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Potions Under Duress Come Back To Me
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Come Back To Me

1: Prologue

2: Underwater.

3: Somewhere In Between

4: Distractions

5: A Time To Grieve

6: Everything Passes By

7: Realisations and Revelations

8: Leave Me Sleeping

Come Back To Me

savine_snape

57 Reviews   |   57 Ratings, 0 Likes, 78 Favorites )

Angst Romance Smut Potions Under Duress 24,877 Words 8 Chapters WIP
Hermione Granger Lucius Malfoy Minerva McGonagall Narcissa Malfoy Original Character Severus Snape

An Extension of my Romancing The Wizard story - Lost and Found. Their romance had been, through necessity, brief yet intense, infuriatingly unconsummated, but nevertheless significant for them both. Moments were grasped whenever possible: when he brought her notes about the Horcruxes when the boys were away. What happens after the events of the Battle of Hogwarts.

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Chapters (8)

Chapter 1: Prologue

Chapter 2: Underwater.

Chapter 3: Somewhere In Between

Chapter 4: Distractions

Chapter 5: A Time To Grieve

Chapter 6: Everything Passes By

Chapter 7: Realisations and Revelations

Chapter 8: Leave Me Sleeping


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savine_snape

Member Since 2007  |  25 Stories  |  Favorited by 47  |  93 Reviews Written  |  383 Review Responses



What can I say a 30 something mother of 1 who works as a clinical chemist in a path lab and has a 'thing', if its possible to have a 'thing' for a character, for a certain Potions Master.

RL has stalled the plot bunnies and I've no idea if/when I'll feel like writing again. 

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10/10

braye27

C'mon, Severus.   Wake up!  We need for you to wake up and return to Hermione... she's so sad.Maz, I can't tell you how much I adore this story!  Sometimes I get chills just thinking about Severus being in a coma, and wanting Hermione to know he is alive...It's brilliant!  Beth

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Awww Beth,You always manage to make me smile when you leave a review. Severus does need to wake up but it won't all be sunshine and roses when he does finally wake, there is more angst to come. I can't tell you how much I appreciate your reviews both here and at my LJ. The next chapter, Distractions, is currently passing between myself and my two wonderfully talented beta's, the adorable Scoffy and the bewitching little_beloved.I struggled with writer block for a bit this month but I have the bit between my teeth again and the next three chapters after distraction are outlined and waiting to be written.Hugs and much loveMaz

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Awww Beth,You always manage to make me smile when you leave a review. Severus does need to wake up but it won't all be sunshine and roses when he does finally wake, there is more angst to come. I can't tell you how much I appreciate your reviews both here and at my LJ. The next chapter, Distractions, is currently passing between myself and my two wonderfully talented beta's, the adorable Scoffy and the bewitching little_beloved.I struggled with writer block for a bit this month but I have the bit between my teeth again and the next three chapters after distraction are outlined and waiting to be written.Hugs and much loveMaz

0/10

Pissenoffanis

Promising storyline! I can tell I'm going to like this story :) Can't wait to read more!PS Kudos for using Underwater by VH - I love that song too :D

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Thanks for the review the third chapter Distractions is written and is being polished as I type this by me two wonderfully gifted beta's.Underwater sums up beautifully how Hermione is feeling at the minute, she wants to move forward but she is still grieving for Severus.

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Thanks for the review the third chapter Distractions is written and is being polished as I type this by me two wonderfully gifted beta's.Underwater sums up beautifully how Hermione is feeling at the minute, she wants to move forward but she is still grieving for Severus.

10/10

braye27

This is so awesome that Severus is waking just enough to whisper Hermione's name.  Lucius and Narcissa are taking such good care of him, and I'm certain wakefulness isn't far away for our Severus.  Minerva will keep an eye on Hermione until Severus can do that himself. 8^)Every time I read this I find another reason to love it!!!Hugs, Beth

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Oh Beth, You have no idea how much your words make my heart soar. I am struggling with writting the fifth chapter - well in truth chapter four coz of the prologue. Indeed, Minerva has Hermione's best interests at heart and she will help her as much as she can. And Lulu and Cissa owe Severus so much, they will do their best for him.Until next time, Take care and much LoveMaz X

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Oh Beth, You have no idea how much your words make my heart soar. I am struggling with writting the fifth chapter - well in truth chapter four coz of the prologue. Indeed, Minerva has Hermione's best interests at heart and she will help her as much as she can. And Lulu and Cissa owe Severus so much, they will do their best for him.Until next time, Take care and much LoveMaz X

0/10

Mint Stick

What a heartbreaking beginning! It's rather fortunate we know Severus is alive, even if poor Hermione doesn't.Looking forward to more!

