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Up the River
etherealizabeth35 Reviews | 7.37/10 (35 Ratings, 0 Likes, 44 Favorites )
"She had made enough for several doses, and before she could bottle out, she gathered the last of her energy, dipped in her vial, and drank it."
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etherealizabeth
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Greetings.
I am a married mother of three wonderful children. I tend to ship HG/SS, DM/HP, and RL/SB, and the occasional SS/HP.
I'm sure I'll add to this as time goes on.
Cheers,
Etherealizabeth
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Enjoyed this one so far. Are you planning on continuing with the remaining 10 chapters and epilogue you mentioned ealier? :-)
sooooo... You're not dead I hope. Just a real life hiatus?
more please?
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
Hey, there! I'm going to post the next chapter in late December/early January at the latest. This are nuts right now, as it's the holiday season. I promise to have some new material for you soon.Thank you SO much for asking for more. You have no idea what it means to me. <3sapphire_pheonix's response: I know, holidays, holidays! just as long as it isn't abandoned.
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
Oh, no, it's definitely not abandoned. There's an outline for ten chapters and an epilogue. I promise you that unless I die before I can write the ending, it will be completed. And between you and me, I may make provisisons for my husband (who is my editor, and also a writer) to finish it for me if that were to happen.
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
Hey, there! I'm going to post the next chapter in late December/early January at the latest. This are nuts right now, as it's the holiday season. I promise to have some new material for you soon.Thank you SO much for asking for more. You have no idea what it means to me. <3sapphire_pheonix's response: I know, holidays, holidays! just as long as it isn't abandoned.
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
Oh, no, it's definitely not abandoned. There's an outline for ten chapters and an epilogue. I promise you that unless I die before I can write the ending, it will be completed. And between you and me, I may make provisisons for my husband (who is my editor, and also a writer) to finish it for me if that were to happen.
I think your chapters might be out of order, however I could be mistaken. I really like what I've read so far, keep up the great work. Cheers!
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
Oops! You're right. For some reason, Chapter Four is where Chapter Two should be. I alerted the appropriate people, so hopefully, it will get sorted out shortly!Glad you enjoyed!
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
Oops! You're right. For some reason, Chapter Four is where Chapter Two should be. I alerted the appropriate people, so hopefully, it will get sorted out shortly!Glad you enjoyed!
Ah, time travel. It's enough to make your head explode. I like her outlook, though. Go with the flow. It's probably the only sane way to go about it. That was quite the interaction between Severus and her. Heh, heh.
Paradox? Time travel seems to lead to that naturally. But it couldn't happen if it hadn't happened, right?
Marvelous chapter. They meet in the library, that is so them. She finds him attractive and it surprises her, bloody brilliant. I am surprised that she didn't already know that Lily was head girl in this time. I believe she will keep Severus on his toes. This story is great and I look forward to more. Until next time, be well.
What can I say? I'm hooked. I want to know what Hermione is up to with this perception enhancement spell. And why didn't Professor Snape as her any questions?And why were Snape and Dumbledore passing through the aisles, giving each other meaningful looks?This is going to be fun!Beth
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
Thank you! I plan to update every three to four days, so you will quickly find out what Hermione is up to. Professor Snape is himself - he always has his own reasons for doing things, and it's never what it seems at first. Some things never change...Snape and Dumbledore are both sneaky bastards, although Dumbledore is usually more covert about it. Again, some things don't change. It IS fun, and I'm glad you're coming along for the ride!Lizz
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
Thank you! I plan to update every three to four days, so you will quickly find out what Hermione is up to. Professor Snape is himself - he always has his own reasons for doing things, and it's never what it seems at first. Some things never change...Snape and Dumbledore are both sneaky bastards, although Dumbledore is usually more covert about it. Again, some things don't change. It IS fun, and I'm glad you're coming along for the ride!Lizz
oh no a evil cliffie more please don't leave it there I need more ~pouts~
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
There, there, my love. I won't leave you unsatisfied. I promise. Just be patient, and all will be well.*blows a kiss*
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
There, there, my love. I won't leave you unsatisfied. I promise. Just be patient, and all will be well.*blows a kiss*
This is a great beginning and you have the reader interested immediately. I am curious about Professor Snape's reaction ... that he looked at the calendar and then made up his mind made me think that he knew Potter would be going to Hogsmeade and so he wouldn't be helping him at all. But then Madam Pince thinking it was odd Professor Snape would give permission. That makes me think there's something there.The whole premise of a potion like this is both interesting and fun. Oh, what you could do with a potion like that. So, you've got my attention, it's a compelling tale, and now ... I would like more, please.
