This was awesome.

Oddly realistic in its straightforward nature.

Very passionate tale!  Nicely done.  :D

Provacative - what an intriguing quandry for Hermione. I can see how this would be difficult for her but I'm so glad she found hope for more in the end. Faking it was so kind of her - he deserves that tenderness. Sometimes you just gotta do it, and they are usually clueless, so if it makes them feel good...why not?

what a great job you did with this prompt - your characterization of HG's conflict is so interesting and resolved so well with her inner dialoge!  Wonderful!!

It's wonderful attempt at the prompt if you ask me. It's very generous of her to fake her orgasm so he wouldn't feel guilty for not lasting very long. And her last thought is giving me hope for the furture, contrasting with despair there was at the beginning for both of them.

I really enjoyed this, very sweet.

I like the dark sides to Hermione conscience as she considers her options. Well done!

Lovely answer to the prompt, Kelly! :)

Very erotic.  Even with the faked O.  And it so nicely hints at more.  I also happen to like the seedier set ups - forbidden knowledge traded for carnal knowledge.  Well done.

cool!  thanks

Well done, Kelly babe! :)

Yay! I'm glad that she finally stopped fighting herself and just gave in, because when she did, something beautiful happened. =)

Very nice! I like the disjointed nature of it. He demands, she obliges, she thinks he'll be angry or cold, he's nice...Really kept me on my toes!

I actually had butterflies in my stomch reading this. I could identify with Hermione so much I felt like I was there!! Fantastic! Thank you, you lovely lady for writing this and sharing *will have pleasent dreams tonight*

I love the way you've answered the prompt! It could have gone a million ways I imagined, but the way you did, I'd never imagined. Absolutely lovely!