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Blessed
savine_snape16 Reviews | 6.19/10 (16 Ratings, 0 Likes, 5 Favorites )
Severus stands watching his wife counting his blessings.
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What can I say a 30 something mother of 1 who works as a clinical chemist in a path lab and has a 'thing', if its possible to have a 'thing' for a character, for a certain Potions Master.
RL has stalled the plot bunnies and I've no idea if/when I'll feel like writing again.
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This is absolutely sweet. I love Snape being overprotective.
Response from savine_snape (Author of Blessed)
*grins*I love writing Possesive!Snape.Thanks for leaving a comment.
Well, he'd never ever let anyone see how vulnerable he is inside. "...I am merely checking that our son is safe." Good thing his wife is seeing through his defenses :-)What a nice snap shot.
Response from savine_snape (Author of Blessed)
Indeed, Severus struggles with opening up, even to Hermione. She's learnt over the years to understand the small gestures he makes that lets Hermione know he loves her.Thanks for taking time to leave a comment. :D
WONDERFUL! I'm so glad He is happy now!! Well done!
Response from savine_snape (Author of Blessed)
Thanks,
Response from savine_snape (Author of Blessed)
.Severus deserves to be happy, and I have no doubt that Hermione knows exactly how to handle her man.
Even though I am not a huge fan of SS/HG, that was a lovely piece.
Response from savine_snape (Author of Blessed)
*grins*I'm so glad that you enjoyed this piece.Thanks for leaving a comment too.
That's quite lovely. Well done, you!
Response from savine_snape (Author of Blessed)
I'm thrilled you found this lovely.Thank you for taking time to leave a comment. :D
That was very cute and touching...wonderfully written. Keep up the great work. ~Jen
Response from savine_snape (Author of Blessed)
Thank you so much, Jen.I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this.Maz
I loved this! What you had to say about friendship is very true. If Lily had truly been his friend, she would have never left.
Response from savine_snape (Author of Blessed)
Thank you so much.I'm thrilled that you liked this. I'm not a Lily hater, but what Severus says is true, if Lily wasn't already drifting away from him, she would have understood why he retaliated in the way he did after James humiliated him by the lake.Thanks for taking the time to leave a comment.
lovely. your discourse on friendship was spot on especially re: saint lilly. some friend. thanks so much
Response from savine_snape (Author of Blessed)
Thanks for taking time to leave a comment.I'm thrilled that you enjoyed this. :D
Beautiful story and I agree... the imagery is lovely. I know you classified this as OOC but I'm not so sure. Of course, he's not being snarky as you have written him here, so I can understand the classification. However, he is merely musing. Besides, there is a slight snark at the end when he says“I’m not watching you, Hermione; I am merely checking that our son is safe”. Great line - I think it's totally Snape. I suppose I am hearing his tone as well so I don't know.... I just think that we never really see Snape's thoughts even though we see a few of his memories. Obviously, there are few characters we really get to know outside of "the golden trio" and Snape is the one I am most interested in. This is how I stumbled on fanfic. I was a little irked with DH and searching for life after HP when I suddenly found myself, well...here. It's a whole different experience in the world of fanfiction, and thank god. If I were a writer, which I'm not as you can clearly see (it's hard enough to write these reviews and not worry about my appalling grammar, lol), I would nix that inane epilogue *rolls eyes and snorts* and rewrite the blasted ending at the very least. Sorry JK but I just don't know what you were thinking...Snape pining over a dead woman for 20 years just to bite it at the end? Hermione and Ron? Bubblegum epilogue? Ugh.*shutters* Since I am not however, a writer, I get my kicks reading what all of you lovely people so freely offer to those of us pining for more.Oooh, I think I went off on a little tangent there... sorry. Returning to my original thought, I'm not so sure that he isn't capable of thinking these things... admitting them or verbalizing them surley not-but pondering? I think it might be possible.Snape is by far my favorite character, so I've just been thinking about this a lot lately. I'm also really into SSHG and I guess you gave me a reason to "speak up". If there were a bashful/shy smilie I think I might put it here - feeling a bit unsure of how everyone might react...
Response from savine_snape (Author of Blessed)
Snape and Hermione are by far my favourite characters in Potterverse, mainly because I see so much of myself in them.I was disappointed with the end of DH too. At first I simply wrote for myself then I dipped my toes in the water over at the LJ community GrangerSnape100 and my confidence grew from there.
Thank you for saying you don't think Severus is out of character. In the last line I tried to portray that whilst Severus is happy with his lot in life now, the old defensive Snape still lurks below the surface.
*huggles* The GrangerSnape part of Potter Fandom is a welcoming bunch, there's quiet a group of us over on Live Journal, I'm over there with the same User Name, though most of my posts are Friends locked. It's the place where I try differant story ideas.
Thanks for leaving a comment. Reviews give writers a huge high.
A true friend forgives you when you seek forgiveness ... In you face, Lily Evans!Glad to see that Severus found happiness at last.Cheers. /M
Response from savine_snape (Author of Blessed)
I couldn't resist that line, it's very true and highlighted the fact that Lily really wasn't a good friend to young Severus.I'm so glad that you liked this.Thanks for leaving a comment, Sav :D
It is so lovely to see Severus' thoughts as he ponders his great good fortune. He has the love and the family he has always deserved. Well done, dear!Beth
Response from savine_snape (Author of Blessed)
Thanks, Beth.This piece wrote itself without me really thinking too much about it. I did scrap two other ideas but once I decided to us Severus POV it all came together.He does indeed have everything he deserves, a wife who loves him unconditionally and a son to nuture.I'm so glad that you like this piece, Beth I rarely feel confident writing from someones POV, third person is much easier for me to write.*hugs* Sav
nice job - lovely imagery and good word choice - thanks for your hard work
Response from savine_snape (Author of Blessed)
*blushes*Thank you for your lovely comments. I'm so glad that you enjoyed this, I don't normally write from someone's POV so this was an added challenge.Sav
Absolutely wonderful, really, truly, honestly, wonderful!!!
Response from savine_snape (Author of Blessed)
*blushes*Thank you so much!I'm so glad that you enjoyed this, and thanks for taking time to leave a comment. :D
Oh, that was sweet.
Response from savine_snape (Author of Blessed)
Thank you, adn thank you for the stars. :D