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Shut Up Chapter 1: Snow
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Shut Up

1: Snow

Snow

Shut Up

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belle4life

Hermione and Severus have an early morning tiff.

Humor Drama Drabble/100-Word Potions Under Duress 150 Words 1 Chapter Complete
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“I will simply walk to work, Hermione. Hogwarts is just down the road. Do you forget that we live in Hogsmeade?”

“It’s snowing outside. I don’t want you to get sick by walking to work,” she said with concern. She wrapped her arms around his waist, resting her chin on his chest, staring into his obsidian eyes. She reached up on her tiptoes and pressed her lips to his with a gentleness that showed her love for him.

“It’s a complete waste of gas for you to drive me to work,” Severus said as he grabbed his outer coat, bundling himself up and wrapping a green scarf around his neck.

“Severus, shut up and get in the car.”

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A little drabble inspired by a story my professor told us in class the other day.

Please review and let me know what you think.


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Latest 25 Reviews for Shut Up

15 Reviews  |  4.6/10 Average

10/10

chivalric

;-)
Sweet!

0/10

cflower

That was really cute. I never knew you could drive to Hogwarts. :P

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morgaine_dulac

That's just because he's a guy and doesn't want his girl drive him ;-)

10/10

pickles

Funny and cute.

10/10

beaweasley2

LOL He misses the point, doesn't he.

0/10

rhiannon113

Little scenes of domesticity are almost more romantic than the 'moonlight and roses'.  It speaks of a comfort, and a rhythm to their life. Very nice.

0/10

debjunk

cute.

0/10

mimmom

very sweet

10/10

MomoDesu

For so few words, this gave me a mighty giggle. Great drabble!

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kimjo2


cute!  thanks

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salvamea

"shut up and drive" gets to my mind here. *lalala*
aha, she thinks she has to keep him out of trouble.
but she does realise that this is not Ron whom she is speaking to?
maybe he is planning to actually catch the cold and be nursed by her? who knows?
teaching these dunderheads isn't always fun... one could use a little time out...
him entering a muggle artefact? I'm astonished.

9/10

irishredlass

Why didn't he simply apparate?

But it is oh so typical of us women worrying about our men!

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sunny33

You tell him, Herms! :)

10/10

HermioneWeasley1972

LOL funny.

10/10

snitchette

Lovely. Are we afraid to get into a Muggle contraption? A Death Eater like you, come on ... ;oD

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