Harry's Curiosity
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Some itches are better left unscratched. Harry has an Unforgivable request of Hermione.
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I am a single mother who has enjoyed writing since I was in high school. I also enjoy doing computer graphics!
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Whoa. Loved this. Awesomeness upon awesomeness. I love all the little twists you've put in there, an excellent read!
Response from hrmny4etrnty2 (Author of Harry's Curiosity)
Sorry about the lateness in responding! Thank you so much for the review and I'm pleased you enjoyed it! 
Strange, but hot! Thanks!
Response from hrmny4etrnty2 (Author of Harry's Curiosity)
LoL! Thank you!
Hum, a little squicky here and there. I know you rated for dub-con, so I won't complain about that. As a whole, I understand what you were aiming for and I think you achieved it well :)
Response from hrmny4etrnty2 (Author of Harry's Curiosity)
Thank you very much!I will admit that it does have squicky moments. I didn't want to warn for non-con, since, in the end, you find out that Hermione was not doing anything against her will.But, in the same respect, I can see how the reader might be put-off while in the midst of the story, feeling that Harry is taking advantage of Hermione.As you can see, I was torn on how to "tag" this one. LoL!
I won't deny I liked your story very much. My first impression was that this is more or less the way it should have happened. On second thoughts, however, I realised there is something fundamentally wrong: It is sexist from two different points of view. It shows the prevailing idea that the male should be in power and ask whatever he wishes from his partner, and alternatively it pictures the female as manipulative, making the male believe he's in power, while he's actually not. Nice writing, though. I enjoyed it anyway.
Response from hrmny4etrnty2 (Author of Harry's Curiosity)
Thank you so very much!I've never been one who is really big when it comes to the subject of sexist wars. But, I do find your thoughts interesting.To be honest, I hadn't even contemplated sexist actions when writing this story.I view Harry as a hero who didn't always have the confidence he needed. He was thrust into a position he never asked for nor wanted. His magical abilities were powerful, but I don't think he always thought that way.In this story, I wanted him to take hold of some form of power. For me, Hermione is someone who has supported Harry no matter what. While I don't know if her character would readily agree to participate in the situation, I wanted to see what it would be like if she did.Of course, I don't see Hermione as a weak character. But she is in charge in so many aspects, I could see her wanting to let go, wanting to hand over the power to someone she knows needs to feel that. I feel, in Hermione's opinion, that she thinks if Harry feels like he has control over her, he would feel like he can have control over so much more in his life. I didn't feel her actions were manipulative so much since she wasn't completely doing it for her benefit, but for his.Does that make any sense or am I rambling? LoL!I do thank you for reading my story!
Ouuuuuu I adore the twist at the end! It makes for a powerful story. Well done!
Response from hrmny4etrnty2 (Author of Harry's Curiosity)
Thank you so very much!!
holy moly! that was a great twist at the end! thanks!
Response from hrmny4etrnty2 (Author of Harry's Curiosity)
Thank you for reading! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!