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Potions Under Duress Hero
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Hero

1: In Low Spirits

2: Unrelenting

3: A Shrewd Man

4: Homeward Bound

Hero

Hanagasume

47 Reviews   |   47 Ratings, 0 Likes, 31 Favorites )

Drama Angst Romance Potions Under Duress 8,549 Words 4 Chapters Complete
Albus Dumbledore Hermione Granger Severus Snape Minerva McGonagall Viktor Krum

A woman on the bridge in Hogsmeade piques Severus Snape’s interest. Everything, however, becomes complicated when he finds out the truth...OOC warning.

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Chapters (4)

Chapter 1: In Low Spirits

Chapter 2: Unrelenting

Chapter 3: A Shrewd Man

Chapter 4: Homeward Bound


About Hanagasume

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Hanagasume

Member Since 2008  |  31 Stories  |  Favorited by 246  |  119 Reviews Written  |  1,704 Review Responses

I write fan fiction: I am a big SS/HG shipper, but I also like RL/HG, DM/LL and tastefully written Dramione or Lumione on occasion. 


I photoshop: I use photoshop an awful lot to create my own banners and edit photos - I love my DSLR. 


I am a bibliophile: Paperback, hardcover, graphic novel, fiction or non-fiction. You name it, I read it and collect it.


SEVERUS SNAPE IS MY ONE TRUE LOVE!!!

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0/10

Bentwaters

Lovely. Enjoyed it very much. Thanks for sharing.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Hero)

Thanks for reviewing. 

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Hero)

Thanks for reviewing. 

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semicharmed

It's lose, not loose and Viktor.

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kimjo2

he was a hero.  glad you wrote an interpretation of it.  thanks so much

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Hero)

He was indeed :)Glad you liked it, and thanks! A~

9/10

gabi1791

Very sweet!

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Hero)

Thanks so much! Glad you liked it.A~

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sunny33

Good riddance to a bad Viktor! :)

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Hero)

Good riddance indeed :)Thanks for reviewing!A~

10/10

braye27

YES!  She finally came to her senses and decided that her place was back in Britain with Severus.  Albus and Minerva will be happy, I am happy, Hermione is happy, and our dear Potions Master is happy!It don't git no better 'n this!  8^)  Thanks, brandy!Beth

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Hero)

Yes, she finally did come to her senses.How could you not with Severus for ones hero? :)I'm am glad you enjoyed it.Thanks for reviewing, Beth!A~

10/10

Nessa

Bravo Bravo! Such a sweet ending. Albus and Minerva will be pleased.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Hero)

Hehe Thanks so much.I think everyone will be pretty pleased.Except for Viktor :)Thanks for the review!A~

10/10

sinbad

Good ending, but I am surprised that there wasn't more problems with Victor.  People that controlling and abusive usually don't let go that easily.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Hero)

Usually they don't let people go so easily.But usually the abused wouldn't fight back,and wouldn't have Severus Snape there to kick butt :)Thanks for reviewing!A~

10/10

sinbad

I hope this travesty (Hermione and Victor's relationship)  will end on a happy note, perhaps some poison is in order?

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Hero)

Hehe, I think death is too messy to deal with.And with Hermione the way she is, she wouldn't deal with it well.Thanks! A~

9/10

sinbad

This relationship Hermione is in sounds downright abusive.  Hopefully, Severus will make her see sense.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Hero)

It IS downright abusive.And Severus is the ONLY one who will be able to.Thanks for the review!A~

9/10

sinbad

Sad start, she must be very depressed to be suicidal.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Hero)

She was very depressed.But well, it was just lucky Severus was there.Thanks for reviewing!A~

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orm irian

You have a unique idea here, but I think you should put an OOC warning on this fic, as EVERYONE in it is OOC with respect to canon.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Hero)

Hehe thanks.I might just do that. Thanks for reviewing.A~

10/10

snitchette

Everyone needs a hero in their life. I'm glad she found hers and that all is well in the end.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Hero)

Hehe, yep we do indeed.Severus is really great for Hermione in this.Thanks for reviewing!A~

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Clairvoyant

You are a master of the happy ending, Brandy.  *Sigh*

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Hero)

Why thank you very much :)*bows*I'm glad you enjoyed it.Thanks for reviewing!A~

10/10

bellus_extraneus

This was a very touching story. It's hard to read about suffering, and to talk about abuse, but you've captured it quite nicely. I love Severus' emotion in this! Lovely as always!

