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Forbidden Forest Secret
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luvsev

7 Reviews   |   7 Ratings, 0 Likes, 6 Favorites )

Erotica Slash Forbidden Forest 970 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Luna Lovegood

Luna has a secret.

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Member Since 2008  |  71 Stories  |  Favorited by 76  |  664 Reviews Written  |  948 Review Responses

I am a 20-something-year-old who admits to not knowing or having everything figured out, beta, foodie, bibliophile, and dabble in art. Most days I may be found in the kitchen indulging in the culinary arts.

I adore a multitude of pairings in the fandom, though I am partial to: SS/HG, DM/HP, NT/HG, PP/MB, SS/HG/LM, Snupin, and LL/HG.

 


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9/10

norwegianeyes

 super awesome!

Response from luvsev (Author of Secret)

Thanks!

10/10

Mazzy

I've never read femslash before. To be honest, I saw "Forbidden Forest", "Luna had a sec..." <-- that was all that showed up on the TPP main page, and "MA(NC-17)"  and clicked. :) I figured it'd be Luna/Lupin. Imagine my surprise when Hermione showed up on the scene. LOL

Anyway, having nothing to compare it too, I can't exactly critque content, but I can say that it was very well written. I got a little squicked at the squishy bits but I suppose that's to be expected. LOL All the same, it introduced me to a genre that I probably would have otherwise never read. And if I'm not mistaken, don't you usually write Het also? Specifically SS/HG?? If so then really well done at exploring something new.

Response from luvsev (Author of Secret)

I do usually write SS/HG, so this was an entirely new thing for me. It was my first ever attempt at femmeslash, and I went about it the same way I do het, only I substituted M/F for F/F.

Also, thank you for your compliment on my writing and trying something new. It always pleases me to no end to have fellow authors/readers comment on my work and let me know their true thoughts. =)

0/10

morgaine_dulac

Very nice!

Response from luvsev (Author of Secret)

Thanks!

10/10

peppermint

I am such a lucky birthday girl! Absolutely wonderful - I loved it!

Response from luvsev (Author of Secret)

I am so glad that you loved it! I was worried that you wouldn't. =)

0/10

Bora

Oh yum! Very nicely written, and pretty darn hot, too!

Response from luvsev (Author of Secret)

Thanks, I am glad that you thought it was hot. I've never written anything like this before and I am pleased that my first attempt at femmeslash wasn't a failure.

10/10

Hellsvampireguardian

Very well done.

Response from luvsev (Author of Secret)

=) glad you liked it!

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

What a lovely gift. There's not nearly enough "female" action going on around here. :) Glad to see it.

Response from luvsev (Author of Secret)

Thanks, SW. I love writing little presents for my friends as long as they tell me their birthday and the pairing of their choice. I definately agree, there is not a lot of femmeslash out there--especially this pairing. It's one of the reasons I was so eager to try to write this. =)

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