Perhaps she did like him after all …D'oh!

Very cute.  I liked the premise!  Thanks for writing and thanks for sharing.

Yup, absolutely worth some burnt bacon:-))

*Huge grin* what a charming little piece of work! It feels like a one-shot, though, and I am wondering what will come next.

'Perhaps she did like him after all …' Good man, she is sitting on your lap! For heaven's sake! ;-)Oh this was just lovely. Thanks for making me smile. /M

I like the concept of a Snape that is not sure of himself in the amour department. Also, that he thinks himself so unloveable. I always read that his mother loved him and that was it. He came across as sweetly insecure and Hermione as wonderfully assertive. Well done for a first chapter.Livvy

oh this is brilliant  sometimes girls just have to throw themselves at men to get their attention and Severus just hasn't been around the right women  i say come visit potter place there are plenty to choose from  lol  lovely work my dear

that was delicious, delightful and delovely!  thanks so much.  i especially loved the same scene from both their perspectives.

Nasty evil book. But the remedy... oh, hell, get the book to bite again!

Last sentence was a perfect gem. Brilliant! Burnt breakfast vs. sex.... hmm.. no need to even think about it.