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Payback
luvsev7 Reviews | 8.29/10 (7 Ratings, 0 Likes, 18 Favorites )
Hermione needs to learn not to toy with her Potions master in class, so Severus decides to teach her a lesson in payback.
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I am a 20-something-year-old who admits to not knowing or having everything figured out, beta, foodie, bibliophile, and dabble in art. Most days I may be found in the kitchen indulging in the culinary arts.
I adore a multitude of pairings in the fandom, though I am partial to: SS/HG, DM/HP, NT/HG, PP/MB, SS/HG/LM, Snupin, and LL/HG.
Reviews for Payback
Oohh, I wonder what her detention is going to be like if her class is like that!!!
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Response from luvsev (Author of Payback)
Tee hee, they are going to have a lot of fun, let me assure you. Thanks for your review!
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Response from luvsev (Author of Payback)
Tee hee, they are going to have a lot of fun, let me assure you. Thanks for your review!
Cute, fun and entertaining. Severus acted like I would expect him to in this kind of situation...and you even left a bit of a cliffie to tease us with...
Response from luvsev (Author of Payback)
Thank you for your review! I am pleased that you found it entertaining. I can definately see our Sev enjoying doing this to Hermione. By the way, I do have a follow up piece that is in the works. :D -luvsev
Response from luvsev (Author of Payback)
Thank you for your review! I am pleased that you found it entertaining. I can definately see our Sev enjoying doing this to Hermione. By the way, I do have a follow up piece that is in the works. :D -luvsev
Great job on this story! It was very amusing and I really liked it. Very well-written...keep up the good work!~Jen
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Thank you so much! :)
Response from luvsev (Author of Payback)
Thank you so much! :)
Hope she got an "O" ;)
Response from luvsev (Author of Payback)
*chuckles* That she did. Thank you for your review; it made me laugh. :D
Response from luvsev (Author of Payback)
*chuckles* That she did. Thank you for your review; it made me laugh. :D
Absolutely fantastic. Revenge can be so sweet sometimes.
Response from luvsev (Author of Payback)
Thanks! I think revenge can be sweet too that is why I wrote this. :D
Response from luvsev (Author of Payback)
Thanks! I think revenge can be sweet too that is why I wrote this. :D
Muhahahaha Loved it.Another please!
Response from luvsev (Author of Payback)
Thanks! I do have a follow up story in the works as well as a chaptered story. Your review made me smile. :D
Response from Nessa (Reviewer)
Glad i made you smile So is the next going to be like a sequel? Please let me know of the title, if you can. So i can keep an eye out. x
Response from luvsev (Author of Payback)
This is a little mini-series that I thought up, so the next that I write should conclude it. I am not too sure of what the title of the next is going to be just yet, but I am thinking of calling it "Fun in Detention". :D
Response from Nessa (Reviewer)
Well im all for that title.. After all he does give her detention.
Response from luvsev (Author of Payback)
I thought that you might like to know that I finally did get around to writing a sequel to this story. It is called 'Last Detention.' It is in the queue here.
Response from Nessa (Reviewer)
Whoop!
Response from luvsev (Author of Payback)
Thanks! I do have a follow up story in the works as well as a chaptered story. Your review made me smile. :D
Response from Nessa (Reviewer)
Glad i made you smile So is the next going to be like a sequel? Please let me know of the title, if you can. So i can keep an eye out. x
Response from luvsev (Author of Payback)
This is a little mini-series that I thought up, so the next that I write should conclude it. I am not too sure of what the title of the next is going to be just yet, but I am thinking of calling it "Fun in Detention". :D
Response from Nessa (Reviewer)
Well im all for that title.. After all he does give her detention.
Response from luvsev (Author of Payback)
I thought that you might like to know that I finally did get around to writing a sequel to this story. It is called 'Last Detention.' It is in the queue here.
Response from Nessa (Reviewer)
Whoop!
What delicious payback! This was the sweetest revenge of all!Beth
Response from luvsev (Author of Payback)
Thank you for your review! I am glad that you liked my story. :)
Response from luvsev (Author of Payback)
Thank you for your review! I am glad that you liked my story. :)