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Saturday Night Drabbles What He Didn't Expect
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What He Didn't Expect

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What He Didn't Expect

luvsev

18 Reviews   |   18 Ratings, 0 Likes, 6 Favorites )

Erotica Drabble/100-Word Saturday Night Drabbles 251 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Draco walks in on Severus making love.

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I am a 20-something-year-old who admits to not knowing or having everything figured out, beta, foodie, bibliophile, and dabble in art. Most days I may be found in the kitchen indulging in the culinary arts.

I adore a multitude of pairings in the fandom, though I am partial to: SS/HG, DM/HP, NT/HG, PP/MB, SS/HG/LM, Snupin, and LL/HG.

 


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MollysSister

Mawhahahahah!! Thats what you get for peeking Mr. Malfoy  

Response from luvsev (Author of What He Didn't Expect)

Hopefully he has learned his lesson, but in case he hasn't, I'm sure Sev and Hermione would find other ways to torture him.

10/10

Nessa

Well that's what you get when you walk through partially opened doors, the little rich boy had no manners. 

Response from luvsev (Author of What He Didn't Expect)

Tee hee, he got just what he deserved. Maybe now he will learn to knock first.

8/10

severuslover

Interesting, very interesting. Nice job. Keep up the good work. ~Jen

Response from luvsev (Author of What He Didn't Expect)

Thanks, Jen! I am truly delighted that you liked my work. I have more stories in planning/editing stage as we speak. -Amber :)

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kimjo2

take that, draco!!  great stuff!  thanks

Response from luvsev (Author of What He Didn't Expect)

Hehe ;) I am glad that you liked it, and you are welcome, dear.

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HermioneJeanSnape

Ha, poor ferretboy. Surprised? We aren't! Ooh, wait, what if Draco joined in...ohh...yummy...

Response from luvsev (Author of What He Didn't Expect)

I hadn't thought of Draco possibly joining in, but that has possibilities and could be very hot.

Response from HermioneJeanSnape (Reviewer)

Ooh, and Lucius too.... three slytherin men all focused on Hermione.... *Wipes drool off the keyboard*

Response from luvsev (Author of What He Didn't Expect)

Mmmm... that is deliciousness! She would be one lucky girl to have all three of those hot guys.

Response from HermioneJeanSnape (Reviewer)

Ooh, please write it, please, please, pretty please?

Response from luvsev (Author of What He Didn't Expect)

Hehehe... I will have to finish editing my Sev/Hermione/Bill fic first and then I will try.

0/10

KellyH

Naughty Draco staying to watch the end. XD Good one!

Response from luvsev (Author of What He Didn't Expect)

What can I say, he is dirty and was curious to see who his godfather was making love to. Thanks! :)

10/10

beaweasley2

Not quite a burst in, but I do hope he enjoyed the show. I love how he didn't know who she was until the end.

Response from luvsev (Author of What He Didn't Expect)

I wasn't quite sure of how I was going to write him bursting in, but I figured this would work just as well. I thought that keeping Hermione's identity until the end would add a bit of mystery as well as mortification for our dear Draco.

0/10

debjunk

Bane of his existence indeed.  More bane to come, I would expect!

Response from luvsev (Author of What He Didn't Expect)

Hermione will always be the bane of Draco's existence.

10/10

Stefdarlin

LOL, oh, goodness!  What a lovely answer to the prompt.  I could just see them there by the fire.  Awesome.

Response from luvsev (Author of What He Didn't Expect)

I am glad that you liked my answer to the prompt. *Smiles*

10/10

braye27

Severus and Hermione: 1     Draco Malfoy: 0I can only imagine what must have been going through Draco's mind before he saw Hermione's face, and then after... well, we know all he could think about was "the bane of his existance."  Ahhhhh, but the bane of whose existance?  Draco's?  or Severus'?This made me chuckle.  Well done.Beth

Response from luvsev (Author of What He Didn't Expect)

I am glad that I could make you laugh, dear. I suppose I should have clarified whose bane of existance she was: Draco's. *Pats the stars and smiles.* Thanks, Amber

10/10

karelia

Muahahaha, I bet draco thought major TMI and yet just had to keep watching. Nice job!

Response from luvsev (Author of What He Didn't Expect)

Thank you, dear! It was just one of those things that he was too horrified and fascinated to move. *Pats the pretty, shiny stars.*

10/10

snitchette

Yes life can be hard sometimes. Poor little rich boy. *smirk*

Response from luvsev (Author of What He Didn't Expect)

Draco was nosy and for that, he got to see a show that he may want to forget. Thanks for the shiny stars. :)

10/10

Sampdoria

Nodding, of course Severus loves Hermione, it is about time Draco realised what we already knew:-))

Response from luvsev (Author of What He Didn't Expect)

Yes, it is time that that Draco knew. *pats the sparkly stars*

10/10

irishredlass

Oh to know was the war over?  Is Draco going to go running to Lord Snakey?  Or will he simply whine to his godfather?

Response from luvsev (Author of What He Didn't Expect)

Yup, the war was over and Lord Voldiearse is scattered in the seven seas. Draco can only whine to Sev, who will promptly tell him to shut it.

0/10

rhiannon113

Great job of reeling us in right away. Beautiful descriptions.

Response from luvsev (Author of What He Didn't Expect)

Thanks!

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sunny33

ROFL. Poor Draco! :)

Response from luvsev (Author of What He Didn't Expect)

He certainly got to see more than what he bargained for.

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lyn_f

Oh poor Draco to have seen that.  The little voyeuristic fool ... nice one, luv!

Response from luvsev (Author of What He Didn't Expect)

Maybe he will learn to knock next time, or maybe not. He probably enjoyed the little scene since he stayed. I am glad you liked it. :)

10/10

morgaine_dulac

And then Draco Malfoy died .... LOLNice one! Poor boy's scarred for life, I bet ;-)

Response from luvsev (Author of What He Didn't Expect)

Hehehe... you made me chuckle. Draco will now have to spend the rest of his life trying to erase the memory of his godfather making love to the know-it-all.

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