This is a sweet little read.  I can imagine her distress.  LOL!  And I can see her forgetting that she is a witch.  This made me wonder if he was checking on her because he heard her gasp of if he was joining her in the first place.Cheers,Stef =o)

This is really adorable.  I love the fact that he could be anyone! Nice job.

I wonder if he was really worried about her gasp, or if he was really just coming into that shower anyway. lol

severus definately strokes my fancy (gosh, i just wish he would!)  that was delightful.  thanks so much

I choose Severus!  And I choose the shower, too!  It's a very sweet morning ritual they have.Beth

cute if i were a witch i would probably go through the same thing. lol

It has to be either Lucius or Severus. I can just imagine Severus saying <i>"Now let’s discuss this shower,”.Excellent work. Really enjoyed this.

I immediately though about Ron as well, for the same reasons as DarkAngel.Lovely little piece. /M

That's a spell that many wihches and wizards seems to forget: Accio. Really Flitwick will turn upside down in his grave. Good job here.

I loved it! Since it is vague and one can choose which guy to put in, Ron comes to mind (for me, even though I don't like the RW/HG pairing). In the first book, when he's trapped in the Devil's Snare he makes the comment, "Are you a witch or not?!" while she's lamenting the fact that there's no wood for a fire. LOL. Good job! :)

a very good idea to keep it neutral. when I read his comments I automatically think of Snape.Anyway, a very caring husband, helpful in any situation and position *g*

Very cute. I really liked it! Keep up the good work!~Jen

Oh, that was definitely Severus' voice discussing positions.