A Perfect World
Chapter 2 of 4
caughtinblackseyesCedric's perfect world is about to develop a serious crack.
ReviewedI own nothing and no one from Harry Potter, it all belongs Jo Rowlings. Many thanks to my beta freedachicken!
Harry had been trying to catch a glimpse of Cho Chang seated over at the Ravenclaw table and had just made rather shy eye contact when an unexpected jab to his side had him missing his mouth by a mile. Pumpkin juice spilled down the front of his uniform wetting his shirt and trousers.
Embarrassed, Harry quickly turned away, hoping that Cho hadn't seen, but the giggles coming from the vicinity of Cho and her friends dashed those hopes. Harry was going to murder Hermione. She'd just made him look like an arse in front of the girl who was featured in his dreams almost nightly, a welcome change from the nightmares that usually haunted him.
"Harry... Harry..." Hermione jabbed him once more when he failed to acknowledge her first attempt. "I've been thinking."
And, although Ron was perched a bit further down the Gryffindor table between Seamus and Dean, she and Harry had no problem hearing his comment. "What else is new?" Ron snorted into his spoon piled high with mashed potatoes.
Seamus giggled, the arse, and Dean remained silent.
"Seriously, Ronald," Hermione scolded him. "You could use a bit of thinking, you know. Not all of us have Quidditch on the brain or the all-consuming question of where we can get our hands on the next available biscuit."
Ron shrugged his shoulders, having bigger and better things on his mind, a treacle tart for a start. Ignoring Hermione was the best thing to do when she got all serious and stuff, which was pretty much all the time, so Ron spent a great deal of time ignoring her.
Turning away with a disgusted toss of her head, Hermione focused once more on Harry, who was giving his plate an inordinate amount of attention.
Ron actually wasn't communicating with Harry on a one-to-one basis, not since Harry's name had flown out of the Goblet. When it had happened, Hermione had been as incredulous as the rest of the school, but she'd believed Harry when he had said that he hadn't put his name in the Goblet. Ron had not.
Ron had told Hermione that as Harry's best mate he should have been told, or at least Harry could have helped Ron place his own name in a cup along side of Harry's. Jealousy was ugly business, and it was obvious that Ron was riddled with its poison.
Hermione thought Ron was a dunce of the highest order to believe such nonsense. When she had told him so, he had gotten angry and accused her of siding with Harry. For a few days, he had ignored her as well. To Hermione's singular dismay, she'd found she missed him!
She and Ron had mended fences, but when she had suggested he do the same with Harry, he would not be swayed. Harry was equally as adamant, stating that a true mate would never have believed the garbage spewed by the other students. Hermione had no good argument to Harry's statement because she agreed with him.
Reluctantly, Hermione realized that the idiots she called friends would need to work through this stupidity at their own pace and in their own way. Boys! She maintained good relations with both of them as long as the conversations they had singularly didn't veer toward the other.
Hermione caught Harry stealing what he probably assumed was a covert glance at Cho. Hermione grimaced inwardly. She had no idea what Harry saw in the Ravenclaw, other than her looks. She was stuck up, mean, and from what Hermione had observed in the library, a bit of a slag, too. Moreover, she was as far out of Harry's league as say... Hermione's gaze landed on a certain Hufflepuff, as Cedric was out of hers.
Dipping her spoon in the piping hot potato soup, Hermione spoke again, "I thought we'd practice the Summoning Charm this evening.
"Uh-huh," Harry distractedly replied.
Delicately sipping the fragrant soup, she licked her lips before saying, "We could use one of the old classrooms on the far side of the school. No one will bother us there."
"Right."
Slamming her spoon on the table, Hermione demanded in an exasperated tone, "Do you want my help with this, Harry, or not?"
Harry's messy, black-haired head swivelled around. "Well, yeah," he stated, looking confused, absently rubbing at his scar.
Hermione was filled with remorse. Here she was, virtually Harry's only friend, giving him grief just because he was ogling the girl he had a crush on. What was wrong with her?