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
Thank you so much!Professor Snape, even when he is giving, is self-serving and one should always remember this. That's all the hint you get for now. The potion is definitely fun, and should be given to all couples as a honeymoon present. ;o)I am hoping to update every three to four days, although in the case of Chapter Two, it may be sooner. Cheers!
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
Thank you so much!Professor Snape, even when he is giving, is self-serving and one should always remember this. That's all the hint you get for now. The potion is definitely fun, and should be given to all couples as a honeymoon present. ;o)I am hoping to update every three to four days, although in the case of Chapter Two, it may be sooner. Cheers!
Time travel is such a sticky thing to logic out, but your explanation is both clever and sound. I like that she is not given the chance to act on her desire to save him from his decisions, because it also means she won't feel responsible for them. Your Dumbledore is as devious as the one in the books, and I both like and hate him for it. Nicely played.
A fascinating take on the timeturner theme. I do think that they got from A to Z a lot faster than seems in character for either of them, but perhaps there was a magical reason? Anyway, I'm looking forward to more.
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
Thank you!Actually, there is no magical reason for the intimacy. Hermione realizes that her time is limited, and that she may not have this chance again. It's not something that she would regularly do at all, but she's willing to take this risk because she loves Severus and knows that if all goes well, she'll never see him like this again. I'm hoping to post a new chapter within the next few weeks, so keep an eye out for it! :o)
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
Thank you!Actually, there is no magical reason for the intimacy. Hermione realizes that her time is limited, and that she may not have this chance again. It's not something that she would regularly do at all, but she's willing to take this risk because she loves Severus and knows that if all goes well, she'll never see him like this again. I'm hoping to post a new chapter within the next few weeks, so keep an eye out for it! :o)
OH NOOOOOOOO!!!!Please say it isn't so.Say that Severus didn't join Voldemort!!!
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
I'm sorry to say that he did, but like most things in life, this isn't permanent. I think that one of my favorite things about Severus is his humanity under his armor. He is such a perfectionist, such a hard ass, and yet he was tempted by acceptance and knowledge. The beauty is that he can be saved, and of course, Hermione is one of the very few people who is strong enough to take that task in hand. In some ways, she and Severus save each other from themselves, I think.
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
I'm sorry to say that he did, but like most things in life, this isn't permanent. I think that one of my favorite things about Severus is his humanity under his armor. He is such a perfectionist, such a hard ass, and yet he was tempted by acceptance and knowledge. The beauty is that he can be saved, and of course, Hermione is one of the very few people who is strong enough to take that task in hand. In some ways, she and Severus save each other from themselves, I think.
I love your time travel theory! very good story. and it becomes moot if she should or should not attempt to prevent him from taking the dark mark. a good time travel tale! Thanks for sharing this.
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
Thank you! Exactly - the past becomes the future whether we try to prevent it or not, which is what Hermione is going to have to realize.
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
Thank you! Exactly - the past becomes the future whether we try to prevent it or not, which is what Hermione is going to have to realize.
Well, that's a surprise. --Why wasn’t Dumbledore, the alleged epitome of Goodness and Light, willing to do the same? I think the operative word here is alleged. We can't mess with the plan, now, can we? Will Severus' taking the Dark Mark cause Hermione to tell him the truth about his future? This is a very unique way to time travel. Who would have thought little miss know-it-all would make such a faux pas!
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
You know, as much as I love Dumbledore, I can't bring myself to like him very much (I have relatives I feel much the same about). He spends so much time looking at the desired end result that he forgets that people aren't chess pieces to move about at his leisure. The operative word is definitely "alleged" when speaking of "the alleged epitome of Goodness and Light". Severus isn't going to believe Hermione under any circumstances right now because he's too angry to listen. It's amazing how when we've done something stupid and don't realize it, the last people we want to hear from are the people who are willing to point out that our Master Plan is flawed. Evidently, books and cleverness aren't everything, which I hope teaches her something....Thank you for a wonderful review!
