New Chapter for Mercy of the Elements
Mercy of the Elements
shefa12 Reviews | 12 Ratings, 0 Likes, 18 Favorites )
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Reviews for Mercy of the Elements
Awwww... I don't know if I should cry or just really smile a lot. Both? I'll go with both. That was beautiful. Utterly beautiful.
Damn. This is good. REALLY good. And you should write more of it, as it is currently marked "unfinished".It deserves to be finished.
Response from shefa (Author of Mercy of the Elements)
*blushes thank you! I think it actually is done, but perhaps I'll take another look and see if there's a part II. When I wrote it, I thought there might be... Thanks so much for reviewing. I'm really glad you enjoyed it so much. I hope you enjoy my other stories, too! :)
what beautiful imagery! You have done such work here - thanks for sharing
Response from shefa (Author of Mercy of the Elements)
Thank you so much!
That was a story with a lot of warmth, considering it had so much ice. Lovely! :)
Response from shefa (Author of Mercy of the Elements)
*laughs... wonderful juxtaposition :) thank you!
That was very touching, and the icy imagery was so effective.
Response from shefa (Author of Mercy of the Elements)
thank you!
What a lovely beginning to your story. I love tales of Severus learning how to live and trust again after the war, and of Hermione's courage in dealing with the wizard who wants to love but needs a witch who is extraordinarily resilient, patient and caring to help him find his way.Well done!Beth
Response from shefa (Author of Mercy of the Elements)
Thank you! I am also drawn to the dynamic of healing and the journey to repair and reconnect. This pairing really does call for all of that...
wow... this is beautiful. I can almost feel the emotion pouring from them both. Awesome stuff!
Response from shefa (Author of Mercy of the Elements)
Thank you! I'm thrilled that the emotion is so palpable.
this is so incredibly beautiful. the early part with the icicles was so poetic, and - oh, it was all just heart-wrenching and lovely.
Response from shefa (Author of Mercy of the Elements)
Ooh, thank you so much... I'm delighted that it had that impact on you. *hugs
You do have a gift showing emotions in a most riveting way. Not that that's surprising, given your profession *laughs*Well, well done, my dear!
Response from shefa (Author of Mercy of the Elements)
*grins. Thank you! I'm so glad that you enjoyed this. And I'm so sorry to be so far behind in review responses! Ack!
Beautiful story.
Oh my goodness, this was beautiful! The ending was... lovely and almost heartbreaking with his confession :) I also really liked the beginning, with the icilces and the talk of being fragile. Really well written piece and I hope to read more of your work. Thank you for sharing.