Still a brilliant story:-)

This was very lovely. Thank you.

/M

I just read a story, where the snake tells how she saved snapes liefe at the shrieking shack.but I must say, the outlook for  a (hopefully longer) story with a slow reconvalescence at St. Mungos is something I could really enjoy.Your style of writing is so light and fresh, a joy  to read, regarding the sad theme of sitting beside a bed and talking to someone in coma. and lying in a bed, trying hard to remember what hat happened and recover from sever injuries.funny  clue to make her ending up beside him... please some more!!!

oh, yes.  i think an additional chapter would be just right.  thanks so much.  i enjoyed this one muchly.

Hey - really nice one-shot - characterization was great and I do hope you post a second part to this - truly enjoyed your work - thanks for sharing

I love this!  It is filled with comfort and caring and a promise for the future!  Well done, Amethyst.



If you write another chapter, I will read it!  This one is so good, how could I not?
Beth

Thanks for posting this, it was a wonderful read!  I'd love to read a continuation whenever you have the opportunity to write it, and I particularly thought the war stories book with the proceeds going to wizarding charities and families was a nice touch.  Way to go!

What a strange place to end this. I keep gong back trying to find some reason it was left there. Was there something that caused that particular spot to be the end of this?

it was a really good story. If you decide to do part 2 to this i would love to read it

A continuation would be most welcomed!  Great story

I think you must have posted this elsewhere because I recognise it, but it was most assuredly worth a second read.  I hope you get to the sequel.

Thank you for this one – I really liked it and I would be glad if there could be a sequel.

I would love to read a follow-up to this, actually... perhaps something a couple of years hence, just to know what happened to them both afterwards. I loved this, by the way.

I believe comatose patients can hear when people speak to them. I have experienced this myself during a surgery.

I enjoyed the story and I would like to read more if you decide to continue.

I don't even want to imagine what might have happened to Hermione if she was with Aragog's lot!! Yucky.

This is nice. they look after one another. It's kindness and comfort that build real love. =]

I really like this.   you've sweetly and gently told  a story that has just the right calm, warm, and easy-to-love feel to it.

Great story, would love to read much more. Thanks!

I would definitely want to read more. :) I like this and think the idea of hearing somenoe's voice while comatose is very believable.

Oh, its so sweet. I can see her visiting like that, and the book is a nice touch :)