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GrangerSnape100 Black Against White
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Black Against White

1: A Splotch on the Horizon

2: Ruminations on a Fight

3: Enter Stage Left

4: A Higher Power

5: Waxing?

6: Dinner and a game

7: Fat Load of Good

8: Snake bite

9: A Sudden Attack

10: Dishes Decided

Black Against White

tobeacting

116 Reviews   |   116 Ratings, 0 Likes, 16 Favorites )

Drama Romance Drabble/100-Word GrangerSnape100 2,757 Words 10 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape Remus Lupin Minerva McGonagall Ginevra Weasley

Hermione thinks about a large fight that she and Severus had.

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Chapters (10)

Chapter 1: A Splotch on the Horizon

Chapter 2: Ruminations on a Fight

Chapter 3: Enter Stage Left

Chapter 4: A Higher Power

Chapter 5: Waxing?

Chapter 6: Dinner and a game

Chapter 7: Fat Load of Good

Chapter 8: Snake bite

Chapter 9: A Sudden Attack

Chapter 10: Dishes Decided


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tobeacting

Member Since 2008  |  2 Stories  |  Favorited by 4  |  0 Reviews Written  |  76 Review Responses

The Healing Power of Rain is on hiatus until late April due to my thesis. 

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9/10

Jinxie

Good points on the hair!

"Why push someone away who is actually asking to spend time with you?"  Why, indeed?

9/10

Jinxie

Ouch.  It's obviously affected him some to still be mulling it over after the fact.  Gotta love alterior motives.

0/10

alatariel leralonde

Hmmm...  I think Hermione is starting to get a clue here... I eagerly await the next chapter!

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Hermione sometimes sadly lacks the common sense that others have. Thanks for your review.

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Hermione sometimes sadly lacks the common sense that others have. Thanks for your review.

0/10

kimjo2

it sounds as if ginny has broken the girlfriend's code.  never side with your dh over your girlfriend in matters of her best interest.  (i just made that up)  anyway i am agog to see how this will play out.  thanks so much

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Sounds like a good code to me. Thanks for your review!

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Sounds like a good code to me. Thanks for your review!

0/10

tedebear

Enjoying this.  I look forward to more.

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

I am very glad you like it and thanks for your review.

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

I am very glad you like it and thanks for your review.

10/10

debjunk

The woman is clueless, completely clueless.  You'd have to be to receive a note like that from Ginny and not get it!  duh!

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Poor Hermione destined to be clueless a little longer. Thanks for your review!

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Poor Hermione destined to be clueless a little longer. Thanks for your review!

9/10

Anonymous

Lovely *big grin*

Author's Response: Thanks for the review!

10/10

snitchette

I agree with Hermione: Ginny's words are confusing ... for who doesn't know to read between lines. These two people are completely helpless.

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Sadly yes. Sometimes smart people are just so dumb. Thanks for your review!

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Sadly yes. Sometimes smart people are just so dumb. Thanks for your review!

9/10

Nessa

Severus can stride all he wants hehe.

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Those billowing robes do look good. Thanks for your review!

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Those billowing robes do look good. Thanks for your review!

10/10

morgaine_dulac

Oh, I've missed this little story of yours. Glad you're back :-)/M

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Thank you :) It is actually all done. It just takes a while to get through the lines right now.

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Thank you :) It is actually all done. It just takes a while to get through the lines right now.

0/10

kimjo2

whoa...i had to read that "compliment" twice!  great update.  thanks

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Thank you for your review! Sorry it took me so long to respond.

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Thank you for your review! Sorry it took me so long to respond.

0/10

CharmedForce

That was rather a nice compliment from Severus, wasn't it?

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

I thought it was. Thanks for your review. Sorry it took me so long to respond!

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

I thought it was. Thanks for your review. Sorry it took me so long to respond!

0/10

CharmedForce

POor Severus never had a chance to have a normal romantic relationship, and now he is sabotaging his one chance.

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Do you expect anything less for our dear Severus? Thanks for your review!

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Do you expect anything less for our dear Severus? Thanks for your review!

0/10

CharmedForce

Remus is such a Gryffindor - meddling like Albus!

0/10

CharmedForce

Hermione was probably getting too close to Severus...

0/10

CharmedForce

Oh, that was just rude of Snape!

0/10

CharmedForce

I'm sure any confrontation with Snape would be unpleasant.

0/10

debjunk

She's right, he's not going to apologize to her.  She'll need to do it.  But sometimes in a relationship we need to swallow our pride and do the right thing, even if we're not the only one in the wrong, or even if it's not our fault.

10/10

snitchette

It could be funny if the two decided to go apologize to each other and meet in the middle of the Great Hall. This part was very enjoyable.

10/10

morgaine_dulac

...one of the least unintelligent people I have taught...Now that's a HUGE compliment coming from him!Love your Remus, by the way. Almost as meddlesome as Dumbledore.

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Remus is probably slightly OOC, but I think his involvment is great. He reminds me of Hermione. Thanks for your review!

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Remus is probably slightly OOC, but I think his involvment is great. He reminds me of Hermione. Thanks for your review!

0/10

kimjo2

great update.  i love how this is developing.  thanks so much

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Glad I could appease. Thanks for the review!

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Glad I could appease. Thanks for the review!

10/10

snitchette

I don't think she would be that shocked by his deep feelings about her. She may even welcome them gladly.

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

You will see soon. Thanks for the review!

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

You will see soon. Thanks for the review!

9/10

debjunk

waxing romantic.  I love that phrase.  Whether it describes Severus is beyond the point.  The man is waxing away.  And that's good to know.

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Yeah the phrase is funny. I just love the idea of Severus snearing at the idea. Thanks for your review.

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Yeah the phrase is funny. I just love the idea of Severus snearing at the idea. Thanks for your review.

10/10

makaem

I'm looking forward to the rest of this. Normally drabbles aren't my favorite form, but I really like this story.

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

I am glad you are liking this! I don't generally like to write drabbles because it is so hard to get the description I like in 100 words. Thanks for the review

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

I am glad you are liking this! I don't generally like to write drabbles because it is so hard to get the description I like in 100 words. Thanks for the review

10/10

morgaine_dulac

I am already looking forward to read all this on one piece once it's finished.I don't know what it is, but something about this song makes me smile all day long. :-)

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Haha thanks. I am glad you are enjoying it.

Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)

Haha thanks. I am glad you are enjoying it.

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