My Husband
Chapter 2 of 2
StefdarlinHermione shows Severus just how she feels about their marriage.
ReviewedA/N: Second part of the challenge by Sunny33: Write a drabble 500 words or less about the morning after Severus and Hermione's wedding. Good smut and no body parts can be mentioned.
Part Two: My Husband
Hermione woke gradually. As she became aware of her surroundings, memories of the previous day flooded in, and the visions settled sweetly. She smiled as one image flashed to the very front of them all. The view of Severus’ look as the Minister declared him her husband. It was priceless, and the thought floated happily as she whispered the words to herself, “My husband.”
She shifted slightly, and he grasped her possessively in his sleep, causing her gaze to travel over his sleeping form. Suddenly, a wicked smile rose, and she moved to caress him, delighting in the warmth and feel of his length tangled with hers.
In the filtered light of the morning sun, she moved cautiously, planting wet, sensuous kisses on each sensitive spot she found, moving lower and lower with every loving caress. Those two words, my husband, whispered like a staccato note, punctuating each stroke of her path.
Severus woke slowly to the feel of heated kisses, and the sound of Hermione’s voice as she repeated two words over and over during her exploration. My husband… The sound of it made him smile, and his awakening desire rose as the possessive words fell. As she moved lower, he moaned slightly and shifted.
He moved to look down at her, and their gazes met, obsidian glancing into intense brown. The fire ignited between them when she moved lower still, and he felt warm, wet heat encompass the evidence of his hunger for her. A harsh groan erupted from deep within him when the wet-heat danced up, down and then swirled in a maddening pirouette. He shuddered.
Roughly, he pulled her up against him and her fierce gaze met his again. “My husband,” she said possessively as she slid over him. They both moaned at the feeling of completeness between them. Rising and falling, Hermione brought them over the edge, together. Afterwards, they lay there, sated and breathing heavily. Then, lovingly entwined together, they squeezed each other tightly and said simultaneously, “Mine.”
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That was perfect, Stef!! Excellent smut, and oh so sweet! Hard to believe body parts weren't mentioned - you definitely proved that a story can be quite erotic without them! Well done!!
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Thanks! I had to put a bandaid on my back button though, the poor thing. lol.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Thanks! I had to put a bandaid on my back button though, the poor thing. lol.
Oh, jolly good, I say! :)
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Heh, heh. Somehow, I think Severus would love to be roused this way, don't you?
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Heh, heh. Somehow, I think Severus would love to be roused this way, don't you?
Well done, Stef!
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Thank you, Sunny. This has me looking forward to Saturday nights.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Thank you, Sunny. This has me looking forward to Saturday nights.
I can't think of a better way to finish for ss/hg finish(i'm one) . Thank you
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
I am very glad you liked it, thank you.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
I am very glad you liked it, thank you.
Hmm I have never known two plus two to equal one, but you have definately made it work.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Math wasn't always a strong suit. But I am glad you liked it. Thank you. =o)
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Math wasn't always a strong suit. But I am glad you liked it. Thank you. =o)
Lovely story!
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I am so happy that you liked it, thanks.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
I am so happy that you liked it, thanks.
Nicely done.~Lotm
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Thank you.
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Thank you.
That's such a lovely way to wake up.
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Mmmm, I agree. Lovely...
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Mmmm, I agree. Lovely...
That's very good smut indeed.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Thanks for your review. Good, good.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Thanks for your review. Good, good.
This is really lovely. /M
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Thank you.
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Thank you.
Wow! I am not an SSHG shipper but this was really well written, very tasteful you could even say.All of which means the smut part is in my head! Heh. Cool.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Tee hee! Thanks, Di. I love the evil grin, ha ha. Oh, and I am still looking for the perfect lemon tree, just for you. ~~Stef
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Tee hee! Thanks, Di. I love the evil grin, ha ha. Oh, and I am still looking for the perfect lemon tree, just for you. ~~Stef
now that absoultely qualifies as "good smut". Yummy.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
YAY! I was hoping so. I missed the discussion about good smut and bad smut. Thanks for your review.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
YAY! I was hoping so. I missed the discussion about good smut and bad smut. Thanks for your review.
lovely chapter beautiful actually you write really well
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Thanks, Arabella. I was very nervous, as this is my first SSHG story/challenge.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Thanks, Arabella. I was very nervous, as this is my first SSHG story/challenge.
I wish he would say that to me only Mrs. Rickman. This is brilliant
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Ooohh, I simply adore Mr. Rickman, and his voice sends chills all over. Thanks so much for your review, I am glad you liked it.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Ooohh, I simply adore Mr. Rickman, and his voice sends chills all over. Thanks so much for your review, I am glad you liked it.
NIce ending and a lovely way to wake someone up.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
I agree, and thank you.
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
I agree, and thank you.
Oh, the wedding night. agaisnt a door. huummm
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Oh! But that was just the beginning. *snerk*
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Oh! But that was just the beginning. *snerk*
Sweet, sweet smut, and you did a wonderful job of meeting Sunny33's prompt... no body parts mentioned.BUT, you did, with a masterful use of words, convey all manner of body parts doing what they do so well. *clap clap clap*Beth
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
*Smirk* Thank you! Your review has me blushing here. I am glad you liked it.
Such bliss and nary a bad word to be found. Well done, Stef!Beth
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
Aww, thanks, Beth. This was very challenging. =o)
absolutely delightful (and hot!) thanks so much
Response from Stefdarlin (Author of Two Words)
And thank you for the lovely review. I am glad you found it so. Stef