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Hero)

I'm glad you thought so.It is very difficult to write about these things.Hermione in this story is quite lucky to have Severus.Not enough abused women have people to turn to.Thanks so much!A~

10/10

MidnightKnight

Oh finally Hermione chooses what is best for her and stands up for herself! I knew she could do it. Viktor is a terrible brute, and it's such a relief she is finally free of him. Great little story! Any chance of a continuation?

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Hero)

Yes, she finally worked up the courage.And was quite lucky to have Severus. I don't think I could continue, purely out of fear.I don't want to ruin what it is.Thanks though, and thanks for reviewing!A~

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mom7knox

Hey - nice job - Yeah Sev!!

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Hero)

Hehe thanks.Sev always gets his girl :)Thanks for the review!A~

10/10

braye27

OMG!  I hope Severus' connection to Hermione will allow him to know what she has just experienced at the hands of her brutal husband.  How can she not leave Viktor?  Severus will protect her, and he will cherish her.  As bad as Viktor thinks he is, he would not stand a chance against Severus.This situation is too awful to continue.   Something must change, but will Hermione have the strength to tell Severus that she is ready to go home?Another fine chapter!Beth

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Hero)

Knowing Severus, he probably already knows about the abuse she suffers. And it is true, she does want to leave, but sometimes its not just as easy as all that. More to come very soon, and hopefully your questions will all be answered. Thanks for reviewing, Beth!A~

10/10

braye27

Will Hermione listen to what Severus has to say?  How will she react to knowing that he thinks enough of her to make this long trip to "save her from herself?"  I hope all will go well, but somehow I don't think one visit will do more than plant the seed... but even that is a beginning.Good chapter.Beth

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Hero)

We will have to wait and see :(Sometimes people are just too stubborn to see a bad thingespecially in front of their face.Thanks!A~

10/10

braye27

Oh, please, Hermione can't leave Britain.  Surely Severus can make her see how terrible it would be to throw away all of her dreams because her husband can't make his own dreams a reality.  Moving to America will not change Victor Krum, but it will surely change Hermione!Nice start!Beth

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Hero)

Unfortunately, she did :( It's such a shame when a woman gets pushed around,and when she lets it happen.Thanks for reviewing!A~

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kimjo2

somehow that seems to suit victor's character.  great update.  thanks so much

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Hero)

Hehe, yep he's a bastard!Glad you are liking this!Thanks for reviewing!A~

10/10

makaem

I'm surprised Snape let her leave.  But short of holding her against her will, I guess there isn't a lot he can do. I'm glad you are working with this subject matter.  I think it is a lot more common than people realize and there is  a tendency to dismiss a controlling boyfriend's behavior as something that is imagined.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Hero)

It comes a a sort of personal topic.I've had a lot of friends in similar situations with partners. And it's true, Snape would never force her,especially when Viktor forces her the way her does.Thanks for reviewing! A~

10/10

snitchette

Please Sev, Do something to help her. I fear she might not bear that for much longer.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Hero)

Don't worry, Sev would never let anything happenif he could help it. Thanks for reviewing! A~

10/10

MidnightKnight

Perfect chapter. Love, drama and Angst. Viktor is a bastard, and Severus is a god. Poor Hermione is just so weak. I eagerly await more!

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Hero)

You've nailed it in one there.Thanks so much for  reviewing! A~

10/10

bellus_extraneus

Viktor is a brute. Poor Hermione is lost, and Severus is totally lost to her :) Interesting! Keep it up!

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Hero)

He is indeed lost to her, and Viktor is a moron. Thanks so much for reviewing! A~

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