If she had to be honest with herself, which Hermione generally was, she was somewhat jealous of the attention that Harry was giving to the older girl. It wasn't that Hermione had feelings for Harry, but it hurt that he'd rather look at Cho than listen to her, especially as she was trying to help keep him alive, for Merlin's sake!
"Sorry, 'Mione." Harry turned toward her giving her his undivided attention. Running a hand through his hair, he continued, "I've been a bit preoccupied."
Hermione gave his hand a comforting squeeze. Dragons were enough to distract any person, and she should stop being so selfish. Harry was her best friend, and he needed her now more than ever. Sure, Ron was her friend too, but it was different with him. More complicated. More confusing. And, if there was one thing Hermione couldn't tolerate, it was not understanding something.
Normally, she'd run to the library and research the problem, not leaving until she had the answer or until Pince tracked her down and threw her out. Still, Hermione knew this was different. Research wouldn't cover this particular problem.
Out of the corner of her eye, Hermione saw Ron leaning in their direction. Probably trying to figure out what they were up to. Well, bully for him! Hermione had no plans of clueing him in. After all, Ron was acting as if he wanted nothing to do with whatever was going on with Harry, so Hermione was going to honour those wishes and try not to look smug about the fact that he obviously was dying of curiosity.
"We'll need your invisibility cloak," Hermione continued, still keeping one eye on Ron. She pushed her bowl away and refused the sweet that Harry had offered after placing a substantial serving of pudding on his plate.
"Um, Hermione, do you think you could, you know?" With a wave of his hand, Harry indicated his damp clothes.
Hermione scanned the area around her to make sure no one was watching before giving a quick swish of her wand while whispering, "Scourgify."
Immediately Harry's wet garments were returned to their pristine and dry appearance.
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Cedric watched in amusement as Granger nonchalantly used a spell that most fourth years were just beginning to master. He was impressed by the ease in which she performed it and no one seemed the wiser.
Here was a witch others seemed to be underestimating; it was a curious thing, considering the professors sang her praises consistently. Oh, he knew that she was intelligent, everyone did, although he'd heard she had an irritating attitude and perhaps that was one of the reasons she was universally avoided by those not Sorted into her own House.
It was a shame really. It was true she wasn't much to look at, and since Cho had made those deprecating remarks, Cedric found himself observing Granger. He noticed how she practically stomped when she walked, especially when in a temper. It didn't even come close to the smooth glide of Cho's, but the movements of Granger's hands and wrists were extremely graceful when she was doing a well-executed spell.
Her hair was a catastrophe, there was no denying it, but he certainly didn't see the need to hex it all off as Cho had suggested. In addition, Cedric really admired how she would lift her pointed little chin high in the air, proclaiming to all that she had dignity and class in the face of whomever, usually Malfoy, was giving her grief. Most girls would have walked away in tears after being called the atrocious names Malfoy tended to spout from his filthy mouth, but not Granger, although it must have been eating her up inside.
She was strong, resilient, and she didn't give a damn what anyone thought of her, or that was the impression she gave off. Cedric wondered what she was really like. He had the urge to find that out first-hand, but that would raise a few eyebrows, and unfortunately, unlike Granger, he did care what people thought. It shamed him, but it was true.
Cedric, from a young age, had felt the pressure to be perfect. Perfect face, perfect actions, perfect grades, perfect athlete, and perfect friends. Cedric had all of those in his life right now, and attempting to befriend Granger would probably jeopardize his perfect little world.
She was a social pariah because people couldn't tolerate her know-it-all attitude. Too many of the other students thought Granger was a suck up, making them all look bad. As if they weren't enough strikes against her, she had to be one of the best mates of The-Boy-Who-Cheated to gain entrance to the tournament. Hell, even Weasley, who had been joined at the hip to Potter since first year, thought he was a cheat!
Granger remained a staunch and loyal friend when most would have dropped Potter like a hot potato with all the gossip and unpleasantness. Disaster dogged that kid's footsteps, and Granger continued to stride right along side him.
