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Potions Under Duress Redefining Hermione
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Redefining Hermione

1: Hermione Remembers

2: Chapter two

3: Chapter three

4: chapter four

5: Chapter Five

6: Chapter Six

Redefining Hermione

snarkysagewitch

59 Reviews   |   59 Ratings, 0 Likes, 81 Favorites )

Angst Romance Slash Alternate Universe Potions Under Duress 21,745 Words 6 Chapters WIP
Draco Malfoy Hermione Granger Narcissa Malfoy Severus Snape Albus Dumbledore Harry Potter Molly Weasley

After more loss than she knows how to handle, Hermione is alone and scared. But after secrets from the past are revealed, Hermione loses what little she has left and ends up at Malfoy Manor, working with Draco Malfoy and Severus Snape as spies for the Order while struggling to decide who she really is.

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Chapters (6)

Chapter 1: Hermione Remembers

Chapter 2: Chapter two

Chapter 3: Chapter three

Chapter 4: chapter four

Chapter 5: Chapter Five

Chapter 6: Chapter Six


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10/10

jadecadence

Update, update! ^_^ *prepares basket of your fav. flowers* :D 

9/10

jadecadence

Awwe... I read this story on the random spinner. This story had BETTER NOT be abandoned!!! *turns to content page to take a look* I will give it 5 stars if it's not...! For now 4.5 

10/10

jadecadence

Interesting prompt and good characterization.  

0/10

slytherin_snake

Ok when's the next chapter coming hummmm I can't wait for it.  Great work :D

10/10

lovestruck

What a wonderful story.  I can't wait until you update this again.  

10/10

sinbad

Well, that was unexpected.  I wonder what Draco thinks of this?I also liked the faeries and the story behind them, nice touch.

Response from snarkysagewitch (Author of Redefining Hermione)

Thank you for the review!

10/10

lucyferr

People like the Weasleys, having grown up with magic, never took their education seriously, figuring that magic would always be there. But Hermione, having only discovered her magic at the age of eleven, studied hard and never took anything for granted. 

well said! (And ironic given Narcissa's revelation)

Finally a Pureblood Hermione fic that's different!

Response from snarkysagewitch (Author of Redefining Hermione)

thank you for the review!

0/10

Poppy

What a phenominal twist! But I suppose the marriage choice is easier now. I love this story, I wish you loads of spare time and a generous muse, so you can update really soon.

Response from snarkysagewitch (Author of Redefining Hermione)

Thank you for reviewing!  I will try to update as soon as possible

10/10

sandlapper

I have read quite a few Hermione 'finds out she is pureblood' stories and I have to say that yours has to be the best I have come across.  The way you introduce Hermione as a Malfoy is definitely unique.  I am truly enjoying it...can't wait to see more.  But one question...what in the WORLD was the first part of Hermione's destiny??!!??  Update soon!! 

Response from snarkysagewitch (Author of Redefining Hermione)

Your question will be answered with time.  Thanks for reviewing!

0/10

mock_turtle

"“Oi, Ginny!” exclaimed Fred. “You were supposed to tell us when shewoke up!” Ron, who had become her boyfriend only a week before,..."I know this is not a big thing, but I had to read that line three times before I figured out who Ron was dating.  At first, because of your syntax, it sounded like he was dating Ginny.

Response from snarkysagewitch (Author of Redefining Hermione)

Thanks for the advice

7/10

countrymouse

Ok, presents a problem.As someone above noted, if she's Draco's twin, then Hermione is technically a pureblood and not a muggleborn at all, so the marriage law doesn't apply to her.And therefore, she doesn't have to marry ANY pureblood (and couldn't marry her brother, Draco, anyway).However, if I'm understanding correctly, for purposes of your story, Severus is being portrayed as a pureblood, and if this gets out (that she's really Hermione "Malfoy")--then, by the law, she's not allowed to marry Severus, either---because under the law, it is a MUGGLEBORN who can (must) petition for any pureblood witch or wizard.  So now what's to happen?  Keep Hermione's true parentage secret, and allow her to choose Snape?  (and then have to keep eternally secret from the Wizengamot that a pureblood has married another pureblood, or otherwise their marriage will be annulled?)Or reveal it, and up she goes on the auction blood for some "real" Muggleborn wizard to petition for?Interesting turn of events.

