Paradise Found
Chapter 4 of 6
juniperusAfter surviving Voldemort's psychosis, Dumbledore's machinations, and Nagini's bite Severus Snape tries to begin anew half a world away from home. "It is not death that a man should fear, but he should fear never beginning to live." - Marcus Aurelius
"I saw Mr. Hooperstein arguing with Mr. Grumpy this morning," Simon commented after inhaling half his sandwich in three bites.
Ursula offered Severus the bowl of peaches. "Mr. Hooperstein owns the grocery down the block."
He nodded. "He was willing to acquire a jar of Marmite for me, he was very cordial." If not a little nosy, Severus thought, but he obviously feels protective of his neighborhood and anyone who lives in it. I can respect that. "And Mr. Grumpy?"
Ursula blushed. "That's the man who has the pushcart with the fresh fruit and vegetables. He's... contentious, particularly with Mr. Hooperstein and the news vendor next door."
Severus nodded at Ursula, then shifted his attention as Simon, who had been practically fidgeting out of his seat during the exchange, burst forth with the rest of the story.
"So Mr. Grumpy had some signs and wanted Mr. Hooperstein to put one in his window."
"Signs? What did they say, did you see?" Ursula asked, now curious.
"Pa-well waj-waj...waj-sick?" Simon furrowed his brow.
"Pawell Wójcik," Ursula corrected, then turned to Severus. "He sells antiques and unique imports furniture, mostly. His shop is around the corner, next to the rear entrance of the shopping center that borders that side of the neighborhood, but he lives in the apartments over and behind this store."
"Pa-vel Voy-chick," Simon said, carefully. "Oh yeah! Pawel! Is that his whole name, Mom? Where is that name from?" Simon's volume rose with his curiosity. After a pointed look from his mother, Simon continued, quietly, "...for city council representative."
Ursula finished chewing her bite of sandwich before speaking. "Poland, Simon. Pawel came here from Poland with his parents when he was your age." She looked thoughtful. "He's running for council? I'm glad he's a good man. But what does Mr. Grump... er, Mr. Grummand have to do with it?"
Simon shrugged. "I guess he's running the campaign, at least that's what he told Mr. Hooperstein. That's what they were arguing about."
"Mr. Hooperstein is friends with Pawel... did he refuse to take a sign?" Ursula looked concerned.
"No, he took one," Simon continued, between gulps of his lemonade, "And I don't know what Mr. Grumpy said before I got close enough to hear, but Mr. Hooperstein waved his hands in the air and shouted," Simon screwed up his face as he tried to mimic the grocer's nasally voice, "'You can't run his campaign, you pear-pushing half-wit! You couldn't successfully run a bath with written instructions!'" Simon grinned.
Ursula covered her mouth and looked away as she tried not to laugh. "Well, I expect things will be rather uncomfortable on that corner for a while, eh?"
Severus had watched the conversation with interest. Gaining an understanding of the neighborhood dynamics without having to ask questions himself was, after all, comfortingly Slytherin. And Simon was an enthusiastic storyteller with a fine memory and a talent for mimicry clearly a friendship of sorts with the boy had benefits beyond knowing one child in the neighborhood who wouldn't be carrying a spitball shooter loaded for bear and aimed in his direction.
Then there was his mother, and the bookstore, and the lemonade. He had been able to spirit away all of his personal goods, lab equipment, and books from Hogwarts (with the loyal help of his favorite house-elf, Bitsy), but it was too dangerous a proposition to retrieve his favorite Muggle tomes from Spinner's End. And up to this point, the most contact he'd had with a real person since he'd moved into his small flat consisted of the lengthy conversation with the grocer on whether he took special orders for imported food. And Ursula didn't over-sweeten the lemonade.
Thank you, Simon, he thought as he took a last sip of (refreshingly, perfectly sour) lemonade and wiped the cup's condensation from his fingers with a paper napkin before bringing them up to steeple in front of his face as he prepared to speak.
"I fear, in the excitement of the tuna salad," Severus smirked as Ursula blushed, "I nearly forgot my purpose in asking Simon to deliver me to your doorstep. I felt that you should know that..."