Cedric was envious of such diligent devotion and couldn't keep from wondering if his mates would have stuck by him if he'd been walking in Potter's shoes. Would they have turned their noses up at all and sundry, ignored the gossip and innuendo? Would they have grasped his hand in a tenacious grip and marched off pulling him along while blanketing him in safe comfort?
He was envious, terribly so, and yet for all his envy, for all his admiration of her courage and solidarity to Potter in the face of adversity, for all of that... he still didn't have the courage to follow through with what he really wanted to do. And, what Cedric really wanted to do was get to know her better. Nevertheless, he couldn't befriend her, not with the looming possibility that do so, would be the end of all he'd worked so hard to achieve. For the first time ever, Cedric began to question whether being perfect and living in a perfect world was so perfect after all.
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An update, YAYS! You made my morning, especially as there are so few Cedric/Hermione stories out there. Glad to see Hermione is still pushing to get Harry to tell Cedric about the dragons, even if he does already know by overhearing them. I can imagine what Cho will be like when she finds out Cedric will be studying with Hermione, I'm sure she'll get far nastier about our girl than she already is. What a witch ... and NOT in a good way. I look forward to the next update!
Response from caughtinblackseyes (Author of Diggory In Deep)
Oh, you'll get to see Cho's reaction in the next chapter *rubs hands together eagerly*I made your morning? That's so sweet, thank you! It's the whole principle of the thing, Harry telling Cedric even though Cedric already knows; isn't it.Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Hi! I just found this story and I'm absolutely loving it. Cho is SUCH a catty thing, no wonder Cedric's eye is straying elsewhere. I'm totally looking forward to seeing what happens next!
Response from caughtinblackseyes (Author of Diggory In Deep)
I actually just got a chapter of this story back from my beta today and I will be posting it here within a day or two. I'm glad you like it and thanks for reading and reviewing.
good chapter, I like the idea that Hermione was the one to want to tell Cedric about the dragons. I doubt a boy with so much on his mind would have thought to do that, at least not the ones I went to school with (smiles). More please..............Joanne.
Response from caughtinblackseyes (Author of Diggory In Deep)
LOL, boys can be pretty darn clueless, can't they? The next chapter is currently with my beta. ;O)
I really like this story!! It's so fun to picture R-Pat & Emma W as the happy couple. Squee!!!!
Response from caughtinblackseyes (Author of Diggory In Deep)
I'm glad you like it! Yea, Rob and Emma would look sweet besdie each other, wouldn't they? (lol) Both are the cutest people. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Thanks for writing a Cedric story, there are not enough of them around. I like the idea of the Cedric/Hermione pairing. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Your a good writer, keep it up..... Joanne.
Response from caughtinblackseyes (Author of Diggory In Deep)
What a lovely compliment, thank you. I'm a huge fan of Cedric/Hermione pairings too, had he lived in the books/movie he might have come to notice all of our girls fine attributes.I actually have up to 11 chapters of this story completed. The next chapter is at my beta and when I get it back I will be posting it.Thanks so much for reading and for your kind review!
Response from austoz (Reviewer)
11 chapters........great I can't wait! I too think that if Cedric had lived he might have started to appreciate Hermione more as she became older. It's such a shame he died. His good character was used well by J.K Rowling to get across the point of the evil of Voldermort and the injustice and senselessness of the death of someone with such potential. For me, the film brought that home more than the book did because I thought the actor (Robert Pattinson) gave the character such presence on screen and captured Cedric's personality well. He puts a face to the character so that now I really hate watching him die.........Looking forward to reading more of your story, Joanne.
Response from caughtinblackseyes (Author of Diggory In Deep)
Well, I must confess to having a bit of a crush on Rob Pattinson and it all started with him playing Cedric (lol)! He can put his face as close to mine as he'd like any day of the week. *wink wink*
I really like the direction you're taking. It's a real "Girl Next Door" kind of feeling. I admire that Cedric is the sort of person who is not into the superficial. Lovely. Can't wait for more.
