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Never Say Never Chapter 5: Listen
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Never Say Never

1: Lily

2: Twenty Years

3: Tease

4: Hate

5: Listen

6: Past

7: Hint

8: Unrequited

9: Goodbye

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Never Say Never

Chapter 5 of 9

belle4life

Response to the Lily Challenge on grangersnape100. Hermione helps Severus move on.

Angst Drabble/100-Word Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 1,136 Words 9 Chapters Complete
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“So if I understand this correctly, and I promise I am not trivializing any of this, you have spent your entire life first chasing after the girl who married your worst enemy from school and then after her death you spent your life being tortured and abused and betrayed by everyone because you feel guilty. Does this about sum things up?”

His only answer was a nod of his drooped head.

“Now I want you to do something for me. Alright?”

“What is that?”

“I want you to listen and open your heart, just the tiniest bit. That is all.”

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Thanks to lulabelle72 for the beta.

Please review and let me know what you think.

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Latest 25 Reviews for Never Say Never

93 Reviews  |  6.2/10 Average

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh, this was a really nice sweet story. I've enjoyed it very much.

10/10

beaweasley2

Oh, this was a really nice sweet story. I've enjoyed it very much.

10/10

Anonymous

How did I not know you are belle4life here? Jeez all petey, I'm slow sometimes!

This was great work on your part. I'm glad to see you're giving it a larger audience here at TPP.

Author's Response: hahahaha that just made my day lol
i have my awesome slow moments too, don't worry you are not alone!!

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kimjo2

yeah!  how come?  she wasn't worth it.  thanks for the update

Response from belle4life (Author of Never Say Never)

your welcome, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

10/10

snitchette

Well, that was... if he doesn't understand her meaning ther, he's really hopeless.

Response from belle4life (Author of Never Say Never)

I know, right? clueless men lol

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morgaine_dulac

The know-it-all has a point there!

Response from belle4life (Author of Never Say Never)

as she usually does lol gotta love being a know-it-all

10/10

debjunk

The woman's got a point.  Hopefully, Severus will recognize it.

Response from belle4life (Author of Never Say Never)

hopefully! *crosses fingers*

10/10

Nessa

She isn't a know-it-all for nothing!

Response from belle4life (Author of Never Say Never)

tee hee totally!!!

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mom7knox

nice characterization of SS - acidic volleys to cover - love HG's bluntness - thank you so much for your hard work - can't wait to see more

Response from belle4life (Author of Never Say Never)

awww thank you, you are so sweet!!

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sunny33

You tell him! :)

Response from belle4life (Author of Never Say Never)

yeah!!! go Hermione, go Hermione!!lol thanks for reading!

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kimjo2

if she even thot about it, she would.  thanks

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morgaine_dulac

Oh! That last line! Wonderful!

/M

10/10

snitchette

I'm glad she reached that statement as it is exactly my thinking on the matter. I just hope he will listen to her.

10/10

FlittterKat

Yes, I can see him reacting defensively and attacking when he feels uncomfortable with the topic. I like how Hermione just wants him to be happy ~though we all want him to be happy with her~ and to move on but not necessarily forget Lily. I'm enjoying your drabble and look forward to your next post.

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azulkan2

Amen to that Hermione.  I could never understand why he would love someone that really treated him like crap.
Looking forward to the next part.

10/10

debjunk

She's so right.  He needs to definitely move on... with anybody at this point, but hopefully with Hermione ultimately. 

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mom7knox

really nicely done - again!  Thanks for sharing your work - can't wait to see more

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morgaine_dulac

A rather big request, isn't it? /M

10/10

neelix

I love these little snippets into their lives. Interested to know what she has to say!

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debjunk

Oh, why'd you leave it there?  Giant tease!

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mikimoto

No one likes to hear their life reduced to what can be put in a nutshell.  It trivializes them.

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kimjo2

yessss.  listen, you big dummy!  great update.  thanks

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sunny33

You tell him, girl! :)

10/10

snitchette

Will he be able to do so? *ponders* Will he want to? I hope so.

10/10

kirroel

продуууууууу!!!!!!!!!!

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