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Chapter 3 of 5
belle4lifeWhat happened between Viktor and Hermione before and after the Yule Ball
ReviewedShe was walking outside in the softly falling snowflakes and thinking about the odd friendship that had formed between her and the Bulgarian Seeker. All of a sudden a red rose appeared in front of her, held by a rather masculine hand. She turned around to meet the smiling face of Viktor.
“Vill you go to the dance vith me Herm-own-ninny?” he asked, as his accent grew even thicker. She smiled as she took the rose and nodded yes. Then she surprised herself and Viktor when she stood up on her tippy toes and kissed him gently on the lips. Lingering just long enough to taste a hint of cinnamon and a flavor that was distinctly Viktor.
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I DO LOVE A VICTOR/HERMONE PAIRNG. WHATEVER POSSED ROWLINGS TO PAIR HER WITH THAT DOOFUS RON IS BEYOND ME.
Aren't they just cute? :-)
It must be very disconcerting to be watched in the open like that.
I love how you've captured the essence of how bizarre this situation is, even within the confined of the word count restrictions.
Trying to see where you are going with this
What was going on in Viktor's head at the time? I would like to know. I always liked his character. Although he was an athlete, he was a triwizard representative from his school and therefore he had to be a scholar as well, did he not? I always thought he might be a good match for Hermione if the language barrier could be broken and Ron was swatted out of the way.
Is that the way to get celebrety. To not look at them. *thoughtful face* Does that mean I should put all my pictures of Brad in the bin? NAh I' don't think I can do that...
Oh, I think you've captured this moment perfectly. How awkward it must have been to have someone sit down, only to watch you!
I agree with Morgaine: sweet! And I'd like to read some more of Viktor's POV
Sweet :-)
Fluffy =]
Sweeter than honey, 100% lovely.
Again, very sweet. Not everything good has to be hysterically funny. It just has to make you smile. I didn't know they performed marriages in the Great Hall (but then there are a LOT of things I don't know). Well done (even for drabbles!)
I sometimes wonder why JK purposely left out her extra characters as the story progressed. I mean, we get Fleur and Madame Maxime, but we don't get to know what happened to Karkoff and/or Krum. We had to get TMI on Dumbly in Book 7 when we could have had more info on other characters. . . oh well, it was a fun read your story and fitting!
Awwww. Sweet. I have a real soft spot for Viktor/Hermione fics and they're aren't enough of them! Thanks for writing.
Such a sweet end for a lovely story. Congratulations.
Well, I'll be darned, there was actually a GIRL behind those books and under those robes!Makes me smile.
Those drabbles just leave me with a huge smile on my face :-) Thanks! /M
You know I found i like it how you write their story from her point of view. Keep up the good work.
ooo, a distinctive flavor. . probably his lip balm. heehee
Very sweet.
So sweet.
Better!
Good beginning.
So she did kiss him after all. I've always wondered if she had done something with him or not. I enjoy very much how you're depicting the tentative relationship between two very shy people.