Response from snarkysagewitch (Author of Redefining Hermione)

interesting way to look at things.  Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

debjunk

Wow, plot twist! Totally wasn't expecting that, but I love it. It's nice, too, that Draco had already started to be nice to Hermione before this came to light. Wow, wow, wow. Lots of adjusting to do. It seems that from what Narcissa remembers, she loved her baby. Hopefully she can love Hermione in her adulthood. (Oh yeah, this kind of makes Hermione's mind up for her, doesn't it? Whoo hoo!)

Response from snarkysagewitch (Author of Redefining Hermione)

Hermione and Nrcissa certainly have an interersting way to view their relationship now.  Thanks for reviewing!

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Oh, this story was rather good but- really? Draco's twin? I'm sorry, but that is a bit too much! And a new magical being too? Too AU!Good writing style though.

Response from snarkysagewitch (Author of Redefining Hermione)

Thanks for the review. 

0/10

Terab

THAT was a great chapter!!  Who would have thought?  Now we know why Drace didn't want to marry Hermione.  He loved her more like a sister.  I can't wait to find out what happens next.

Response from snarkysagewitch (Author of Redefining Hermione)

Thanks for reviewing!

0/10

AlanaVawn

nice twist didn't see it coming

Response from snarkysagewitch (Author of Redefining Hermione)

thanks for reviewing!

10/10

MuseAmusant

Well, if Hermione is actually a Malfoy, she is not a muggleborn but a pureblood witch and the marriage law technically shouldn't apply to her. But as Voldemort cannot learn Hermione's true parentage, I'm guessing she will end up marrying Severus anyway, as she can hardly marry her own twin brother!Incidentally, how tragically, horiffically ironic... had Voldemort's plan completely succeeded, Lucius would have been involved in the rape and murder of his own daughter.:::Shudders:::

Response from snarkysagewitch (Author of Redefining Hermione)

very glad Lucius never had to rape or kill her.  Would've created a little family tension, I suppose.  Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

blue artemis

Oh, dear.  I'm glad she didn't choose him.

Response from snarkysagewitch (Author of Redefining Hermione)

well she hadn't exactly chosen yet, had she??  thanks for reviewing!

0/10

sunny33

LOL.  Well that settles the question of who she is to marry, doesn't it? :)

Response from snarkysagewitch (Author of Redefining Hermione)

thanks for reviewing!

9/10

sevibaby

Well this is an interesting development.  Can't wait to see where this goes.  We at least know who Hermione won't marry.

Response from snarkysagewitch (Author of Redefining Hermione)

Thanks for reviewing!

10/10

HE5972

Oho, I suppose this matter of choosing a suiter just became infinitely easier!   

Response from snarkysagewitch (Author of Redefining Hermione)

Thanks for reviewing!

0/10

timestep

Now that is an interesting turn of events. I did suspect it when Narcissa appeared - but you really caught me off guard. Well done!

Response from snarkysagewitch (Author of Redefining Hermione)

Thanks for the review!

0/10

ClayPotter

Wow! What an interesting twist! Now that means she can be close to both Draco and Severus, but just in very different ways. Kind of makes her decision for her.

Response from snarkysagewitch (Author of Redefining Hermione)

thank you for reviewing!

9/10

sevibaby

Wow,  That was a chapter well worth waiting for.  Please update soon.

Response from snarkysagewitch (Author of Redefining Hermione)

Thank you!  I'm glad you liked it.  I'm working on getting the next chapter ready asap.

10/10

tac

Awsome:)

Response from snarkysagewitch (Author of Redefining Hermione)

Thanks for reviewing

10/10

MuseAmusant

Yay, I got all the suitors right! I was pretty sure the groper was Sirius... I couldn't picture any of the other guys being that crass. I wonder how Harry might react, though, should he find out his godfather was the one who tried to feel up his best friend?But I'm glad Hermione got to talk to Severus and Draco about what really happened the night her parents were killed... I think that will help alot with the grieving process and enable her to move on.As for her compatibility with the two Slytherins, I agree with Draco that he and Hermione could become good friends, but lovers? No. But Severus... whether he's ready to see it or not, there's a definite sense that there could be something much more between them.Great update! 

Response from snarkysagewitch (Author of Redefining Hermione)

As far as Sirius goes, I'm pretty sure Harry knew which suitor he was.  During Sirius' and Hermione's dance, Harry was watching them rather closely which is why he ran up after she slapped him.  If he hadn't known who the suitor was, he would've just let Hermione slap him, probobly thinking it was Severus or Draco.Thanks for the review!

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