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Potions Under Duress Mouthful
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Mouthful

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Mouthful

DawnEB

25 Reviews   |   25 Ratings, 0 Likes, 5 Favorites )

Humor General Drabble/100-Word Epilogue What Epilogue? Potions Under Duress 134 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Hallowe'en, and Hermione has her mouth full.

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Chapter 1: Mouthful


About DawnEB

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DawnEB

Member Since 2005  |  22 Stories  |  Favorited by 31  |  236 Reviews Written  |  276 Review Responses

55 year old UK female with nothing better to do with her time than read fanfic (and occassionally d(r)abble a little herself). Married with 3 kids (two girls and a boy, 22, 18 & 14 years). Been with husband Brian for *gulp* 30 years; we met digging up bodies in the same cemetery - seriously :}


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Not archived here: Drabbles/ficlets on LJ mainly at grangersnape100, some at snape100 & hpcon_envy, plus a slow migration to AO3

Reviews for Mouthful

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10/10

chivalric

*g*Lovely!

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Glad you liked it :)

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Glad you liked it :)

0/10

kimbee73

You got me! My mind was totally in the gutter.

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

If the reviews are anything to go by, we are in good company down here Thanks for the review

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

If the reviews are anything to go by, we are in good company down here Thanks for the review

0/10

MollysSister

Well I was fooled!

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

  Why, whatever else could it have been?Thanks for the review

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

  Why, whatever else could it have been?Thanks for the review

10/10

MajesticJester

Adorable!

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Thank you

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Thank you

0/10

star_girl

Love it, well done! And I loved your quote: All of us are in the gutter, but some of us are looking up Snape's robes! lol!

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Thank you very much

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Thank you very much

10/10

braye27

As I was reading, I was thinking to myself, "what in the world is Hermione doing?  And can she finish him off in 100 words..."  I guess we know where my mind was.  This was laugh out loud funny!  Well done!  Beth

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

To paraphrase Wilde: We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking up Snapes robes Thanks for th review

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

To paraphrase Wilde: We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking up Snapes robes Thanks for th review

10/10

beaweasley2

BAWWWHAHAHA Brilliant! You really had me going! Love the emoticons!

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Thanks, I'm glad it worked

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Thanks, I'm glad it worked

0/10

moepi

Snicker poor Hermione

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

At least Snape found a way to make it better :D  Thanks for the review.

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

At least Snape found a way to make it better :D  Thanks for the review.

0/10

elsolel

LMAO!  I think Hagrid's sweets are ALL more trick than treat. 

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Indeed Thanks for the review

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Indeed Thanks for the review

0/10

Antigone

HAHA!!!

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Glad you enjoyed it

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Glad you enjoyed it

9/10

Mazzy

Hee hee

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Thanks for the review

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Thanks for the review

10/10

Subversa

Oh, that was a laugh out loud!  Well done! :D

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Thank you, glad to raise a laugh :)

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Thank you, glad to raise a laugh :)

10/10

kittylefish

very well done! you definitely had me thinking it was ... something else.

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

I know what you mean - some types of gummy sweet get me like this, too

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

I know what you mean - some types of gummy sweet get me like this, too

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

This was marvelous, Dawn. Loved it.

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Thanks, I'm glad it so obviously amused!

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Thanks, I'm glad it so obviously amused!

10/10

snitchette

*grin* You nearly me had me there (you said too much in the challenge description). Good one.

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Maybe I should have left off that last challenge then Thanks for the review

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Maybe I should have left off that last challenge then Thanks for the review

10/10

morgaine_dulac

Suggestive. Love it!

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Thanks

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Thanks

0/10

CharmedForce

Hahaha... definitely not what it seems!

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Why, whatever else could it be? *snicker* Thanks for the review

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Why, whatever else could it be? *snicker* Thanks for the review

0/10

Persevero

A reminder of a bad experience I once had with a bagful of toffee from the 'Rock King' stall on our local market - treacle not pumpkin, though.  *giggles*

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Hehe.  I know how you feel.  This was the direct result of a Sainsburys cheap toffee I was *ahem* testing for Trick or Treat suitability.

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Hehe.  I know how you feel.  This was the direct result of a Sainsburys cheap toffee I was *ahem* testing for Trick or Treat suitability.

0/10

debjunk

heh, heh.  Well done.

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Thank you :)

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Thank you :)

9/10

la Chatelaine

You got me, with tears yet! 

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

hehe, I'm assuming they were not tears of pain at an excrutiatingly bad drabble Thanks for the review

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

hehe, I'm assuming they were not tears of pain at an excrutiatingly bad drabble Thanks for the review

0/10

kimjo2

faked me out!!  great dribble.  thanks

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it :)

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it :)

0/10

Titania

HEH HEH HEH, that was cute!  Live long and prosper,

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

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Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Glad you liked it, thanks for the review

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

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Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Glad you liked it, thanks for the review

0/10

andyourbirdcansing

almost fooled me... xD

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

You mean... it sounds like something other than toffee in her mouth?  Hehe - Thanks for the review

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

You mean... it sounds like something other than toffee in her mouth?  Hehe - Thanks for the review

10/10

Anonymous

*mwahaha* Just great! Perfectly Halloween-ish! :o)

Author's Response: Thanks, glad you liked it  

10/10

OSUSprinks

I am cackling!  Absolutely perfect! 

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Hehe, I enjoy the odd cackle myself!  Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

Response from DawnEB (Author of Mouthful)

Hehe, I enjoy the odd cackle myself!  Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.

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