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Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 Life Debt Repaid
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Life Debt Repaid

1: Video

Life Debt Repaid

Southern_Witch_69

23 Reviews   |   23 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Drama Angst Erotica Video Alternate Universe Potter Place's Variety Challenge 2009 121 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Harry Potter Narcissa Malfoy

Narcissa knows what she wants in return for helping Harry during the final battle.

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Chapter 1: Video


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I adore the world of HP.



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Reviews for Life Debt Repaid

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kimjo2

well done!  thanks

10/10

braye27

Stars and garters!  This is so well done, the timing is spot on, the photos were perfectly chosen to tell the story, and the music was just right.  Thanks for sharing this.
Beth

10/10

Shadow

That was great. You must have put a lot of time into this, and it shows. Well done.

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genrou

iwas terribly amused.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Life Debt Repaid)

Brilliant!

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pookah

Interesting.  I love the grim and determined Ginny!  Such a perfect reaction for this tale.  Good luck in the contest!

10/10

apisa_b

I really LOLed at some points. (the barn, the mentioning of what she will wear).
Good job! The timing was just right and the music suited the story you wanted to tell.

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droxy

YAy!  A picture story!  Woot!

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lyn_f

Nicely done!  The music definitely complimented the pictures.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Life Debt Repaid)

I thank you very much.

10/10

MollysSister

I found myself feeling sorry for Narcissa. That was werid. Thanks for the video it was amazing!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Life Debt Repaid)

One other person said something similar. I find that fascinating! Thank you for watching.

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Southern_Witch_69

I am an Art of Noise fan. I was pleasantly surprised to his this version of the song. I'd not heard that one before. I have the Sensual Remix on CD, and it's about ten minutes long. There are so many remixes. I'm going to google this one to find it! Anyway, I did enjoy the video and the humor. Some of the pictures were a bit blurry, but I do want to say you've done a good job with timing. Sometimes video makers have the pictures flying by too quickly, and that's even worse if there are words we are supposed to read.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Reviewer)

I was unsure how to fix it after the fact, but as you said, it still ended up enjoyable. They have a most excellent collection, but I believe Moments in Love is the most popular. It was all the rage here about twelve years ago I think it was.

10/10

Werbsister

This was excellent!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Life Debt Repaid)

Thank you very much for this!

10/10

karelia

Very nice first multi-media entry for this challenge!!!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Life Debt Repaid)

Thank you for saying that.

10/10

beaweasley2

This was really neat! I loved the visual story and the pictures were cool. Thank you. This must have been a lot of work.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Life Debt Repaid)

A great deal of work, actually, but it's worth it in the end. Thank you for letting me know.

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slasher454

Lol!  This was very fun.  Loved the frames of Ron and Hermione ;D

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Life Debt Repaid)

Thank you very much. It took a while to find just the right ones, but the whole project was definitely fun.

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sunny33

Run, Narcissa, run fast! :)

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Life Debt Repaid)

I would think it's Harry who should be doing the running.

9/10

Battle of Lissa

This was very fun! Great way to deliver this prompt! 

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Life Debt Repaid)

Thank you so much.

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StormySkize

Well, that was interesting. I think you did a great job of matching the pictures to the story. I guess I'm just put off by the whole Narcissa/Harry idea, but you did a great job with it.

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pookah

amusingly sly insertion of the barn and her clothing into the story, as insults to him and Ginny.  WHat a lot of work this must have been!  Well done.

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kimjo2

wow!  that was awesome!  thanks

8/10

chyara

Hope he used a contraception charm..You should probably credit Equus in your credits...lolI loved seeing that play!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Life Debt Repaid)

I guess I thought crediting the actors was enough. I wonder why people always worry about contraception charms when they aren't mentioned--I mostly take for granted that it's been dealt with discreetly. I've noticed that anytime a character has sex in stories, people review to mention it.

Response from chyara (Reviewer)

LOL!  Because I'd like to think that muggle or wizard have their forgetful moments too.Hence the unplanned pregnancy.

10/10

cocoachristy

This is totally AWESOME! I love the angst and humor mixed together!

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Life Debt Repaid)

Thank you. I wondered if my humor had been lost.

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snapesslavegirl

I really liked this.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Author of Life Debt Repaid)

I'm so glad!

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tenoh27

LOL, thank you!

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