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Saturday Night Drabbles No Smoking Allowed
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No Smoking Allowed

sunny33

18 Reviews   |   18 Ratings, 0 Likes, 13 Favorites )

Erotica Drabble/100-Word Slash Saturday Night Drabbles 675 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Lucius needs to be taught a lesson. There are some things you just don't do whilst indulging in a threesome.

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sunny33

Member Since 2008  |  129 Stories  |  Favorited by 689  |  8,383 Reviews Written  |  8,235 Review Responses

Hello all,  I am a 53 year old from NZ.  Although SSHG is how I started and still my main pairing, I'll give pretty much any pairing a try, whether it be reading or writing.  Sev and Herms need a bit of variety at times. ;)

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Ljpjcg

That was just so whoa.  Fanning myself right now. 

Response from sunny33 (Author of No Smoking Allowed)

:D 

10/10

sevibaby

Leave it to Severus and Hermione to come up with a sutable punishment for Lucius.  Danm I wish I where Hermione.  Oh well.

Response from sunny33 (Author of No Smoking Allowed)

In your dreams, maybe? ;)

10/10

Hellsvampireguardian

I am sure he has learned his lesson, interesting punishment

Response from sunny33 (Author of No Smoking Allowed)

Maybe he will behave, maybe he won't... ;)

10/10

Anonymous

Another menage-a-trois?  you need to expand your horizons.  bring on the giant squid!

Author's Response: I'll leave that to you, dear. :)

10/10

chivalric

Lovely! A threesome where, for a change, not the woman is in the middle - very hot, dear!

Response from sunny33 (Author of No Smoking Allowed)

Thanks! :)

10/10

ApollinaV

OH FABOO!  I love you my dear.  Have I told you that recently?  I should be singing your praises every damn day.  I didn't see this immediately, and it was just mentioned to me offhandedly.  And I'm Soooo glad.  YUM!  I want some.  And the retribution was so perfect.  You are gifted my dear.  Have I mentioned I love you? Yes?  Ach, worth mentioning again and again.  Just faboo!  -AV

Response from sunny33 (Author of No Smoking Allowed)

Love you too, AV! :)

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MollysSister

Silly Lucius thinking he can smoke anywhere they want. Too bad he wasnt hit with a breath freshing charm as well!

Response from sunny33 (Author of No Smoking Allowed)

Now there's a thought :)

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silverdoe

mmm love LM/HG/SS threesomes

Response from sunny33 (Author of No Smoking Allowed)

LOL. silver! :)

10/10

luvsev

Mmm, very nice. Definately a good lesson for Lucius to learn.

Response from sunny33 (Author of No Smoking Allowed)

I think he repented! :)

0/10

kimjo2

cute and hot!  thanks

Response from sunny33 (Author of No Smoking Allowed)

Thanks, kimjo! :)

10/10

KingPig

Ooooo, saucy! Oh Severus, Lucius... I smoke in bed... I need to learn a lesson, perhaps?

Response from sunny33 (Author of No Smoking Allowed)

I'll send them over! ;)

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morgaine_dulac

If THAT's the punishment, I'll start smoking in bed as well!!/M

Response from sunny33 (Author of No Smoking Allowed)

Now why doesn't that surprise me? :P

Response from morgaine_dulac (Reviewer)

Sigh, you know me far too well by now, sunny ;-)

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salvamea

is there a more pleasant way to "learn the lesson"`?you were very very kind to him.though the treatening before was quite severe. ouch.

Response from sunny33 (Author of No Smoking Allowed)

Call it the carrot, rather than the stick! :)

10/10

Sampdoria

Oh, I just love the threesome of Hermione, Severus and Lucius, it is such a wonderful combination:-)) Loved the story, thank you for sharing!

Response from sunny33 (Author of No Smoking Allowed)

Thanks! :)

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rhiannon113

Too funny. =]  soon there will be no place left for us poor smokers!!!

Response from sunny33 (Author of No Smoking Allowed)

LOL.  Poor dear, do you feel picked on? :)

10/10

snitchette

I think Lucius is lucky. His punishment for bad habits is quite gentle if you ask me.

Response from sunny33 (Author of No Smoking Allowed)

It certainly could have been worse! :)

10/10

isalie

InstantFav!You had me after the first 5 lines.The rest was even better.Do they offer their services on other addictions as well? I chew my nails, you know.

Response from sunny33 (Author of No Smoking Allowed)

I'll send them a memo... :)

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PiperKirby

Smoking, such a nasty, smelly habit.  Glad to see the wizarding world has a much better way of getting people to quit:  the Severus-Hermione patch.

Response from sunny33 (Author of No Smoking Allowed)

Attach them to clean, dry skin and leave on all day... ;)

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