On an Evening Such as This
nastygrl10 Reviews | 7.9/10 (10 Ratings, 0 Likes, 3 Favorites )
Is he ready to move forward, or will he end the affair?
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nastygrl
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I've been a fan of JK Rowling for a long time, but only turned to fanfiction after DH - read it in one day, cried for three, turned to the internet the day after for more. I favor Severus/ Hermione pairings, especially those with lots of chapters and lovely smut scenes - sex by association, pathetic, isn't it?? I've posted a beta profile, if you'd like to check it out.
In real life I am a single mom living in a small town. Rewarding and boring and the same time. Lucky me ;)
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ZOMG that last line packs a punch doesnt it! I am thinking Selna's parents would be none too happy to discover their daughter is screwing old Lucius. He of the vanity charms. LOL!
Response from nastygrl (Author of On an Evening Such as This)
LOL, Can you just imagaine poor Severus' face? That mouth in a tight grimace before he grabs his wand and goes after the man!And Lucius with the vanity charms ;) Thanks so much for reading!Dari
Hmmm that was a surprise.But is it a wise move, knowing the volatile tempers of the girl's parents.It would be priceless to see Sev choke on his roll as his daughter tells him...(sorry I love Severus, but I so enjoy to see him tortured sometimes...
)cheers Moepi
Response from nastygrl (Author of On an Evening Such as This)
LOL Poor Severus! Isn't it bad enough he has a daughter as smart as Hermione and as clever has himself?You really think Severus would just choke? Oh, that's not the reaction I think he would have ;)Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!PS: Try reading "The Morning After" for Selena's point of view
Response from nastygrl (Author of On an Evening Such as This)
LOL Poor Severus! Isn't it bad enough he has a daughter as smart as Hermione and as clever has himself?You really think Severus would just choke? Oh, that's not the reaction I think he would have ;)Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!PS: Try reading "The Morning After" for Selena's point of view
Excellent snap-shot - I thoroughly enjoyed this! Very original concept, clear characterizations, and you did a wonderful job of setting the scene. You've given the reader everything we needed to know with an economy of words and just the right amount of intrigue to keep us reading.Unfortunately, I spoiled the surprise for myself, as I looked at the summary and saw the character name listed. I think you might be able to change that to "Name Withheld-Surprise" in the character field - you might consider that, as I know I was a bit disappointed that I knew who was telling the story from the first line. (Still an excellent story, and I still enjoyed it immensely... I can only imagine that it would have had even more impact if I had to wait until the end for the big "reveal," though...). Just a thought!Well done - especially if this is your first effort. I hope we see more from you!
Response from nastygrl (Author of On an Evening Such as This)
I am so, so glad you enjoyed this! Everyone I have talked to said they were surprised, and not always about the same thing. I think that it is great that everyone can see something different when they read it. I had always assumed that people would know it was Lucius talking, it wasn't my intent to hide him, it was more to show how he saw himself. It was a lot of fun to write, too!Thank you for taking the time to read and review! Selena's point of view is on the way!
Response from nastygrl (Author of On an Evening Such as This)
I am so, so glad you enjoyed this! Everyone I have talked to said they were surprised, and not always about the same thing. I think that it is great that everyone can see something different when they read it. I had always assumed that people would know it was Lucius talking, it wasn't my intent to hide him, it was more to show how he saw himself. It was a lot of fun to write, too!Thank you for taking the time to read and review! Selena's point of view is on the way!
Well that was a shock! Once I got over the initial WOW factor though it was a very good shock. I've seen any author go from that angle yet. Keep up the good work!!
Response from nastygrl (Author of On an Evening Such as This)
I am so glad that you liked the story. I honestly wasn't going for the big shock, it just kind of worked out like that. Thanks for reviewing!
Response from nastygrl (Author of On an Evening Such as This)
I am so glad that you liked the story. I honestly wasn't going for the big shock, it just kind of worked out like that. Thanks for reviewing!
Oh wow. Speechless.
Response from nastygrl (Author of On an Evening Such as This)
I am going to asume you liked it, then, LOL I am so glad you liked it. Thank you for reviewing!
Response from nastygrl (Author of On an Evening Such as This)
I am going to asume you liked it, then, LOL I am so glad you liked it. Thank you for reviewing!
Did NOT see that one coming! Really interesting twist. Though hooking up with someone who could be a grandfather is a bit disconcerting, if anyone could make it work it would be the yummiest of the Malfoys! Really good read!
Response from nastygrl (Author of On an Evening Such as This)
Yeah - I'm glad you liked it! Lucius may be a grandfather, but older men can be hot, hot, hot! (Harrison Ford, for instance!) Thank you for reviewing!
Response from nastygrl (Author of On an Evening Such as This)
Yeah - I'm glad you liked it! Lucius may be a grandfather, but older men can be hot, hot, hot! (Harrison Ford, for instance!) Thank you for reviewing!
This is one of the best surprises in fanfic. I just adore stories like that! And you really kept this all the way up to the end! I don't know where you got this idea at, but I am so glad that it came to you because it is VERY orignal and that is the best way to start out your writing career is by being orignal. WELL DONE.I also love the hints of BDSM in this. Not heavy, but mild and I really like that.ROWR.Keep writing!!!
Response from nastygrl (Author of On an Evening Such as This)
I am so, so glad that you enjoyed this little story! Your story, Consuming Me, inspired me, you know! Thank you for reviewing 
Response from nastygrl (Author of On an Evening Such as This)
I am so, so glad that you enjoyed this little story! Your story, Consuming Me, inspired me, you know! Thank you for reviewing
That was a surprise!
Response from nastygrl (Author of On an Evening Such as This)
Yeah - hopefully a good surprise! Thank you for reviewing.
Response from nastygrl (Author of On an Evening Such as This)
Yeah - hopefully a good surprise! Thank you for reviewing.
Wonderful work with Lucius. I wonder what Hermione would think about her daughter's actions, but then she couldn't really say nothing to her. Since her Father is close to twenty years her Mother's senior. Things to think about. Thank you.
Liz
O.M,G. What ever will Severus say!