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The Servant's Secrets
phoenix80 Reviews | 5.63/10 (80 Ratings, 0 Likes, 3 Favorites )
At the end of the war, Hermione went to bring her parents home. In the year that she was gone, a lot changed, including Lucius Malfoy who has been sentenced as Harry's servant. Can she accept all the changes and that everyone's lives went on without her?
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I picked up the Harry Potter fandom around the time the first movie came out and began writing fanfic early 2005 after discovering the adult online community. I identify most closely with the Slytherins and you will see my taste in writing lends me to writing about Slytherins more often than not. In addition to fanfiction, I also make fanvids on the Harry Potter fandom. I'm a Perfect Imagination acredited beta and am willing to help authors. My main 'ship interests are Snape/OC (never really got into the SS/HG pairing) and LM/any female (with HG as a new favorite). I have dabbled in RL/OC and RL/NT and am okay with those pairings. I generally shy away from slash, just not my thing. For updates on my writing, check out my Live Journal
Reviews for The Servant's Secrets
is this story complete?? it is very good
Very enjoyable. I like that they finally admitted their feelings for each other. Will there be another chapter or a sequel? I'd love to know what happens next.
I'm happy to see that you used one of my lm/hg prompts. Very intriguing start! Off to read more.
Yay! I'm glad that they were able to at least somewhat discuss their feelings for each other. I can't wait for another chapter!
They have a good point... but I hope Lucius isn't being that cold-hearted. I would imagine that the Ministry trusts Hermione more than Lucius at this point.
I just love how courteous Lucius is to her. It seems liek they both prefer not to mention her parents because it points out how young she is, but I'm sure that is something that won't really bother them in the futute.
Lucius is much more charming here... charming without the smarminess that he oozes in the books. I like it very much.
I feel like you have given a cursory description of Lucius at this point, and I keep waiting to hear something from Lucius' point of view. I hope you consider writing a chapter that way, to hear what Lucius is thinking.
A very intriguing start!
lol All's well that ends well, eh? What, ho, I request one more chapter... Behold, one cometh??
I'm sure that was hard for them to admit for many reasons.
Cool, business booming, expanding, grwoing nad Ginny and Harry wanna comeover for dinner! Ha! Harry dinning at Malfoy Manor! Harry's gonna love this! or not!
Wow, things are moving right along, nicely. Very well done.
Love this story
Okay I'm on pins and needles ...this is too perfect where's the the twist the "oh how could you Lucius". I'm dying here please pease keep writing missy/mister author
Finally found what's been hidden inside the bush they have been beating about, eh?
Wonderful, I loved this chapter!
I'm so glad that Lucius was honest. I recently read a story where he seemed to change, but hadn't, so I was worried.
Well, he's behaving very well. But , like Harry, I won't be surprized if he ends up having been evil all along! Thanks for the update. Still keeping an open mind. I mean, I'm not convinced he's evil, simply somewhat suspicious.
I'm so glad that Harry was wrong! I'm also glad that they admitted their attraction to each other.Gads, I still can't shake that feeling that something isn't quite trustworthy about Lucius.
You made Lucius cry, you meanie!
Lucius can definitely go either way in this story, can't he? I hope, just for Hermione's sake, that he really has changed.
I like the business name, and the difficulty in naming it. Granger's Grooming! hehehe
Don't know what to say so I'll just rate.
Wow. I really liked Lucius' point of view.