Black Against White
tobeacting116 Reviews | 7.01/10 (116 Ratings, 0 Likes, 16 Favorites )
Hermione thinks about a large fight that she and Severus had.
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The Healing Power of Rain is on hiatus until late April due to my thesis.
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few words, powerful images. thanks.
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
Thanks. I think description is so important to stories, so I try to include them and make them important. Thanks for your review!
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
Thanks. I think description is so important to stories, so I try to include them and make them important. Thanks for your review!
Spot on, Lupin. Might have stung though. Well, someone has to talk some sense into good old grumpy Severus. Cheers. /M
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
Thanks for your review. I thought that Lupin would be a good foil to both Severus and Hermione in this story.
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
Thanks for your review. I thought that Lupin would be a good foil to both Severus and Hermione in this story.
"Why push someone away who is actually asking to spend time with you?"
I think that is fundamentally the problem. He might love her if he let her be too close. And she might not be harbouring the same feelings. Always the insecure one.
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
He has been hurt before. I would imagine it would be really hard for him to let people be close. Thanks for your review!
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
He has been hurt before. I would imagine it would be really hard for him to let people be close. Thanks for your review!
Ah, Lupin is a wise old wolf with quite the quick wit. Despite Severus snide comeback, hopefully Lupin will talk some sense into him.
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
I promise that Lupin will play an important part. Thanks for your review!
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
I promise that Lupin will play an important part. Thanks for your review!
Hermione and Severus are quite the match for each other when verbally sparring. Looking forward to reading more.
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
I love when passionate characters argue. I think that it is the epitome of their connection. Thanks for your review.
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
I love when passionate characters argue. I think that it is the epitome of their connection. Thanks for your review.
Ooo, yelling in public. Could anything make Severus more irate? I think not.
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
Yes but when to such passionate people meet during arguments what else can happen? Thanks for the review.
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
Yes but when to such passionate people meet during arguments what else can happen? Thanks for the review.
Yep, I can totally see this happening. :)I really like how you use the snow for Sape's characterization.
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
Thank you. This all started due to the snow prompt from grangersnape, but it seems so natural for Snape to love the snow.
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
Thank you. This all started due to the snow prompt from grangersnape, but it seems so natural for Snape to love the snow.
They're so cute together when they are verbially fighting.
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
I love when people who are attracted to each other argue and fight. It brings out the passion between them in such an obvious but socially acceptable way. Thanks for the review.
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
I love when people who are attracted to each other argue and fight. It brings out the passion between them in such an obvious but socially acceptable way. Thanks for the review.
Snow does hold a certain kind of magic.Loved the little argument. Somehow I see Hermione throwing something at Snape, hihi.
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
Eh he left too soon and there was nothing handy for her to throw at him. Thanks for the review.
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
Eh he left too soon and there was nothing handy for her to throw at him. Thanks for the review.
sad and evocative. thanks
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
Haha thanks. A little humor will show up in the next few chapters. Thanks for the review.
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
Haha thanks. A little humor will show up in the next few chapters. Thanks for the review.
it never ceases to amaze me how two intelligent persons are unable to communicate!Looking forward to the next drabble. /M
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
It seems to happen more often the intelligent people than the less doesn't it? Thanks for the review!
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
It seems to happen more often the intelligent people than the less doesn't it? Thanks for the review!
I hope you will reveal more in the next chapter.
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
Yep. It is in the queue now. Thanks for the review
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
Yep. It is in the queue now. Thanks for the review
Hmm. Ok, so we find out more in the next drabble? Yes?
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
Yes. I have quite a bit of it written. I am separating it on here as I separated it on GrangerSnape100. I will submit the next part tomorrow probably. Thanks for you review.
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
Yes. I have quite a bit of it written. I am separating it on here as I separated it on GrangerSnape100. I will submit the next part tomorrow probably. Thanks for you review.
So she thinks she can ignore him? Yes, he's so very easy to ignore.
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
Haha. Thanks for your review.
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
Haha. Thanks for your review.
Hmm... a fight?Wonder what it was about.
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
The next chapter will reveal the answer. Thanks for the review!
Response from tobeacting (Author of Black Against White)
The next chapter will reveal the answer. Thanks for the review!
yuhuh. it would floor me too! (oh, give me that floor, please!) great update. thanks
Now that's the kind of attack I could possibly tolerate...
Oh, that was a sweet surprise!
Whoot! Yippeee! Whooza! He kissed her. Shocked her socks off - but kissed her.
Oh, talk about a misunderstanding! Poor chair.
Oh, good choise of reading material! Could the girl be any more dense?
Oh, Remus, you foolish foolish friend. LOL
What's wrong with her feet? At least she knows she was wrong to yell at him. LOL
Meddelsome Werewolf indeed. Teehehe
Lupin was the original Know-It-All? I never knew that! Good advice though.