I Look At You
lyn_f13 Reviews | 5.15/10 (13 Ratings, 0 Likes, 7 Favorites )
Two people describe their thoughts whilst looking at each other from a distance.
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I am a relative newcomer to the world of Harry Potter Fan Fiction. I recently discovered the good 'ship HG/SS, and I've been hooked to the point where it is my OTP.
I was a Ruth Kirschstein NRSA post-doctoral fellow at the University of North Carolina at Chapel Hill. When I am not at the lab bench or in the classroom, I am an organist. I'd be in a church near me, occupying an organ bench, and blowing dust around the nave. (Just kidding.) Currently, I serve as organist/choirmaster for a couple of small Episcopal churches near Duke University.
Reviews for I Look At You
lovely. just lovely. thanks
Response from lyn_f (Author of I Look At You)
You're welcome. I'm glad you liked this; thanks for your review. 
It begs for a sequel. I like the way you've covered so much in so few words. It really outlines the process of growing from acquaintences to people who respect and love each other.
Response from lyn_f (Author of I Look At You)
I don't believe I'll write a sequel, but then knowing my Muse, one just never knows. Thanks so much for your review!
Lovely story, lyn! there is so much caring between them that I couldn't help but speculate on what the future holds. Then I decided that sooner or later they will realize how they feel about one another.Thanks!Beth
Response from lyn_f (Author of I Look At You)
Thanks, Beth!
I'm not really a fan of SS/HG, but this was a lovely piece. Well done.
Response from lyn_f (Author of I Look At You)
Thanks! I'm honoured that you read and enjoyed this then.
i really liked this. congrats on posting it! it left me wanting more... :D
Response from lyn_f (Author of I Look At You)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
Squee! Congrats on your post. I love the premise. We all change and it is intriguing to see what is different and how someone might see the differences. Irish
Response from lyn_f (Author of I Look At You)
*hugs*Thanks, Irish!
Again this is the perfect exemple of their own ignorance regarding feelings. Someone should write them a manual. They might learn a thing or too.
Response from lyn_f (Author of I Look At You)
Hee hee ... indeed, perhaps someone should. Thanks for reading my little story.
Oh, I finished reading this and my heart was saying: "I hope they are able to say, 'Yes,' to each other." I really like this. Thank you for sharing.
Response from lyn_f (Author of I Look At You)
Thanks, I'm glad you like it!
Oh! I like it....its so good! Parallel inner monologues, very well written and plausible.
Response from lyn_f (Author of I Look At You)
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
Brilliantly lonely and full of longing. I actually feel a bit derpressed, thanks. LOL
Response from lyn_f (Author of I Look At You)
Awww, sorry for making you feel depressed. Thanks for reading my little story.
Very sweet. Cheers. /M
Response from lyn_f (Author of I Look At You)
Thanks for reading my little story.
I like this. The two points of view make me what to know what happens next. I think you should continue this story and see where it goes. Nice Job.
Response from lyn_f (Author of I Look At You)
I didn't intend to go on with this, but if the Muse is willing ...Thanks for your review.
Response from MrsSnape (Reviewer)
I think you should add on to this story, I am sure there are many people who would love to continue reading this story. If you feel inspired I say go for it :-)