This is the first peice of original fiction I've ever read online, and I think this is a good story to start with. I like how you really captured the moment. I should tell you, I extremely dislike running. I was the kid who always was the one in the back of the line in elementary school gym class, and since then, I've always hated running with a burning desire. However, you really captured the character well, showing running is a personal art rather than a performing art. I can definitely put th echaracter's emotions into my emotions when I do well in the things I enjoy or excell at. This was a really great story! 

I know this was not your intention, but I found myself drawing a more personal analogy ... another 'race' of sorts, another challenge.  I would say that was a compliment, for if a writer can get the reader to personalize the story, it has been successful (and I don't run; probably would fall flat on my face).

I also want to add that I am happy to see a short story. I was just wondering how I could encourage more original stories, and there you were.  ;)  I was very happy to get the e-mail that you posted something new.

So... everyone knows that I have a degree in English... (Literature nerd here...) Tell me. Why did I come back to read this again and start wondering if there is something else? You know I like to read other messages into things. Many things spring to mind now. It's just a race! She's talking about life! She's dying and being brought back. That kind of stuff. Wanna put me at ease? lol dork!Southern

I can almost hear the feet hitting the ground, the heavy breathing, and can nearly feel my legs aching. Good description.

Amazing