Well done. That really felt like everything was tied up by the end.

"she grazed her lips just so against the underside of her jaw,"  I think you had a couple of pronoun mixups in the first half of the fic (Otherwise I think this last quote would be physically impossibly), but no worries- actually, they almost made it better, because I had to stop and reread a bit.Tremendously hot, a little sad, but like casting off a knitting project, you tied everything off neatly and it feel complete.

Beautifully written, it made me sad but I hope they will find each other again later. I will definitely look for and read more of your work.

wonderful!  and beautifully written.  thanks

It was clever how that felt complete, even though no closer relationship developed! :)

What a beautiful piece of writing - it moved me no end (I still have the tears in my eyes as I write.)  One night with SS would certainly be enough for me!  Bittersweet as this was, I will think of it and smile as I carry on with the rest of my day.  Thank you so much for sharing; I will make a point of reading more of your work now  :-)

Poetic... It's a beautiful stand alone piece but part of me can't help but wish for more because they deserve it, he deserves it.

Wow - what beautiful scene and character development - love the internal landscape of Snape especially - thank you so much for your hard work - this is outstranding!

You know this is hopeful and sad at the same time.  Their coming together brings hope yet, it is sad because, at least, he seems to believe the one night is all they will ever have.

Very sweet story. Great work!

So beautifully done. I cried.