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Can I Watch You Read? Chapter 3: 3
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Can I Watch You Read?

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belle4life

What happened between Viktor and Hermione before and after the Yule Ball

Drabble/100-Word Alternate Universe Hogwarts Castle 689 Words 5 Chapters Complete
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She was walking outside in the softly falling snowflakes and thinking about the odd friendship that had formed between her and the Bulgarian Seeker. All of a sudden a red rose appeared in front of her, held by a rather masculine hand. She turned around to meet the smiling face of Viktor.

“Vill you go to the dance vith me Herm-own-ninny?” he asked, as his accent grew even thicker. She smiled as she took the rose and nodded yes. Then she surprised herself and Viktor when she stood up on her tippy toes and kissed him gently on the lips. Lingering just long enough to taste a hint of cinnamon and a flavor that was distinctly Viktor.

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Latest 25 Reviews for Can I Watch You Read?

26 Reviews  |  5.85/10 Average

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Madame DeFarge

I DO LOVE A VICTOR/HERMONE PAIRNG.  WHATEVER POSSED ROWLINGS TO PAIR HER WITH THAT DOOFUS RON IS BEYOND ME.

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morgaine_dulac

Aren't they just cute? :-)

10/10

snitchette

It must be very disconcerting to be watched in the open like that.

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pyjamapants

I love how you've captured the essence of how bizarre this situation is, even within the confined of the word count restrictions.

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Lkmaide

Trying to see where you are going with this

9/10

Maddie

What was going on in Viktor's head at the time? I would like to know. I always liked his character. Although he was an athlete, he was a triwizard representative from his school and therefore he had to be a scholar as well, did he not? I always thought he might be a good match for Hermione if the language barrier could be broken and Ron was swatted out of the way.

10/10

snitchette

Is that the way to get celebrety. To not look at them. *thoughtful face* Does that mean I should put all my pictures of Brad in the bin? NAh I' don't think I can do that...

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pyjamapants

Oh, I think you've captured this moment perfectly. How awkward it must have been to have someone sit down, only to watch you!

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Muggline

I agree with Morgaine: sweet! And I'd like to read some more of Viktor's POV

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morgaine_dulac

Sweet :-)

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Mari01

Fluffy =]

10/10

morgaine_dulac

Sweeter than honey, 100% lovely.

9/10

la Chatelaine

  Again, very sweet.  Not everything good has to be hysterically funny.  It just has to make you smile.  I didn't know they performed marriages in the Great Hall (but then there are a LOT of things I don't know). Well done (even for drabbles!)

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Lkmaide

I sometimes wonder why JK purposely left out her extra characters as the story progressed.  I mean, we get Fleur and Madame Maxime, but we don't get to know what happened to Karkoff  and/or Krum.  We had to get TMI on Dumbly in Book 7 when we could have had more info on other characters. . .   oh well, it was a fun read your story and fitting!

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snapify52

Awwww. Sweet.  I have a real soft spot for Viktor/Hermione fics and they're aren't enough of them!  Thanks for writing.

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snitchette

Such a sweet end for a lovely story. Congratulations.

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la Chatelaine

 Well, I'll be darned, there was actually a GIRL behind those books and under those robes!Makes me smile.

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morgaine_dulac

Those drabbles just leave me with a huge smile on my face :-) Thanks! /M

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snitchette

You know I found i like it how you write their story from her point of view. Keep up the good work.

10/10

Lkmaide

ooo, a distinctive flavor. .   probably his lip balm.  heehee

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Maddie

Very sweet.

8/10

la Chatelaine

So sweet.

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la Chatelaine

Better!

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la Chatelaine

Good beginning.

10/10

snitchette

So she did kiss him after all. I've always wondered if she had done something with him or not. I enjoy very much how you're depicting the tentative relationship between two very shy people.

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