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Thank you for leaving a review. I have another two chapters written and another bubbling away.I should get the next chapter off to my second beta sometime today. :D

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Thank you for leaving a review. I have another two chapters written and another bubbling away.I should get the next chapter off to my second beta sometime today. :D

10/10

gabi1791

Wow, I'm very intrigued by this story!! I'm looking forward to more!!!

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Thank you, I hope to have more up by the middle to end of next week. :D

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Thank you, I hope to have more up by the middle to end of next week. :D

0/10

Isode

Ah, a story where everyone knows that they have some sort of relationship, what a nice surprise! I wonder if the house elves will take up the cause to bring these two together?

Great update because you brought a tear to my eye.

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Awww, I really didn't realise that it would provoke people to cry. I did shed a few tears as I wrote this chapter but that's because I did get lost in it whilst I was writting it.I hope to get the next chapter off to my second beta later today. So the next chapter should be up sometime next week.

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Awww, I really didn't realise that it would provoke people to cry. I did shed a few tears as I wrote this chapter but that's because I did get lost in it whilst I was writting it.I hope to get the next chapter off to my second beta later today. So the next chapter should be up sometime next week.

10/10

blue artemis

You would think he would head over to the Headmistress immediately.  Oh, that was so sad, Winky wasn't the only one crying.  

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Ahhh dear Lucius will make his move in the next chapter. Thank you for leavinf a review, I'm sorry I made you cry, but Hermione is still feeling the pain at the moment. Things will slowly improve.

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Ahhh dear Lucius will make his move in the next chapter. Thank you for leavinf a review, I'm sorry I made you cry, but Hermione is still feeling the pain at the moment. Things will slowly improve.

10/10

Redzer

Hey there - I can't wait to read more of your story. I must admit you caught me shedding tears alongside the elf there near the end.... so sad, the grief Hermione feels. I hope Severus can pull through to replace that emotion with happiness. Lucius needs to get a move on and get Hermione to the bedside of Severus so he can recover fully ! Please update soon...while I dab my eyes and blow my nose - I wait with eagerness for your next chapter. Nice writing too, I got lost in these first two chapters and felt I was in the story.

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Thank you for leaving such a lovely review.This is an expansion of 'Lost and Found' and is my attempt at filling in the missing parts of that sweet little one-shot.Lucius will seek out Minerva in the next chapter and progress is made by everyine concerned. I just need to tidy the chapter up a bit and see what little_beloved makes of it, and then I will get it up here.

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Thank you for leaving such a lovely review.This is an expansion of 'Lost and Found' and is my attempt at filling in the missing parts of that sweet little one-shot.Lucius will seek out Minerva in the next chapter and progress is made by everyine concerned. I just need to tidy the chapter up a bit and see what little_beloved makes of it, and then I will get it up here.

10/10

snitchette

I like this beginning very much. I hope to read the next very soon.

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Thank you for your review. The next chapter is being polished as I write this. I have the next three chapters written so I will polish and post regular updates in an attempt to tempt the muse to write another chapter.

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Thank you for your review. The next chapter is being polished as I write this. I have the next three chapters written so I will polish and post regular updates in an attempt to tempt the muse to write another chapter.

