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Saturday Night Drabbles The Orchard
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The Orchard

1: The Orchard

The Orchard

teshara

13 Reviews   |   13 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Erotica Drabble/100-Word Slash Saturday Night Drabbles 911 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Gellert finally realizes that Albus likes him in *that* way.

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Chapter 1: The Orchard


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10/10

snitchette

Yep I can see that he is not completely honest with Albus, but rather try to manipulate him by faking attraction, maybe even love. That's disgusting. Albus is no weak thing, but being used in that way ... I'm sad for him.

0/10

lyn_f

Wow, how neat!  Gellert ... brrrr, makes me feel sorry for Albus.  I suppose to G's credit - and you're right for pointing this out, tesh - he does try to protect Albus in the end from Voldybutt's final desecration.Nice snapshot.

Response from teshara (Author of The Orchard)

Thanks! In the end, I felt sorry for Gellert. I think he finally figured out where he went wrong with Albus, if not with everything else he'd done.

10/10

Dreamy_Dragon

Here via Chivalric's rec.
Very steamy, and I like that you leave it open whether Gellert was purely manipulative or whether he had feelings for Albus in return. Well done!

Response from teshara (Author of The Orchard)

Thank you! They're such an interesting pair!

10/10

slasher454

That was fantastic! 

Response from teshara (Author of The Orchard)

thanks!

10/10

luvsev

Yummy, I love the slashy goodness. This was totally hot.

Response from teshara (Author of The Orchard)

Thanks!

0/10

rhiannon113

Though yours is extremely well written, I really hope that Gellert actually loved Albus in return, rather than merely using his affections. Very original!

Response from teshara (Author of The Orchard)

I was thinking about all the angles on this and then it was pointed out to me that Gellert died protecting Albus' grave from desecration. He had to have known Voldemort could just rip the information from his mind and kill him. Heck, if he's offered to join in the fight Voldemort might just have sprung him and they live happily ever after in their reign of terror... but he didn't. He would rather have his mind raped and then die, rather than give Voldemort the information to crack open Dumbledore's grave willingly.I have been swooning ever since. Maybe it was a selfish love, but I think it was there.

10/10

chivalric

fucking brilliant, pardon my language. I am a big fan of slash, and that was very much in character and hot on top. Well done - more, please!

Response from teshara (Author of The Orchard)

Thank you!!

10/10

kittylefish

i really like this.  you capture the manipulative aspect of the situation very well, and yet it's still really hot.  which - i mean, it's dumbledore, so - very well done!

Response from teshara (Author of The Orchard)

I have a soft spot for young Dumbles... :DThanks!

0/10

Anonymous

Oh... poor Albus. 

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morgaine_dulac

The things we do for lust and love ...A very nice piece. Thank you for sharing. /M

Response from teshara (Author of The Orchard)

thanks!

10/10

KellyH

Owww Very good indeed.  From Albus wanting to love him to Gellbert uses his body to make him believe his mutual affections. So twisted .... so good to read!

Response from teshara (Author of The Orchard)

poor albus

0/10

sunny33

Well, that was enlightening all round. :)

Response from teshara (Author of The Orchard)

haha! thanks!

10/10

mia madwyn

Excellent. I'm so glad this got recced and I happened to notice the rec!

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