A gasp interrupted him as Ursula turned, wild-eyed, to Simon and frantically hissed under her breath. "What did you do?!"
Although intensely curious about Ursula's sudden change in demeanor, Severus stopped any further questioning of the panicked-looking boy with a smooth gesture of his hand.
"Simon is to be commended. I have had unfortunate experiences with the children who play in the park since I moved here, all but your son. Today he approached me in an attempt to convince the little cretins that I am not, in fact, the boogey-man." Severus decided to leave out the bit about the dare; he didn't want to inflame whatever was lurking behind Ursula's odd reaction. "I doubt his bravery will save me from further irritations during my regular walks, but I appreciated the attempt. And then I appreciated the very polite conversation that followed. I have been informed that you, madam, are 'smarter than anyone'."
Ursula's mouth opened and closed, searching for a response, as her cheeks reddened. "Well, that's quite a claim, one I don't think I can live up to, but thank you for letting me know." She looked at her son, relief and warmth crossing her features, in turn. "He is a polite boy."
Severus looked at Simon and agreed, "Yes, he is."
Simon grinned at Severus, then at his mother before asking, "Can I be done, Mom?"
Ursula turned to Severus and asked, "Would you care for anything else?" In response to a brisk shake of his head, she stood. "Yes, Simon, go ahead." The boy began collecting the dirty dishes as his mother returned the tuna salad to the refrigerator.
As Severus pulled his long legs from under the small table and carefully unfolded himself, Ursula approached him. She stared at his face appraisingly before quietly commenting, "Thank you, Severus. Thank you for telling me of Simon's heroics you didn't have to go out of your way to be friendly and kind to a small boy, and I appreciate your thoughtfulness."
Thoughtful? When was the last time anyone called me thoughtful? Severus inclined his head as he replied, "Not at all. I don't recall when I last had such pleasant," he looked Ursula in the eye before flicking his gaze to Simon, busy behind her, "and entertaining company. While the unfolding of this morning's events was a surprise, I must admit it was not an unwelcome one. But you have a bookstore to manage, do you not, Ursula?"
"And I'm sure you have important ways to occupy your time, as well," she responded.
Severus nodded. "Yes. Although I appreciate your generosity in fortifying me for the afternoon, I do need to buy groceries and attend to other errands."
Ursula gave him another of her shy smiles before offering her hand. "It was lovely to meet you, and we enjoyed having company for lunch. I hope we'll see you again."
Severus understood the question behind her statement and nodded solemnly. "But of course, madam, your son is my knight and champion against the trials and tribulations of the park miscreants, and this is a bookstore." He straightened to his full height and looked down his nose imperiously, but without his customary look of icy disdain. "I assure you, when it comes to books, rabid manticores couldn't keep me away."
If he was surprised that he had grown comfortable enough with these Muggles to carelessly allow a euphemism from Magizoology slip, he was astounded when Ursula's small smile expanded to a wicked grin. "My, you are a devoted reader!" She chuckled. "Well, then, I look forward to your next successful thwarting of our local manticore population, rabid or not."
"Bye, Severus!" Simon smiled widely and waved before turning back to his chore.
Severus offered a formal bow, then made his way through the bookcases. As he approached the front door of the bookstore, his eyes crinkled briefly when he heard Simon's voice carry from the back room. "Hey Mom, what's Marmite?" He closed the door quietly behind him and took a deep breath before striding purposefully down the sidewalk towards Hooperstein's.
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42 Reviews | 6.69/10 Average
Oh, no! I just found out that it was the end of the story. Yikes! You are a good entertainer. "Always leave them asking for more." Am I going to spend all day craving sequels? No matter. I love your fic.
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
No worries - it will eventually have more (although obviously my working time line leaves rather much to be desired...)
I actually did laugh when I read this line: "It was good to be king." Not only was it funny in context, but it's a great promotion from being a Prince, and it reminds me of the series of posters and greeting cards that used to say the same thing about being queen. Your original characters are terrific. I haven't even finished the whole story yet, but had to stop now in order to comment after laughing.
