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Last Detention
luvsev11 Reviews | 5.36/10 (11 Ratings, 0 Likes, 12 Favorites )
It is Hermione's last detention of the year and Severus decides to have some fun with her.
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luvsev
Member Since 2008 | 71 Stories | Favorited by 76 | 664 Reviews Written | 948 Review Responses
I am a 20-something-year-old who admits to not knowing or having everything figured out, beta, foodie, bibliophile, and dabble in art. Most days I may be found in the kitchen indulging in the culinary arts.
I adore a multitude of pairings in the fandom, though I am partial to: SS/HG, DM/HP, NT/HG, PP/MB, SS/HG/LM, Snupin, and LL/HG.
Reviews for Last Detention
Yummy smut with a little fluff at the end, good job! Thanks
Response from luvsev (Author of Last Detention)
Thank you for reviewing, dear.
All hail the gratuitous erotica! Whoot! A delicious, yummy, hot little pwp! Great job, luvsev!
Response from luvsev (Author of Last Detention)
Sometimes a nice little pwp is just what we need--especially between Hermione and Sev. Thank you for your kind words, hun, I appreciate them!
Very effective writing. You may want to consider using a different disclaimer in future: "to be read only when you have privacy"! LOL Nicely done.
Response from luvsev (Author of Last Detention)
*ROFL* I have to give you credit, dear, for making me crack up. I may very well have to use that disclaimer since the general consensus finds the story hot. Again, thank you for the wonderful review and making me laugh!
:) -Amber
Well that was some detention! I loved it.
So happens to them both now? Surely they stay together, and live happily ever after?
Response from luvsev (Author of Last Detention)
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Response from luvsev (Author of Last Detention)
I am glad that you loved their detention! Of course they stay together and have their happy ending. There at the last of the story, I threw in a bit of binding magic, and thought about writing another little oneshot to explain what happened there. What do you think?
Response from Nessa (Reviewer)
Well, I think you know my answer to that particular question? Of course, I would never turn down a SS/HG fic!! Look forward to it, (Let me the title, so then I'll keep my eye out) All the best for the New Year.
Response from luvsev (Author of Last Detention)
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Response from luvsev (Author of Last Detention)
I think I do know the answer, dear. I suppose I will start writing it, but I have another little plot bunny nibbling at my fingers at the moment begging me to write a chaptered SS/HG fic. I will definately let you know once I get it written. I hope you have a wonderful holiday. All the best wishes for a brilliant new year! Amber
Response from Nessa (Reviewer)
Oh!, a chaptered SS/HG, you just keep on satisfying me. I look forward to all. You too have a brilliant New Year, all the best.
Response from luvsev (Author of Last Detention)
It is called 'Journey,' and is currently posted up to ch. 2 on www.adultfanfiction.net. but since I do not have a beta for it, I have not begun to submit it here. Feel free to check it out.-Amber
Response from Nessa (Reviewer)
Just to let you know, I've checked out 'Journey', although it's only 2 chapters in it's building into a intriguing story. You should post it on here, it would be a big hit. Happy New Year.
Response from luvsev (Author of Last Detention)
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Response from luvsev (Author of Last Detention)
I am glad that you liked it, dear. I do need a beta for it, are you interested? I need someone to bounce ideas off of as well. Let me know. Amber
Response from Nessa (Reviewer)
Sadly as much as I would love to beta (I really would!), I don't have any experience (I really should learn, and to post a fic to). But you can always bounce ideas off me if you like.
Response from luvsev (Author of Last Detention)
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Response from luvsev (Author of Last Detention)
I would really appreciate the extra help, dear. feel free to contact me so that we can chat. Hope you had a brilliant day.
Amber
hot, hot, hot! thanks
Response from luvsev (Author of Last Detention)
You are welcome, dear. Thank you so much for reviewing!
Oh, yes a lovely - wait she was scrubbing mouldering armadillo bile from their crystal decanters and then ran her fingers through his hair? and she didn't wash her hands before they... oh, yuck. Hum, you'd think He at least would have made her wash her hands!
Response from luvsev (Author of Last Detention)
I just caught that mistake, dear. Thank you for pointing it out so that I could fix it, which I subsequently did after reading your review. Hope it works better now. It is such attentive readers such as you that catch my little idiosyncrasies. Thanks once more, dear!
Response from beaweasley2 (Reviewer)
Whew! So it was simply a missed oversight. I'm so glad about that.The rest was pretty Hawt! Just in case you think I didn't like it. No hurt feelings?
Response from luvsev (Author of Last Detention)
I had to re-read it to catch it, and when I did, I think I even squicked myself alittle. I am not hurt over what you pointed out, dear, in fact I am relieved. It lets me know that someone out there cared enough to say something. I am pleased that you thought my story was hawt--I had intended on making that way. Once again, thank you so much and for being so kind as well!
That was good and hot!It did not turn out the way I thought it would,with the title I was afraid that it was going to be bad(bad bad not bad good!)Great ending!
Response from luvsev (Author of Last Detention)
Thank you for reviewing! I had originally planned on calling this story 'Fun in Detention,' but since it was the last night of her school career, Last Detention seemed befitting. I do not like bad endings, so I could never write one. :)
Now that sounds like a plan! Sweet and wonderful torture.Well done!Beth
Response from luvsev (Author of Last Detention)
hehe... I like for them to torture each other. Thanks for the review and the shiny stars, dear. :)
-Amber
my favorite line: "see desk. get erection."
my favorite line: "see desk. get erection."
Response from luvsev (Author of Last Detention)
I am glad that you liked that line. It was my favourite line to write.
I love this sequel. It's ... em ... entertaining ... Thanks for sharing.
Response from luvsev (Author of Last Detention)
I am glad that you liked my sequel, dear. I tried to make it different from the others. Thank you for reviewing.