You did a superb job with this challenge. Good idea to avoid body part names. Liked it a lot. Thank you for writing and sharing.

Not mentioning body parts is tough, but you managed (and well)."Comes from hanging out with those boys.” “Don’t mention those two while we are both naked, woman, or I will have to do something to take your mind off them,” he threatened as he moved closer. Oooh, like invite them to join?  Just sayin' ...

So much hidden under those robes, if only people knew. No, just as well people didn't know, she would have competition.If she only knew how much competition she really  has. :)Good for him for being so patient with her.  Why do I know it is going to pay off?

Great story

Good one, mate. 


Author's Response: Ta, chook!

Cool.  Very sweet. 


Author's Response: Note, no pounding! :P

I thought this was amusing and sweet.  A very nice way to tie the 2 fics in a neat little bow. And believe me, if I thought Severus would attack me for mentioning "those two," I would take off in a rant.  HA HA!Well done.Cheers,Stef

It is amazing what you can convey in so few words.  I thought the level of anxiety was just right for an inexperienced Hermione.  Knowing her desire to be perfect, it makes it that much more realistic.Lol, I also loved that Severus was amused when she got demanding.  Great job!Cheers,Stef

*big toothy smile on my face* I'm addicted to this kind of situations. You couldn't make me more happy.

Love this greatly.

Oh a playful Severus I love it.  No way this is the end.  ~pouts~  if you must

This was really good. 

wonderful!  thanks!

very craftily written

Absolutely wonderful, I loved it. Promise to have more chats that inspire to great ideas like this:-))

I enjoyed that.  Smutty, yet not overboard!  And their interactions were romantic as well as desirous.

Am I the only one who didn't write virgin!hermione for this one?  I'll have to go back and look.This is really lovely, absolutely "good smut", and romantic to boot :)

Ah, that was a sublime wedding night. Not too much of the jitters, which is usually overdone, but just right. And how I LOVE her taking like that. So refreshing, and honestly, so perfect. Allows her to control movement and depth and sensation... Gods, perfect, sunny!

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks Lu! :)

Of course she has read about it ;-)This was very sweet, if 'sweet' is a word that can be used to describe smut.Thanks for sharing. /M

Very nice, sunny!  Definitely good smut :)

Lovely job! I normally don't appreciate Virgin!Hermione fics, but this one was surprisingly well done, especially for such a short one!

Yes, please do indeed... Another great story!!!