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
You know, as much as I love Dumbledore, I can't bring myself to like him very much (I have relatives I feel much the same about). He spends so much time looking at the desired end result that he forgets that people aren't chess pieces to move about at his leisure. The operative word is definitely "alleged" when speaking of "the alleged epitome of Goodness and Light". Severus isn't going to believe Hermione under any circumstances right now because he's too angry to listen. It's amazing how when we've done something stupid and don't realize it, the last people we want to hear from are the people who are willing to point out that our Master Plan is flawed. Evidently, books and cleverness aren't everything, which I hope teaches her something....Thank you for a wonderful review!
I don't think it's too soon. They've had a few days to figure out that they like each other, some nicely intimate moments, and that sort of deeper understanding you think you have when you're young. Besides, teenagers are a randy lot. I'm not so old I have forgotten that. I never write virgin sex, and rarely read it, but this is completely believable.
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
It may be too soon under some circumstances, but Hermione has known Severus since she was eleven, even if he can't say the same (or even know the same, in this case). He's familliar, and yet, he's strange, because she hasn't seen this side of him. I think it was an intelligent chance to take; she loves him and this may be her last opportunity to show him before she leaves. I would have done the same thing, but then... I probably would have slept with Severus, regardless.Teenagers? Randy? Surely, you jest! I'm glad you like this virgin sex. I don't usually write it either, and try not to read it because it's so often poorly done, and to be honest, I'm glad you find this believable. It was somewhat of a struggle to make it seem real, and I still find myself wondering if I did it justice.
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
It may be too soon under some circumstances, but Hermione has known Severus since she was eleven, even if he can't say the same (or even know the same, in this case). He's familliar, and yet, he's strange, because she hasn't seen this side of him. I think it was an intelligent chance to take; she loves him and this may be her last opportunity to show him before she leaves. I would have done the same thing, but then... I probably would have slept with Severus, regardless.Teenagers? Randy? Surely, you jest! I'm glad you like this virgin sex. I don't usually write it either, and try not to read it because it's so often poorly done, and to be honest, I'm glad you find this believable. It was somewhat of a struggle to make it seem real, and I still find myself wondering if I did it justice.
I like what you've done with this pair. Very interesting way to get around the age difference, and give us a chance to meet young Severus on his own terms. The gentle romance of sharing food is lovely.
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
Thank you! You know, that food sharing was a last minute inspiration, but it's added a lot to the piece. I love gentle romance. Passion and excitement have their place and are wonderful in their own right, but I like to think that Severus has a gentle side that shows itself under the right conditions.
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
Thank you! You know, that food sharing was a last minute inspiration, but it's added a lot to the piece. I love gentle romance. Passion and excitement have their place and are wonderful in their own right, but I like to think that Severus has a gentle side that shows itself under the right conditions.
Oh, well done! I like this story a great deal.
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
Thank you so very much!
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
Thank you so very much!
Nice segue into the past. The river scene had a bit of Ophelia in it, so for a moment, I was worried. I like your style.
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
Oh, no. There will be no drownings here, not at all! Your comment does make me wonder if there's a possibility of a Hamletesque story for that ship - with no suicides, of course.Thank you! I appreciate it!
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
Oh, no. There will be no drownings here, not at all! Your comment does make me wonder if there's a possibility of a Hamletesque story for that ship - with no suicides, of course.Thank you! I appreciate it!
Delightful beginning. I'm intrigued. Your description is good and the writing really flows.
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
Thank you very much! This has been a fun story to write, and I'm enthused that you're getting into it. :o)
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
Thank you very much! This has been a fun story to write, and I'm enthused that you're getting into it. :o)
I don't think it's too early. Hermione has known Snape for 6 years. She knows he's in the the Order so she already trusts him. She's figured out that he knew about the paradox. Besides, it's a hot young Snape! Where do I sign up?I wonder what contemporary Snape is thinking. Is Hermione experiencing time in real time?Generally I don't go for time travel, but I can't wait for more!
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
See, these are my thoughts, too, because this is a familliar person to her - only now he's hawt. I'd like to sign up, too, please! I'm glad you agree. :o)No time can pass while she's gone, because it's already happened, so regardless of what he thinks, he'll go to bed that night, and get up the next morning - and as far as he knows, life will go on as usual. Poor Severus, he does have a hard time of it, doesn't he?YAY! To be honest, I don't either, but this thought plagued me and wouldn't leave me alone until I succumbed to its whims.Thanks so much for your review!Lizzsapphire_pheonix's response: so.... when's more???sapphire_pheonix's response: there are two extra chapters on Ashwinder? more! more!
