowed to decline the Mark30 , he’s marked33, and is seeing Tammorah Merkle)

Duane Hartshorne—was in Severus’ group, father is a DE/mother is a DE sympathizer, he vowed to decline taking the Mark

Grantham Thortenson—was in Severus’ group, father is a DE/mother is a DE sympathizer, Joins Severus’ Slytherin group in chapter 30, he vowed to decline taking the Mark, knows he’s to be Marked Xmas hols)

Miles Bletchey—became a DE, his father and mother are DE sympathizers

Bole—became a DE, his father is a DE/his mother is a DE sympathizer

Derrick—became a DE, his father is a DE and his mother is a DE sympathizer

 

Serena Wilkes—was a prefect, was in Severus’ group, can’t stand up to daddy, her father is a DE/mother is a DE sympathizer, Severus knows he will have to watch her carefuly26, she is Darias’ girlfriend33, and goes into hiding with Darias33

Valeria Franklin—joins Severus’ Slytherin group

Tammorah Merkle—was in Severus’ group, father is a DE/mother is a DE sympathizer, she is seeing Raithe

Estefany Rivas—didn’t join Severus’ group

Nicole Johnson—didn’t join Severus’ group

Anysha Dhankar—didn’t join Severus’ group

 

7th years: will graduate1997 (HBP year)

Aldebaran Urguhart  —is in Severus’ group, he is a prefect, his father is a DE/mother is a DE sympathizer, he’s to be marked Christmas 1996, he is a Occlumens, will take over as leader of Severus’ Slytherin group, is in contact with Darias, he has pendants-Protean charmed/notPortkeys

Raymond Aubry— is in Severus’ group, his father is a DE/mother is a DE sympathizer, was told he’s to be marked summer 1997, he is a fair Occlumens

Terrance Higgs— is in Severus’ group, his father & mother are DE sympathizers

_?_ Montegue—he did not join Severus’ group, his father & mother are DE sympathizers/supporters

Pucey Adrian—his father is a DE/mother is a DE sympathizer, he did not join Severus’ group

_?_ Warrington—his father is a DE/mother is a DE sympathizer, he did not join Severus’ group

 

Penelope Reilly—she is a prefect, is in Severus’ group, she is seeing Raymond Aubry, she joined Severus’ groupMary Nolan—she joined Severus’ groupWinnifred Maguire—she joined Severus’ group Mary Dorothea Langley—she joined Severus’ groupCatherin MacTirdelvach—she is on the fence, she’s not fighter, her father has too much control over the family30, she was seeing Raithe Macrae in her 5th yearEgraine Whyte, Lassarina Fitzgerald, Jane Sybilla Grey—are all too ensconced in the pure-blood prejudices to join Severus’ group, Lassarina and Sybilla may be betrothed this summer

 

6th years (in the same year as Harry, Ron and Hermoine - 1998 – in school DH year)

Rayne Boughton— is in Severus’ group, Brambila’s boyfriend, his father is a DE/mother DE sympathizer

Theodore Nott—in this story he is on the fence about his loyalty, he’s not in Severus’ group, but he is not wanting to be a DE, father is a DE, his mother is a sympathizer, he does not hang around Malfoy, Crabbe and Goyle because he doesn’t like them

Draco Malfoy—prefect, not in Severus’ group, his father is a DE and his mother is a DE sympathizer/possibly a DE herself. His Aunt and uncles are DE’s – he is a Marked and has a task

Vincent Crabbe—not in Severus’ group, his father is a DE and his mother DE sympathizer

Gregory Goyle —not in Severus’ group, his father is a DE and his mother DE sympathizer

Blaise Zambini —not in Severus’ group, his father and his mother are DE sympathizer

 

Brambila Rushbridge—she is shy but joined Severus’ group, Rayne’s girlfriend, her dad is a DE

Candice Longacre—is on the fence in the previous year, but is likely to join Severus’ group

Tracy Davis—is on the fence in the previous year, but is likely to join Severus’ group, shrap mind when she applies herself, cheeky at times

Pansy Parkinson—she is the prefect, not in Severus’ group, her father is a DE and her mother DE sympathizer

Millicent Bulstrode—she is not in Severus’ group, her father is a DE and her mother DE sympathizer