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
The story is unfinished, unfortunately, as real life had intervened - but there are future-chapters written, and it will eventually be complete.Thank you so much - I really enjoyed devising the OCs, they became very real while I was writing this.
Anonymous
Nice chapter! It's good to follow Snape's musings and thoughts like this. And it's good there's someone interested in him, at last...
Author's Response: Thank you!
If Lily's shade/spirit/whatever wants Severus to move the hell on I sure wish he would. Why isnt Simon in school my leige?
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
He is homeschooled, dear - more on that forthcoming. :DI wish he would too - stubborn man! :D
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
He is homeschooled, dear - more on that forthcoming. :DI wish he would too - stubborn man! :D
Egads what a head case! All that he has denied himself and punished himself for over the years. I want to see it fall by the way side. Go Urlsula GO
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
:D Lots more to come! I've already written the last scene (seriously) and a bunch in-between - I'm working my way through the plot and letting that grumpy bastard in my head dictate when he needs to - damn Snape.
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
:D Lots more to come! I've already written the last scene (seriously) and a bunch in-between - I'm working my way through the plot and letting that grumpy bastard in my head dictate when he needs to - damn Snape.
Mr. Hooperstein? He wouldnt be a relative of Mr. Hooper of Sesame St would he??I like that the chapters are getting longer. Hint hint nudge nudge poke poke
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
Well spotted - I have very fond memories of Mr. Hooper, and I think all city neighborhoods need a grocer just like him. :DWell, you know - the first chapter was a one-shot-gone-nuts for hp_con_envy. And then I began to increase their size from there... but don't expect *mongo* chapters from me. I intentially try to keep them managable for the never-time-to-read reader to enjoy. You know how insane my life is, and I always got frustrated with massive chapters I'd have to re-skim to finish reading because they were too long to finish at one sitting (given my schedule) - so I'm writing with that in mind. They will be longer from here on out, unless the story requires a short breather.
Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)
Ohhhhhh I didnt realize this was a HP con envy start up. That explains it then ((nods))Get to work on the next chapter sister. I like Urs!
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
Well spotted - I have very fond memories of Mr. Hooper, and I think all city neighborhoods need a grocer just like him. :DWell, you know - the first chapter was a one-shot-gone-nuts for hp_con_envy. And then I began to increase their size from there... but don't expect *mongo* chapters from me. I intentially try to keep them managable for the never-time-to-read reader to enjoy. You know how insane my life is, and I always got frustrated with massive chapters I'd have to re-skim to finish reading because they were too long to finish at one sitting (given my schedule) - so I'm writing with that in mind. They will be longer from here on out, unless the story requires a short breather.
Response from MollysSister (Reviewer)
Ohhhhhh I didnt realize this was a HP con envy start up. That explains it then ((nods))Get to work on the next chapter sister. I like Urs!
Ahhhhhh a muggle woman then. I can see how that might make a wise choice for our dear professor. LOVE that he sells the potion he invented to save his life. Very crafty Mr. Snape.
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
He is, indeed! I could imagine him doing nothing less!
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
He is, indeed! I could imagine him doing nothing less!
10 points to your house naming her Ursula. Very witchy. There would have been violence if you named her Tiffany or Ashley blech!
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
Oh I would NEVER do that! Ursula means she-bear (or little she-bear, perhaps), and she certainly *will* be! :D You know I am entirely too much Ravenclaw for my own good - everything has a reason...
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
Oh I would NEVER do that! Ursula means she-bear (or little she-bear, perhaps), and she certainly *will* be! :D You know I am entirely too much Ravenclaw for my own good - everything has a reason...
"he rasped" because that big meanie snake bit him. This is a great start to hopefully a friendship between the boy and SNape?
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
What a sweet story that would be - a Boy and his Snape.ROFLMAO!:D Thank you for coming to visit me here!
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
What a sweet story that would be - a Boy and his Snape.ROFLMAO!:D Thank you for coming to visit me here!
This is just adorable.And I never thought I'd say that, but: hooray to Lily!Cheers. /M
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
No kidding - me neither. She was pretty insistent on getting her say, tho. Pushy damn characters. :P He never knew what hit him when it comes to Simon - poor sod will never be the same. :P Thank you!
