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GrangerSnape100 Black Against White
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Black Against White

1: A Splotch on the Horizon

2: Ruminations on a Fight

3: Enter Stage Left

4: A Higher Power

5: Waxing?

6: Dinner and a game

7: Fat Load of Good

8: Snake bite

9: A Sudden Attack

10: Dishes Decided

Black Against White

tobeacting

116 Reviews   |   116 Ratings, 0 Likes, 16 Favorites )

Drama Romance Drabble/100-Word GrangerSnape100 2,757 Words 10 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Remus Lupin Minerva McGonagall Ginevra Weasley

Hermione thinks about a large fight that she and Severus had.

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Chapters (10)

Chapter 1: A Splotch on the Horizon

Chapter 2: Ruminations on a Fight

Chapter 3: Enter Stage Left

Chapter 4: A Higher Power

Chapter 5: Waxing?

Chapter 6: Dinner and a game

Chapter 7: Fat Load of Good

Chapter 8: Snake bite

Chapter 9: A Sudden Attack

Chapter 10: Dishes Decided


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Member Since 2008  |  2 Stories  |  Favorited by 4  |  0 Reviews Written  |  76 Review Responses

The Healing Power of Rain is on hiatus until late April due to my thesis. 

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10/10

beaweasley2

LOL I think a walk in the snow was jsut what he needed.

10/10

morgaine_dulac

Yeah, running away, slamming doors .... so mature *rolls eyes*

;-)

/M

0/10

WriterMerrin

When words fail you, forget them.  Great job, Sev!

10/10

Nessa

He just can't stand to watch her being in his lab, and not being able to take her on the workbench, or can he. *grins*

10/10

snitchette

He is so cute. Kissig her as if his life depended on it , and then storming away with a good slamming of the door. *silly grin*. My beloved Severus. *sigh*. Maybe a good shag on the workbench of his lab would help ... *hoping fervently with the puppy eyes*

9/10

Anonymous

*mwaha* There, she has it now. Great chapter!

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Homina homina homina!!!! Oh, God, yummy!!!! Can't wait to read more.

10/10

braye27

Yeah, baby!  Now das what I'm talking about! 

Now that Severus has "declared" himself, so to speak, I can't wait until we see what our reluctant love birds do next.

Squeeeeeee.....  I love it!
Beth

10/10

braye27

Whew!  Severus is really giving himself hell for having given Hermione a personal compliment.  He had been trying to put to rest the bad feelings that came between them as a result of their argument, but he felt he had utterly failed.  What would he think if he knew Hermione had been about to knock on his door when he began haranguing himself?But now it appears that the angry noises she had heard had caused her courage to desert her.  When are they going to cut themselves and each other a bit of slack.  Remus?  Where are you?  You need to play the "butt-insky" again!!!Well done!Beth

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Thank you so much for your reviews! I am very glad that you are enjoying the story. The next chapter is queued and will hopefully be up soon.

10/10

braye27

Apparently everybody sees it but Hermione.  She is even having dreams about him, but she doesn't see it.

Well, at least she plans to talk to him tomorrow.  That's something, at least.

Beth

10/10

braye27

Remus is bloody brilliant!  Their opening greetings had me in stitches!  The game is such a sneaky way for Remus to get them to say something nice about each other.

"Severus, I think you are one of the most adept peoples in potions." 

"Hermione, you are one of the least unintelligent people I have taught."

There!  That wasn't so hard, was it?

Now Hermione knows that her hair was not the reason Severus had denied her request.   Hummmm... Will she apologize?

Nice!
Beth

10/10

braye27

Severus does have a romantic interest in Hermione!  Yes!  Now when is he going to realize that he should talk to her and tell her that he has change his mind about her using part of his lab?

"My feet have turned green, and I can no longer feel them?" 
*chuckles*  Any excuse to get out of going to dinner.

Good for Remus!  He is determined that Hermione will go to dinner tonight!

Marvelous!
Beth

10/10

braye27

This gets interestinger and interestinger each chapter.  Severus has noticed that Hermione has not been around.  He. Has. Noticed.

As for our Miss Granger, just what had she and Ginny "talked about"?  And she is embarrassed by her behavior, that she called him an "insufferable bastard."

Thank Merlin for Remus.  He wouldn't take no for an answer...  What will Severus think when he sees him escorting Hermione to the Great Hall for dinner.

As I said, interestinger and interestinger!
Beth

10/10

braye27

Sooooooo... it's not her hair... he's afraid of allowing himself to spend time with her...

Well, he'll just have to get over that!  After all, this is Hermione!

Love it!
Beth

10/10

braye27

Ahhhh...  Are they really arguing about her hair?  Or does Severus have some other ax to grind?

Well done, again!
Beth

10/10

braye27

What have Severus and Hermione found to argue about?  Clearly she is troubled by their distance from one another.

Well written, and a lot said in only a hundred words!!!
Beth

0/10

kimjo2

wow!  great update.  thanks

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Thanks so much for your review! I am very sorry for the time it took me to both update and respond, but thank you for your continued support of this story. It is much appreciated.

10/10

makaem

Excellent.  I look forward to more.

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Thank you very much for your review. I apologize for the length between updates and for my failure to respond. I am glad you are enjoying the story!

9/10

debjunk

Funny that she was scared for no reason.  Of course, if I came across Snape destroying his room, I wouldn't knock either. These two need a wake-up call. 

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Thank you so much for your review! I am sorry for the time between updates and for not responding sooner. I really appreciate your support with this story.

10/10

snitchette

It seems Remus' game made its effect. It's always a wonder why so intelligent people can be so "dunderheads" when it come to feelings. It's a fine job you're doing so please keep it up.

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Intelligence just gets in the way when it comes to socialization. Thank you so much for your review and I apologize that it took me so long to update and respond.

Response from snitchette (Reviewer)

Oo Did my eyes see right? Did I see update? *squee*

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Yes, it has been queued for 2 or 3 days now. I am just waiting for them to post it. I think this chapter will be well liked.

0/10

HermioneJeanSnape

Come on, Hermione, come on! He likes you, and you like him! Get a clue, my lovely Gryffindor!Excellent tantalizing story! :)

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Thank you very much for the review and I apologize for how long it took me to both respond and update it is queued now. I am very happy you are enjoying the story.

10/10

morgaine_dulac

Ha, Remus Lupin, the fly in the ointment.Very good work, as usual.(M

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

I absolutely love the pestering Remus. Thanks for your review!

9/10

Anonymous

What did have Remus in his drink? Of all the ideas... it worked, though, and they're getting closer... a bit. Complicated people make for complicated relationships, don't they? ;-)

Author's Response: But they do make for the most interesting. Thanks for the reviews!

9/10

Anonymous

Ah, now it's getting more clear. Severus is afraid to show a weakness, or rather, to show a blink of humanity on him... well, it happens to everybody sooner or later. Poor him! *lol*

9/10

Anonymous

And they dance around each other in a way that... that... hm, can't describe it, but you could just wonderfully.

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