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
See, these are my thoughts, too, because this is a familliar person to her - only now he's hawt. I'd like to sign up, too, please! I'm glad you agree. :o)No time can pass while she's gone, because it's already happened, so regardless of what he thinks, he'll go to bed that night, and get up the next morning - and as far as he knows, life will go on as usual. Poor Severus, he does have a hard time of it, doesn't he?YAY! To be honest, I don't either, but this thought plagued me and wouldn't leave me alone until I succumbed to its whims.Thanks so much for your review!Lizzsapphire_pheonix's response: so.... when's more???sapphire_pheonix's response: there are two extra chapters on Ashwinder? more! more!
Quick, but understandable. I just wonder what all of this will mean for the future. On the Simpsons, Homer swatted a mosquito in the past and returned to have all of his family with forked lizard tongues. I'm just sayin'.Ultimately, I hope they can continue with this in the future and that he doesn't come to hate her for her leaving,
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
Hermione is a far cry from Homer Simpson, if only because, for the life of me, I can't picture Hermione saying, "D'Oh!" No, you're absolutely right. Everything she does now will have some impact on the future. I doubt seriously that her family will wind up with forked lizard tongues (How's she going to explain THAT to her parents??), but she will probably cause things to happen that she does not expect. Snape hates everyone for everything because he's a very bitter person. He's going to be upset no matter what she does, so she may as well do what she thinks is right, which apparently encompasses sleeping with him. I know I would have.
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
Hermione is a far cry from Homer Simpson, if only because, for the life of me, I can't picture Hermione saying, "D'Oh!" No, you're absolutely right. Everything she does now will have some impact on the future. I doubt seriously that her family will wind up with forked lizard tongues (How's she going to explain THAT to her parents??), but she will probably cause things to happen that she does not expect. Snape hates everyone for everything because he's a very bitter person. He's going to be upset no matter what she does, so she may as well do what she thinks is right, which apparently encompasses sleeping with him. I know I would have.
That was a scary dream. I wonder if it's significant? As for their eating habits, Oh man!
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
It was scary, but no, not significant. I just wanted to be graphic. The eating habits, though? Very significant, and also very sexy.
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
It was scary, but no, not significant. I just wanted to be graphic. The eating habits, though? Very significant, and also very sexy.
He would have done that even if she wasn't in love and just willing.
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
*giggle* He's a seventeen-year-old boy! They're all like that, aren't they! Heck, I know men three times that age that are STILL like that... Thanks for reviewing! I love to hear what people think. :o)
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
*giggle* He's a seventeen-year-old boy! They're all like that, aren't they! Heck, I know men three times that age that are STILL like that... Thanks for reviewing! I love to hear what people think. :o)
I tried to find a lemon emoticon, but nothing was good enough. Yay!! Aw, heck, it's not too early. Just because JKR has those kids so uptight and virginal doesn't mean squat. I mean, if they were real, they'd have done it. I'm sure of it. Especially since we want it. LOLExcellent job! I have this feeling, though, in the pit of my stomach that Dumbledore will find a way to get her back and she won't be able to say goodbye ... and well, hence Snarky Snape. Please tell me I'm not right. Oh, don't tell me. I don't want to know. I'll just wait to be surprised like everyone else... (You can tell me if you want to though.)
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
You know, a lemon emoticon is not a bad idea. Someone should make one... Lemon-shaped with a "I've just been laid" look on its face. Want it... Of course... Of course, they want it. *hides puppet strings* *sheepish giggle*No, really, I think they're acting like seventeen-year-old kids, and what HG/SS shipper WOULDN'T like to catch Severus on his first time (or any other time, for that matter)??Thank you! It means a lot when you say that! I won't tell you if you're wrong or right (a) because I think you'd rather savor this than have it all at once, and (b) because you'll find out in Chapter Six, which should hit the queue this weekend. *hugs* Thanks, T. You always write an awesome review.
Response from etherealizabeth (Author of Up the River)
You know, a lemon emoticon is not a bad idea. Someone should make one... Lemon-shaped with a "I've just been laid" look on its face. Want it... Of course... Of course, they want it. *hides puppet strings* *sheepish giggle*No, really, I think they're acting like seventeen-year-old kids, and what HG/SS shipper WOULDN'T like to catch Severus on his first time (or any other time, for that matter)??Thank you! It means a lot when you say that! I won't tell you if you're wrong or right (a) because I think you'd rather savor this than have it all at once, and (b) because you'll find out in Chapter Six, which should hit the queue this weekend. *hugs* Thanks, T. You always write an awesome review.