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Potions Under Duress Ultimate Retribution
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Ultimate Retribution

1: Ultimate Retribution

Ultimate Retribution

Hanagasume

10 Reviews   |   10 Ratings, 0 Likes, 32 Favorites )

Romance Potions Under Duress 4,601 Words 1 Chapter Complete
Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Severus Snape owns a book shop. Hermione Granger just happens to frequent this bookshop and soon enough they grow quite fond of each other... HG/SS Oneshot. OOC - so don't say I didn't warn you

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Chapter 1: Ultimate Retribution


About Hanagasume

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Hanagasume

Member Since 2008  |  31 Stories  |  Favorited by 246  |  119 Reviews Written  |  1,704 Review Responses

I write fan fiction: I am a big SS/HG shipper, but I also like RL/HG, DM/LL and tastefully written Dramione or Lumione on occasion. 


I photoshop: I use photoshop an awful lot to create my own banners and edit photos - I love my DSLR. 


I am a bibliophile: Paperback, hardcover, graphic novel, fiction or non-fiction. You name it, I read it and collect it.


SEVERUS SNAPE IS MY ONE TRUE LOVE!!!

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Fanfiction.net;Ashwinder;Perfect Fan Fiction;Granger Enchanted;Pure Arrogance;Adult Fanfiction.net;WIKTT;The Potter Place Archives.

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0/10

WriterMerrin

I was just procrastinating this morning, and I thought I'd see what you'd written that I hadn't read already, and I came across this beautiful piece, but I'm confused.  What does the title mean?  Anyway, I like the maturity and grace in your Hermione.  Though the last scene feels a tad rushed, the pacing of the rest of the story is quite natural.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Ultimate Retribution)

Ummm well, retribution is... well I have no idea really, but at the time of my writing it, it must have made sense. Things that made sense two years ago are a little fizzy to me now. As for the end, yeah, it is rushed - I almost wish I wanted to rewrite it, but I wont. I've started a multi-chapter sequel to this, that I intend on posting when it is completed. When that will be, I have no idea. Thanks for reviewing though :)

10/10

snitchette

It's such a nice story. My favourite kind in fact as they fall in love with books then with eachother and then they marry have children and live happily ever after. Sorry I got carried away as ever by my too romantic nature. Can't help it.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Ultimate Retribution)

Thanks for reading... I know firsthand what it's like getting carried away when romance is involved. Lol. Keep an eye out for the sequel in the coming month! xo.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Ultimate Retribution)

Thanks for reading... I know firsthand what it's like getting carried away when romance is involved. Lol. Keep an eye out for the sequel in the coming month! xo.

10/10

faeriebell

This is such a cute and romantic story. *sigh* I love it. Well done.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Ultimate Retribution)

Hey thanks a lot. I hope you find the time or will to read my other stories posted! Thanks again. xo.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Ultimate Retribution)

Hey thanks a lot. I hope you find the time or will to read my other stories posted! Thanks again. xo.

10/10

severuslover

Aww...that was really cute! I loved it! You did a great job with their personalities and emotions...wonderful. Keep up the good work.~Jen

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Ultimate Retribution)

Thanks so much! I really anjoyed writing this one. The sequel for "From Dire Circumstances" is beginning to be posted on TPP. First chapter already up! Check it out! xo.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Ultimate Retribution)

Thanks so much! I really anjoyed writing this one. The sequel for "From Dire Circumstances" is beginning to be posted on TPP. First chapter already up! Check it out! xo.

9/10

la Chatelaine

Perfectly executed.  **many very happy sighs**

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Ultimate Retribution)

Many humble thanks. This was one of my favourite oneshot's to write and I was glad to do it. Don't be a stranger! xo.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Ultimate Retribution)

Many humble thanks. This was one of my favourite oneshot's to write and I was glad to do it. Don't be a stranger! xo.

10/10

bellus_extraneus

That was such a beautifully written story. I loved everything about it! <3

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Ultimate Retribution)

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it! Severus is such a doll. Lol. xo.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Ultimate Retribution)

Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it! Severus is such a doll. Lol. xo.

0/10

kimjo2

you write so beautifully.  thanks so much for sharing your talent.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Ultimate Retribution)

Thanks so much. I loved writting this one and I am pleased that it is being appreciated by such awesome readers! xo.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Ultimate Retribution)

Thanks so much. I loved writting this one and I am pleased that it is being appreciated by such awesome readers! xo.

0/10

sunny33

talk about "booklovers" :)

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Ultimate Retribution)

Lol. I never thought of it that way! That's funny. Thanks for reading and commenting. I m really pleased with this oneshot. Keep your eyes open for the follow up! xo.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Ultimate Retribution)

Lol. I never thought of it that way! That's funny. Thanks for reading and commenting. I m really pleased with this oneshot. Keep your eyes open for the follow up! xo.

10/10

blue artemis

That was purely sweet fluff.  And I loved it. 

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Ultimate Retribution)

Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it! This was my favourite oneshot of all the ones that I have written, and the only one I have decided to write a follow up for! Happy reading! xo.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Ultimate Retribution)

Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it! This was my favourite oneshot of all the ones that I have written, and the only one I have decided to write a follow up for! Happy reading! xo.

10/10

braye27

Severus was so sweet in his pursuit of Hermione.  And clever witch that she is, she played her cards just right!!!Wonderful!Beth

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Ultimate Retribution)

Thanks for reading! This was one of my favourites to write, and I have already started a sequel for it. If you're interested I have that posted at ff.net, grangerenchanted, and WIKTT. xo.

Response from Hanagasume (Author of Ultimate Retribution)

Thanks for reading! This was one of my favourites to write, and I have already started a sequel for it. If you're interested I have that posted at ff.net, grangerenchanted, and WIKTT. xo.

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