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Can I Watch You Read? Chapter 5: 5
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Can I Watch You Read?

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belle4life

What happened between Viktor and Hermione before and after the Yule Ball

Drabble/100-Word Alternate Universe Hogwarts Castle 689 Words 5 Chapters Complete
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She smiled as she thought back on that night and the wonderful memories that it evoked in her mind.

“Are you ready, dear?” her father asked her as he looked down at her and smiled.

“I’ve never been more ready for something in my entire life,” she said confidently as they began the long walk through the Great Hall doors and down the aisle. Her wedding dress swished as they walked, and the air was filled with a gentle melody. She looked straight ahead at the man before her. The man who had stolen her heart when she was just fifteen years old and had kept it safe ever since, and as she looked at him, she laughed to herself. Viktor Krum was once again staring at her and would be staring at her for the rest of her life.

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That's the end. Let me know what you thought!! Please!!!

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Latest 25 Reviews for Can I Watch You Read?

26 Reviews  |  5.85/10 Average

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Madame DeFarge

I DO LOVE A VICTOR/HERMONE PAIRNG.  WHATEVER POSSED ROWLINGS TO PAIR HER WITH THAT DOOFUS RON IS BEYOND ME.

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morgaine_dulac

Aren't they just cute? :-)

10/10

snitchette

It must be very disconcerting to be watched in the open like that.

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pyjamapants

I love how you've captured the essence of how bizarre this situation is, even within the confined of the word count restrictions.

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Lkmaide

Trying to see where you are going with this

9/10

Maddie

What was going on in Viktor's head at the time? I would like to know. I always liked his character. Although he was an athlete, he was a triwizard representative from his school and therefore he had to be a scholar as well, did he not? I always thought he might be a good match for Hermione if the language barrier could be broken and Ron was swatted out of the way.

10/10

snitchette

Is that the way to get celebrety. To not look at them. *thoughtful face* Does that mean I should put all my pictures of Brad in the bin? NAh I' don't think I can do that...

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pyjamapants

Oh, I think you've captured this moment perfectly. How awkward it must have been to have someone sit down, only to watch you!

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Muggline

I agree with Morgaine: sweet! And I'd like to read some more of Viktor's POV

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morgaine_dulac

Sweet :-)

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Mari01

Fluffy =]

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morgaine_dulac

Sweeter than honey, 100% lovely.

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la Chatelaine

  Again, very sweet.  Not everything good has to be hysterically funny.  It just has to make you smile.  I didn't know they performed marriages in the Great Hall (but then there are a LOT of things I don't know). Well done (even for drabbles!)

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Lkmaide

I sometimes wonder why JK purposely left out her extra characters as the story progressed.  I mean, we get Fleur and Madame Maxime, but we don't get to know what happened to Karkoff  and/or Krum.  We had to get TMI on Dumbly in Book 7 when we could have had more info on other characters. . .   oh well, it was a fun read your story and fitting!

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snapify52

Awwww. Sweet.  I have a real soft spot for Viktor/Hermione fics and they're aren't enough of them!  Thanks for writing.

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snitchette

Such a sweet end for a lovely story. Congratulations.

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la Chatelaine

 Well, I'll be darned, there was actually a GIRL behind those books and under those robes!Makes me smile.

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morgaine_dulac

Those drabbles just leave me with a huge smile on my face :-) Thanks! /M

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snitchette

You know I found i like it how you write their story from her point of view. Keep up the good work.

10/10

Lkmaide

ooo, a distinctive flavor. .   probably his lip balm.  heehee

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Maddie

Very sweet.

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la Chatelaine

So sweet.

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la Chatelaine

Better!

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la Chatelaine

Good beginning.

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snitchette

So she did kiss him after all. I've always wondered if she had done something with him or not. I enjoy very much how you're depicting the tentative relationship between two very shy people.

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