Response from caughtinblackseyes (Author of Diggory In Deep)
Thank-you! The next chapter is currently with my beta and after I get it back I will be submitting it here. The next chapter has Cedric discovering even more interesting things about Hermione.I like your reference to the "Girl Next Door" theme. I hadn't thought of it quite like that but now that you mention it that theme runs through out the story.I'm glad you like it and thanks for reviewing!!
I like the way you portray Cedric here. That's just how most people feel I'd think when they are putting on airs. Deep down they know it's wrong and costing them something in the end. :)
Response from caughtinblackseyes (Author of Diggory In Deep)
Thank-you. ;o) Cedric is, at heart, a good lad but all those expectations just keep piling up and up. In the next chapter we'll see more of why he admires Hermione so much. This chapter had more to do with her loyalty and percieved personality but the next will have more to do with his admiration of her magical abilities. I'm just waiting to get it back from my beta freedachicken but I'm also petitioning for a beta from this site too because I'd like to post my Sirius/Hermione story on here as well and my present beta has chosen not to beta the new story because she's not familiar with that pairing.Sorry, I tend to ramble. Anyway, thank so much for the lovely review.
This is a really interesting take on things. I like the way you've looked at Cedric's point of view after the goblet incident, and the whole Cho romance seems quite comical so far. Aso loved Scott and Hermione's reactions to Cedric's predicament ;-) Poor Cedric! I'm really looking forward to seeing how this story develops, and hoping it won't have a horribly sad ending...how closely are you sticking to canon? Okay, you don't have to answer that, I guess I'll wait and see... Anyway, great first chapter!
Response from caughtinblackseyes (Author of Diggory In Deep)
I'm here to tell you that cedric DOES NOT DIE!! I couldn't possibly kill our sweetheart, that's just wrong. You'll be seeing more of Cedric's friend Scott Summers, boy will you ever but not as much as Susan Bones.(LMAO)
hmmm
Response from Lkmaide (Reviewer)
Sorry, I hit a wrong key and sent before I was finished. . I often wondered why JKR chose a Hufflepuff (and I was sorted Badger myself) to be the sacrifice at the end of Goblet. I know she wouldn't kill off Ron or Hermione, but I wonder @ diggeory
Response from caughtinblackseyes (Author of Diggory In Deep)
I've done some research on badger characteristics and here's what I've come up with: They are known to be enornously protective and fierce of their young. In the book and movie, when transported to the graveyard Cedric immediately went in to protective mode of Harry who was younger and percieved as less able to defend himself.Thay are very determined and loyal, as we already know. What's really interesting is that in one article I've read there is a sentance in there that made go "HUH?" Here it is:"The habitat characteristics that emerged as having the most influence on Badger social group densitiy were the "diggability" of the soils and the length of hedge rows."Now doesn't that just reek of Cedric Diggory? We have part where it states that it emerged as having the most influence on Badger society... wasn't Cedric Hufflepuff's Golden Boy and didn't his silent bravery and fierce and loyal capabilities not only make in one of the most popular people at Hogwarts but also made him The original Champion of Hogwarts. Ands that whole diggability word, well come on I don't need to elaboarte on how much that sounds like Diggory (lol). And the hedge rows can definately put the maze on ones mind as it was made of high hedges, smack dab on?!So with all of this maybe Cedric was the natural choice to give up is life, as I said, badgers take on nemesis often twice to three times their size if one of their young are being threatened (again Harry). Cedric was all a good and wonderful Hufflepuff should be and we will never forget him because in reality not only was he one of the first known casualties of the war, through his death awareness of Voldemort's return cam to light. Cedric's death though extremely heart breaking and sad, was not in vain!
I love it when an unsung hero rises from the dead to star in his own little homage!! Can't wait to see where you're taking this!
Response from caughtinblackseyes (Author of Diggory In Deep)
I was beyond upset when Cedric was killed off. I think you're exactly right, he is an unsung hero but beleive me in this story I'll be singing his praises (and not so praiseworthy behavior) to the high heavens. Thanks for reviewing!