Morning After
Chapter 2 of 2
sunny33It is the morning after the night before, and body parts cannot be mentioned.
ReviewedMorning After
A/N: This was written for a Potter Place Chat Challenge. The couple have sex the morning after the wedding night. The challenge was NOT to mention any body parts at all.
Hermione woke as the sun was rising, casting streaks of pink-washed light into the room. She stretched languidly and felt a warm body beside her. Her husband. Her very skilful, sexy, brilliant husband. She mulled over the events of the night before. The passion… the emotion… the exultation.
Rising carefully, so as not to disturb him, she went to the bathroom to use the toilet, toothbrush, and shower. While lazily enjoying the sting of the hot needle-like jets of water, she startled when a naked, lean form pressed up against her.
“Hmm, I see you are awake.” She nudged backwards at the evidence of his morning arousal which was making itself known.
“Awake and ready for action,” he whispered, slowly rubbing sweet-smelling lather all over her. Gently thrusting forwards, he slipped into place, finding himself surrounded by welcoming, wet heat. His growl of pleasure was joined by hers.
She directed him down to her point of need, encouraging his caresses and moving with him to deepen his penetration.
“More… more… yes… mmm…” She became inarticulate as the flood of warmth pooled in that one special place.
He continued to move within her rhythmically, gradually increasing the pace to match her demands.
“If I knew… that this was all it took… to render you speechless… I would have done it long ago, Mrs Snape,” he told her. His breathless use of her married name tipped her over the edge as he joined her in shared rapture.
Hermione returned to awareness to find that she was still wrapped in her wizard’s embrace. She turned to him and grinned at his sated expression. “I guess we shouldn’t be doing that once term starts again,” she teased. “Imagine what the students would think if you arrived at breakfast looking like the cat that’s got the cream! They might be silly enough to imagine you would go easy on them in class.”
“They would be sadly mistaken then, wouldn’t they?” he retorted, flicking her with the end of the towel.
“Oi! Don’t start something you can’t finish, husband mine! I’ll have you know I am a champion towel flicker. Comes from hanging out with those boys.”
“Don’t mention those two while we are both naked, woman, or I will have to do something to take your mind off them,” he threatened as he moved closer.
“Ooh, please do…”
The End
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Latest 25 Reviews for Wedding Night Nerves
22 Reviews | 8.64/10 Average
You did a superb job with this challenge. Good idea to avoid body part names. Liked it a lot. Thank you for writing and sharing.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
Thanks for leaving a review. :)
Not mentioning body parts is tough, but you managed (and well)."Comes from hanging out with those boys.” “Don’t mention those two while we are both naked, woman, or I will have to do something to take your mind off them,” he threatened as he moved closer. Oooh, like invite them to join? Just sayin' ...
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
You have a filthy mind. I like! :)
So much hidden under those robes, if only people knew. No, just as well people didn't know, she would have competition.If she only knew how much competition she really has. :)Good for him for being so patient with her. Why do I know it is going to pay off?
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
Because you're one smart cookie. :)
Anonymous
Good one, mate. 
Author's Response: Ta, chook! 
Anonymous
Cool. Very sweet.
Author's Response: Note, no pounding! :P
I thought this was amusing and sweet. A very nice way to tie the 2 fics in a neat little bow. 
And believe me, if I thought Severus would attack me for mentioning "those two," I would take off in a rant. HA HA!Well done.Cheers,Stef 
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
LOL, rant away, you never know what you will get. ;)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
LOL, rant away, you never know what you will get. ;)
It is amazing what you can convey in so few words. I thought the level of anxiety was just right for an inexperienced Hermione. Knowing her desire to be perfect, it makes it that much more realistic.Lol, I also loved that Severus was amused when she got demanding. 
Great job!Cheers,Stef
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
Thanks, Stef! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
Thanks, Stef! :)
*big toothy smile on my face* I'm addicted to this kind of situations. You couldn't make me more happy.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
LOL. Not a bad addiction!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
LOL. Not a bad addiction!
Love this greatly.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
Thanks, Snitchette! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
Thanks, Snitchette! :)
Oh a playful Severus I love it. No way this is the end. ~pouts~ if you must
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
I've already copped the blame for inducing smuttiness at chat. It's someone else's turn to think of a prompt!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
I've already copped the blame for inducing smuttiness at chat. It's someone else's turn to think of a prompt!
This was really good.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
LOL. Thabnks for reviewing.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
LOL. Thabnks for reviewing.
wonderful! thanks!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
Thanks! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
Thanks! :)
very craftily written
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
Was kind of tricky, not mentioning any body parts. But I made up the rule, so I can't complain!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
Was kind of tricky, not mentioning any body parts. But I made up the rule, so I can't complain!
Absolutely wonderful, I loved it. Promise to have more chats that inspire to great ideas like this:-))
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
Someone else's turn to come up with the prompt. I am getting a reputation LOL. Thanks for reviewing!
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
Someone else's turn to come up with the prompt. I am getting a reputation LOL. Thanks for reviewing!
I enjoyed that. Smutty, yet not overboard! And their interactions were romantic as well as desirous.
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
Too overboard and you get wet LOL. Thanks, Deb :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
Too overboard and you get wet LOL. Thanks, Deb :)
Am I the only one who didn't write virgin!hermione for this one? I'll have to go back and look.This is really lovely, absolutely "good smut", and romantic to boot :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
LOL, you must be! Thanks for reviewing :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
LOL, you must be! Thanks for reviewing :)
Anonymous
Ah, that was a sublime wedding night. Not too much of the jitters, which is usually overdone, but just right. And how I LOVE her taking like that. So refreshing, and honestly, so perfect. Allows her to control movement and depth and sensation... Gods, perfect, sunny!
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks Lu! :)
Of course she has read about it ;-)This was very sweet, if 'sweet' is a word that can be used to describe smut.Thanks for sharing. /M
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
Yes, sweet smut is a bit of an oxymoron, isn't it LOL :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
Yes, sweet smut is a bit of an oxymoron, isn't it LOL :)
Very nice, sunny! Definitely good smut :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
Thanks , Cyn! :)
Response from sunny33 (Author of Wedding Night Nerves)
Thanks , Cyn! :)
