Memory

luvsev

3 Reviews | 3 Ratings, 0 Likes, 0 Favorites )

Poetry/Prose Poetry: Free Form 141 Words 1 Chapter Complete

A tale of love lost.

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Chapter 1: Memory

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luvsev

Member Since 2008 | 71 Stories | Favorited by 76 | 664 Reviews Written | 948 Review Responses

I am a 20-something-year-old who admits to not knowing or having everything figured out, beta, foodie, bibliophile, and dabble in art. Most days I may be found in the kitchen indulging in the culinary arts.

I adore a multitude of pairings in the fandom, though I am partial to: SS/HG, DM/HP, NT/HG, PP/MB, SS/HG/LM, Snupin, and LL/HG.

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10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I often find myself thinking along these lines. I guess I should stop wondering what might have been and just accept what's not. Haha

Response from luvsev (Author of Memory)

Most of us can't help but wonder about what might have been--I think it is one of those things that makes us more human (for lack of a better word). I know this might sound off the wall here, but those 'could have been or should have been' moments helps to make us who we are, and thankful for what we have.

Response from Southern_Witch_69 (Reviewer)

So very true.

9/10

kittylefish

i really like this. it's sad, but i appreciated the rhythm and the way you shift the images unexpectedly sometimes. and i really appreciate that the rhymes don't feel forced.

Response from luvsev (Author of Memory)

Thank you for reviewing my poetry; I am pleased that you liked it. I was in one of those moods to where sadness and rhythm meet in a flowing river. -luvsev

Response from kittylefish (Reviewer)

i believe i'm familiar with that river. ;)

Response from luvsev (Author of Memory)

Thank you for reviewing my poetry; I am pleased that you liked it. I was in one of those moods to where sadness and rhythm meet in a flowing river. -luvsev

Response from kittylefish (Reviewer)

i believe i'm familiar with that river. ;)

10/10

chivalric

Exceptionally sad and very well done. Thanks for sharing this little gem!

Response from luvsev (Author of Memory)

It was kind of a sad piece to write but it suited my mood. Thank you so much for your kind review and I am pleased that you liked my poem. :)

Response from luvsev (Author of Memory)

It was kind of a sad piece to write but it suited my mood. Thank you so much for your kind review and I am pleased that you liked my poem. :)

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