The Girl Next Door
broomclosetravenclaw11 Reviews | 4.36/10 (11 Ratings, 0 Likes, 4 Favorites )
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broomclosetravenclaw
Member Since 2005 | 34 Stories | Favorited by 18 | 74 Reviews Written | 219 Review Responses
Well, as the decades catch up to me, I had to come change my bio, if for nothing more than to change my age. I discovered HP and fanfiction after the 5th book and was instantly drawn to Snape. I mainly ship HG/SS with my 2nd favorite ship being NL/LL, although I will write almost any (non-canon) pairing (ok, so I have been known to write a drabble or two with a canon pairing, but it doesn't mean I enjoyed it).
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*thunk* sound of hermione coming back to earth. great drabble. thanks
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of The Girl Next Door)
*thunk*--Exactly! Thanks for reading, glad you enjoyed it. :)
Keep on dreaming, Hermione! He has to take off that grey nightshirt some time....
... and then she can make her move...
Very cute!
Beth
Poor Hermione! He should get a glimpse of his thoughts and ravish her!
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of The Girl Next Door)
'Legilimens!' *giggle* That would be a whole different drabble. :D
a bit cruel - poor snape in his unattractive nightshirt and poor hermione, faced with the brutal reality - but amusing nonetheless.
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of The Girl Next Door)
*grins* Thanks. Well, if I'm not killing everyone off, I give them a big dose of reality--cruel as it is. *evil grin*
Oh, reality is hardly ever as sweet as fantasy. But, who knows, maybe it's more fun to dream about what's exactly under that night shirt.
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of The Girl Next Door)
She may have been sadly disappointed about what was under that nigh shirt--or, as this is fan fic--maybe not. :D
Hmm, not what I expected, but amusing in any case. Thanks.
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of The Girl Next Door)
Not what Hermione expected either. ;D Thanks for reading.
I don't you cal but in France we say it's a "tue l'amour" (kill the love if you prefer). Really a grey nitghtshirt. EW. That at all sxy event with a Sevrus in it :)
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of The Girl Next Door)
The French language always sums up things so nicely--sounds much nicer, in a way. But, I think we have all had one of those moments when the fantasy of someone is destroyed, and then we have to decide what to do when we are left with the reality. Thanks for reading. :)
"As she waited, she was surprised to see a ghostly figure in a grey nightshirt pass by her door. Five minutes later, the figure passed by again, and she heard the latch on Snape’s door close. All fantasies of a barely clad Snape seducing her in the middle of the night disappeared—but a girl could still dream."-----That was dreadful, down right cruel way for reality to crush the fantasy! Why am I still laughing then? My evil heart enjoyed it soooo much! 
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of The Girl Next Door)
Why am I still laughing then? Because it's funny--in a cruel way... muahaha! No, becuase I think it has happened to all of us at one time or another--the fantasy lost, the moment you know it won't work--and it's funny... ;)
That was kind of funny. Nice job. Keep up the good writing. ~Jen
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of The Girl Next Door)
Thanks. :)
Who hasn't had such dreams ... And one could always take off that dreadful nightshirt ...Cheers. /M
Response from broomclosetravenclaw (Author of The Girl Next Door)
Yes, that nightshirt definitely needs to disappear--one way or another. ;)