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
No kidding - me neither. She was pretty insistent on getting her say, tho. Pushy damn characters. :P He never knew what hit him when it comes to Simon - poor sod will never be the same. :P Thank you!
Wonderful!
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
Thank you!!
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
Thank you!!
This is perfect! Lily giving poor Severus the what for (at least virtually)... Oh, he's coming out of his shell and I'm so looking forward to it!
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
Me, too! :D Thank you so much!!
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
Me, too! :D Thank you so much!!
Great internal dialogue with Lily. She needed to tell him all of that. But what really needs to happen is that he actually believes it.
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
I agree - she was rather insistent to get her say, after all! Thank you! :D
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
I agree - she was rather insistent to get her say, after all! Thank you! :D
That's really sweet. Cute how it's the boy that will bring him out of his shell.
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
:D Thank you! It's pretty tough to be immune to the charm of young master Simon... even for the likes of Snape! :P
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
:D Thank you! It's pretty tough to be immune to the charm of young master Simon... even for the likes of Snape! :P
Anonymous
Lemoncurd and loose leave Twinings! *big grin* Would have been exactly my order, too - though I do make my lemon curd at home, now, and order my tea over here, as there is really superior quality to be had.
Great new chapter! The part about his self-punishing is most interesting... and so intereresting, too, that he entirely forgot about it, too ;o).
Author's Response: Amazing what can happen when a man is taken out of familiar (emotionally charged and burdensome) surroundings, and away from the people for whom he carries baggage (and that carry their own as far as he's concerned)! Having to forge new emotional responses and patterns is both a blessing and a curse, eh? :D Thank you!
Wonderful story, can't wait to read the next chapter. Thank you so much. Keep going! :)
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
Thank you! Don't worry - I plan to! There is more on the way, and now that some of my assigned writing projects have hied themselves away by their deadlines, I can finally bring my attention back here for yet more - it's not done yet - not by a long shot!
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
Thank you! Don't worry - I plan to! There is more on the way, and now that some of my assigned writing projects have hied themselves away by their deadlines, I can finally bring my attention back here for yet more - it's not done yet - not by a long shot!
Well, it's nice to see him not beat himself up over being attracted to someone. Poor thing. Lily did a number on him, probably without even realizing most of what she did.
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
I don't know - Lily was a smart girl... but still a member of her house, after all, and just as likely to fall prey to the machinations and propaganda there as he was in his house. I think he always had a much harder lot than anyone--even Dumbledore--could have guessed, and much of that had to be part of his internal geography to truly keep it hidden. Thank you for the review!
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
I don't know - Lily was a smart girl... but still a member of her house, after all, and just as likely to fall prey to the machinations and propaganda there as he was in his house. I think he always had a much harder lot than anyone--even Dumbledore--could have guessed, and much of that had to be part of his internal geography to truly keep it hidden. Thank you for the review!
This is a wonderful story. Thank you so much for sharing! /M
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
Thank you very much!!
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
Thank you very much!!
So he's trying to decide whether he likes her...and now he's trying to decide how much. He already likes the kid a lot
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
Oh, the poor sod is in quite a twist - it's a good thing he has Simon on his side! Thank you!
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
Oh, the poor sod is in quite a twist - it's a good thing he has Simon on his side! Thank you!
Poor Snape. Thanks for the update, I really like your story.
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
Thank you!
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
Thank you!
I'm intrigued too, but I'll keep my opinions to myself, as there isn't much story to go by yet, and my mind tends to make up outlandish possibilities.
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
More is coming (as fast as the queue can process it). :)
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
More is coming (as fast as the queue can process it). :)
I'm intrigued too. Nice beginning, I look forward to the next chapter.
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
:) It's on its way! Thank you!
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
:) It's on its way! Thank you!
Oh I am intrigued, too. Very much so.
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
I'm pleased - I hope you'll remain so!
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
I'm pleased - I hope you'll remain so!
oohoooh is it Hermione?? ss/hg fic lol ?
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
Nope! We're on a baggage-free trip, this time!
Response from juniperus (Author of Beginning To Live)
Nope! We're on a baggage-free trip, this time!