Daphne Greengrass—not in Severus’ group, her father and her mother are DE sympathizer

 

5th year (in Ginny’s year)

Gasper Vaisey – in Severus’ group

Eddart Terrance – is a prefect, is in Severus’ group

William McGariety– in Severus’ group

Eugene Caldwalter—is on the fence, but is likely to join Severus’ group

Seumond Sharma—is on the fence, scared to join Severus’ group but knows about it

Partick Harper —not in Severus’ group, his father and his mother are DE sympathizer

 

Jessica Arenas—is a prefect, in Severus’ group

Pauline Gweynewoud – in Severus’ group

Aurora Shidhom —is on the fence, but is likely to join Severus’ group

Sophie Shipnuck —not in Severus’ group, his father and his mother are DE sympathizer

Luella Gideon —not in Severus’ group, his father is a DE and his mother is a DE sympathizer

 

Hope this helps, and I hope the translator works on the list all right.  Thank you for reading and for the review.

10/10

Jinxie

Enjoed the fireworks so much better in your story. Pink pig fireworks!

Loving the build up to the Dept of Mysteries and Snape's possible regret.

looking forward to seeing what happens next!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

Thank you very much. Yep, pink pigs. lol Thank you,

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

, and I hope you enjoy how I handle that as well. Thank you for reading and for the review.

10/10

HBAR

I was glad to see Snape commenting to Hermione in potions class, and then keeping her afterwards and treating her like an adult/friend as much as he is able in their current postions.You've done a nice job staying close to canon, but deviating enough to make it interesting.  And I was pleased that you didn't rehash each and every moment of canon.  It was totally unnecessary, and I automatically assume that if you don't address something, that it happened as it did in the books.I will be interested to see Snape's reaction to Hermione at the department of mysteries.

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

I'm glad that you enjoyed thier bit over her potion. You're right, if I don't mention it, it's as it is in the books. We've all read them, so why repeate it. That said, in the last chapter of year 5, Hermione and Neville tell (us) what happened in the Dep of Mysteries that is repetitive. Its in the chapter presently in queue. Hope that part isn't too bad, but there are more kids than in canon, and I wanted to show who went/did what/where.  Yep, Severus' reactin is in the next chapter, too. I'm finishing up the 1996 summer and it's been a active summer! I've a reason for the lengthy summer, you see a lot of what's happening in the wizarding world. Hope you like it. Thank you for reading and for the review.

0/10

Pieredaes Muse

Thank you for updating! I saw what you did there!!! I will be very put out if some of that healing potion does not come into play in a very important moment...I was really fascinated by the greater numbers of the DA coming along for the ride. It definitely adds suspense to the next chapter (which will be soon, I hope!). I'm curious if Anthony will take the place of Cormac in Year 6 events...

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

YOu are most welcome, thank you for reviewing. Did you? lol Well, you know me, I hint/show then later on it becomes really vital somehow. But how might and will surprise you. Yes, well, saftey in numbers, together we stand strong and all that, right? Yes, I just have to wait for my final corrections list and I'll be sharing my - oops, that's S-WP and P-TB. well, I do have the next one out there with my betas. So hopefully soon.  6th year - I have a surprise for you on that score! and yes, boys may become a bit of an issue. lol

0/10

AuntieL

I really like how We see Severus from thisdifferent perspective... it's completely plausible that he would have peeked into Harry's mind when in Umbridge's office (not sure why he didn't in canon, though). Loooooved the potion to mitigate Nagini's venom... and that Hermione brewed it perfectly. EXCELLENT chapter!

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

In canon it's all from Harry's perspective, this bit is from Severus' so who's to say he didn't? Only Harry, being Harry, barled off on his adventure (hero complex) to save the day! JKR did give him a cape, er, cloak!  Yep, that potion, of course she brewed it perfectly. lol Thank you for reading and for the review. 

10/10

sunny33

Good tie in with canon. Like his little comment in Potions and the smirk. :)

Response from beaweasley2 (Author of Consequences of Meddling with Time)

Thank you very much. I'm really trying to blend in with canon, but in 6th year there are a few little 'differences' and of course, I've some things planned. lol I'm glad that you liked his comments. Thnak you for reading and for the review.

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