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sunny33An SSHG interpretation of a six word novel.
ReviewedA/N: In the 1920s, Ernest Hemingway bet ten dollars that he could write a complete story in just six words. He wrote: "For Sale: baby shoes, never worn." He won the bet. This is my version. Thanks go to ladyinthecloak for her advice.
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"I do."
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Latest 25 Reviews for Six Words
28 Reviews | 5.0/10 Average
Very interesting, I have never read anything like that and I doubt that I will again.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Six Words)
I just wanted to see if I could do it. :)
Anonymous
retch
Author's Response: I have a pill for that.
Anonymous
That's so... profound.
Author's Response: I'm deep, man. Real deep.
Anonymous
Ok, now we're talking. Can we have lamb?
Author's Response: Why not?
Anonymous
*sob*
Author's Response: Have a tissue. No, I don't want it back, it's got your snot all over it. Ewww!
Anonymous
Yawn!
Author's Response: *poke* WAKE UP!
than Hemingway himself. Oops 4 words weren't enought so I added 2 more. I hope you don't mind.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Six Words)
Six words were the original idea anyway, so you were perfect! :)
I ponders for a moment to decide what I wanted to tell you. Since you chose to be consice I thought I should do the same. So you'll find out by reading one word for one chapter, strating... next chapter.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Six Words)
Very clever! :)
You rock! "If brevity ...blah,blah, blah" then you are surely the wittiest around for some time! Thank you so much for all your hard work and for the grand smile!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Six Words)
LOL Thanks, mom for all your reviews. You're the tops! :)
That was brilliantly clever... what a good idea!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Six Words)
Thanks,
Response from sunny33 (Author of Six Words)
. Now it's your turn! :)
This is a beta reader's dream story lol.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Six Words)
LOL. We should encourage more! :)
oh! Who are they?
Response from sunny33 (Author of Six Words)
The character listed at the top tells you who is speaking in each chapter. :)
clever. and short, so i could fit it into my schedule nicely. :D
Response from sunny33 (Author of Six Words)
Short is good! :)
Awwwww. :)Enemies.Friends.Lovers.Forever and ever.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Six Words)
Brilliant, lyn! :)
I've never read anything like this before, but I like it!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Six Words)
Thanks! :)
Fight. Reconciliation. Marriage. Nice.4 words for my review.5 words of encouragement: Go work on The Runner. ;-)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Six Words)
It's with the beta. Clever review! :)