10/10

braye27

This is so hauntingly beautiful, Savine.  I loved Lost and Found, and I can't tell you how happy I was to see this story posted.  I'll check often to make sure I see the when the next chapter is up, cuz I'm hooked!Beth

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Ah Beth, your kind words make this author blush.I'm so glad that you are enjoying this fic. As you know I already have the next threechapter's written adn the next one is set to simmering.*hugs* Sav

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Ah Beth, your kind words make this author blush.I'm so glad that you are enjoying this fic. As you know I already have the next threechapter's written adn the next one is set to simmering.*hugs* Sav

0/10

Isode

Great start!You know I think this is the first time I have read this scene wrtten out.  It's always alluded to but in the stories I have read never written. Great job, I can't wait for the next update.

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

*blushes*Thank you, the next three chapters are written and just need polishing up a bit, and the fifth chapter is simmering gently. :D

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

*blushes*Thank you, the next three chapters are written and just need polishing up a bit, and the fifth chapter is simmering gently. :D

10/10

mummy

I think I'm really going to like this Thank you

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Thank you for leaving a review. The next chapter is currently being polished up. I have three chapter's written already and a fourth is simmering gently.

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Thank you for leaving a review. The next chapter is currently being polished up. I have three chapter's written already and a fourth is simmering gently.

10/10

blue artemis

Oh, that poor girl.

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Indeed, I do feel a little guilty aout causing her so much pain, but it will be alright in the end. :D

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Indeed, I do feel a little guilty aout causing her so much pain, but it will be alright in the end. :D

0/10

kimjo2

what an interesting story.  happily, i know it's going to have a satisfactory ending.  thanks so much

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

I'm so glad that you enjoy this story.Thanks for leaving a review.

0/10

sunny33

What will she find at Spinner's End? Hopefully, its master!

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

A little bit more will be revealed with the next chapter, which is currently having the final sparkle added.Thanks for taking the time to leave a review.

0/10

Isode

I can see with the introduction of Padrig that their long awaited reunion will not be as unincumbered as hoped.That's ok because it means that this story has many more wonderful updates to come.

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

*blush* I'm so glad that you are looking forward to more chapters.Padraig has an important role to play in the next chapter, suffice to say; Ginny and Minerva have encouraged her to think about the future.Thanks for taking time to leave a review.

10/10

snitchette

I would have aborted this attempt at writingWhat shame ot would have been. Please don't stop. It's such a wonderful story. A bit sad for the moment bu tI hope they'll be reunited some day (not too far away ;)

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Awww, Thank you

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

, you've brought a smile to my face.I'm sorry this is a little angsty at the moment. Most SS/HG stories have them get together, but they don't cover how Hermione must have felt after Severus 'died' the idea of this story is to look at how they both are affected by what happened during the Battle of Hogwarts.Thanks for taking the time to leave a review, it means a lot.

Sav

10/10

braye27

So now Hermione is going to have lunch with Padraig.  Albus and Minerva obviously know who he is, but we do not yet know.  This chapter is so full of longing, and in places it breaks my heart.  I don't want Hermione to forget about Snape.  I do want Severus to ask Lucius to bring Hermione to his side.Well done, dear!  I can't wait to see your next update!  8^)Beth

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Ah, Beth,Fear not this is an SS/HG story. I am sorry about the angst at the minute but there is a pin prick of light on the horizon.Padraig has a specific role in the story; He's not been added to completely distract Hermione.Hermione is still feeling the loss of Severus, and I doubt that she will be ready to find someone else.The next chapter is almost there, I need to slip in another section and then I will be truly happy with it. I hope to get it up before Christmas, if not certainly before New Year. Thanks for taking the time to leave a review, it means a lot.*hugs*Sav

10/10

Maddie

Why the devil hasn't Lucius had Hermione visit Severus? Is it because she is Muggleborn? Severus obviously wants and needs her. Hermione is obviously suffering without Severus. Lucius surely found this out from Minerva. If the Malfoys are keeping them apart for their own reasons, they are not being true friends. As for this new guy, a cross between Albus and a Weasley? Shudder.

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

,The next chapter will go some way to explaining why Lucius hasn't brought Hermione to Severus' side. Hermione feels the loss of Severus deeply.As for Padraig; he has a very specific role in the next few chapters, but his presence won't lessen Hermione's feelings towards Severus.Thanks for taking the time to leave a review, it means a great deal.

10/10

Mint Stick

Yay, I've finally managed to catch up with the last two chapters!I'm enjoying this a lot - and intrigued, too. I do wonder why no one has seen it fit to inform the very obviously grieving Hermione that Severus is alive, and, now, also awake. I can only assume they (Minerva in particular) have some sort of plan in mind.

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Yay, I'm so glad you've found time to catch up :DThe next chapter will explain why Lucius is keeping quiet about Severus' survival.As for Minerva having a plan; she has learnt from the best in the business of planning. *g*I'm so glad you are enjoying this story so far, and thanks for taking time to leave a review.

10/10

Nessa

The harm would be that Severus would mind! lol x

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Ah, indeed. Severus has survived the bite with all his snark intact.The next few chapters will answer more questions.Thanks for taking time to leave a review.x

0/10

alatariel leralonde

Why hasn't Lucius let Hermione see Severus? Why hasn't Severus asked to see her? Please, don't let her become involved with someone else while Severus lives! I have been following this story from the first, and will be better at reviewing! It's very well done, you capture Hermione's emotions very well, and I look forward to the next chapter!

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

alatarieal,Fear not, Lucius' lack of action wrt informing Hermione of Severus' survival will be explained in the next chapter. I am trying to keep Severus as close to canon as possible so he has survived with his snark intact.Hermione is in no state to move on from Severus with someone else at the minute. She has to face Spinner's End and Padraig has a very distinct role to play.I'm so glad you think I'm capturing Hermione emotion's. This chapter in particular has been back and forth between myself and my two truly amazing beta's and I can't thank Scoffy enough for her encouragement.Thanks for taking the time to leave a review,  and I hope you continue to enjoy this story.I hope to have the next chapter up before the New Year.Sav  

10/10

snitchette

This is so beautifully sad and so brilliantly written. You brought tears more than once in this chapter. And I guess that Severus' recovery depends on Hermione's state of depression. I just hope they'll be reunited in the end.This is such a wonderful story, please keep writing.

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Aw, Snitchette,Thanks for such a heart warming review.I'm sorry that I brought tears to you, although Hermione really is struggling with coming to terms with Severus' 'death'.The next few chapters will move the story forward and some topics will be explained.Thanks for taking time to leave a review.Sav x

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Aw, Snitchette,Thanks for such a heart warming review.I'm sorry that I brought tears to you, although Hermione really is struggling with coming to terms with Severus' 'death'.The next few chapters will move the story forward and some topics will be explained.Thanks for taking time to leave a review.Sav x

10/10

snitchette

I'm overwhelmed by Hermione's state of depression. It must be a difficult period going through the death of one's love but living in death is not the solution.I hope things will get better in the future.

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Thanks for the review, Snitchette, I'm sorry I've taken so long to respond.Hermione is struggling with Severus' 'death' and throwing herself into her studies is only prolonging the inevitable need to grieve for her loss.This is most definately an SS/HG story so all will be well in the end, it's just our duo have a way to go before they get there.I hope you continue to enjoy this story.Sav x

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Thanks for the review, Snitchette, I'm sorry I've taken so long to respond.Hermione is struggling with Severus' 'death' and throwing herself into her studies is only prolonging the inevitable need to grieve for her loss.This is most definately an SS/HG story so all will be well in the end, it's just our duo have a way to go before they get there.I hope you continue to enjoy this story.Sav x

10/10

countrymouse

I fell in love with this story on your LJ, and am thrilled to find it here on TPP.  Now I don't have to worry that I'll miss an update!  Hope you're recuperating well, and that all the completed chapters from your LJ, plus a NEW one, will soon be up! 

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Awww, thanks Honey.recuperation is slow and steady. I'm so glad that you are enjoying this story. My OC is not being forth coming at the mment so I have stalled, however, as you know I have three more chapters written that I will post over the next few weeks and hopefully said character will start to play nicely.*hugs*

Response from savine_snape (Author of Come Back To Me)

Awww, thanks Honey.recuperation is slow and steady. I'm so glad that you are enjoying this story. My OC is not being forth coming at the mment so I have stalled, however, as you know I have three more chapters written that I will post over the next few weeks and hopefully said character will start to play nicely.*hugs*

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