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Moreteadk

28 Reviews | 5.29/10 (28 Ratings, 0 Likes, 1 Favorite )

Humor General Alternate Universe Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 2,891 Words 1 Chapter Complete

Crookshanks Hermione Granger Severus Snape

Severus finally gets to teach DADA. Preparations for the class aren't really going entirely as he could have hoped.

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Moreteadk

Member Since 2006 | 17 Stories | Favorited by 19 | 146 Reviews Written | 250 Review Responses

Born in Denmark in the year of '79. Drink a lot of tea and is completely an utterly addicted to my dearly beloved LJ account. Feel free to friend me if you're so inclined.

I'm only posting my own favorites and newer stuff here. All my other stuff can be found at my fic comm on LJ, but I'm a fairly mediocre writer though, so consider yourself warned.

There's a lot of Draco/Hermione, a somewhat smaller amount of Severus/Hermione and a wide-ranged smattering of minor pairings including but not limited to Adrian/Hermione, Neville/Lavender, Albus/Sirius, Filch/Luna, Draco/Ginny, Harry/Pansy and Ron/Voldemort. There's also some general stuff and some original fics there.

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10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

I love Crookshank stories and this one is no different. Brilliant work.

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thanks. :)(Sorry, I'm so late in responding)

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thanks. :)(Sorry, I'm so late in responding)

0/10

phoenix

Neat twist on this. I love how it is through Crookshanks. Interestingly, I really think that you have captured an aging cat. LOL And I just loved his reaction to the kitten Patronus. I can so see one of my boys doing that. LOL

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Well, I've always been a cat-person, and the cat I had until may 2008 was an especially grumpy individual although she didn't actually get to be very old. She just had a Crookshanks-y temper. :)(Sorry, I'm so late in responding)

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0/10

CharmedForce

What an amazingly creative story! Gosh, the kittens and snakes thing didn't even click until I saw her Patronus. Fabulous!

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thanks. :) (Sorry, I'm so late in responding)

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thanks. :) (Sorry, I'm so late in responding)

0/10

Electryone

What a cute story, I love Crookshanks POV!

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thanks. :)(Sorry, I'm so late in responding)

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thanks. :)(Sorry, I'm so late in responding)

10/10

Arabella Bloodgood

Yes a Crooks story. Awesome

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thanks. :)The kitteh is sadly under appreciated (and would scratch me to pieces if he knew I referred to him as a 'kitteh')

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)

Probably but at least you can say you got Crooked. lol

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thanks. :)The kitteh is sadly under appreciated (and would scratch me to pieces if he knew I referred to him as a 'kitteh')

Response from Arabella Bloodgood (Reviewer)

Probably but at least you can say you got Crooked. lol

0/10

kimjo2

a kitten! not manly enough! love it! thanks so much

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thanks. :D

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thanks. :D

0/10

kimbee73

This was great. I love how you took two prompts and made them one story. It was really funny. I would love to know what kind of revenge Crookshanks gets on them both.

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thanks. The fact that there are two prompts was actually a bit of an accident. I was writing the one and suddenly realised that it also fit the other. :)

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thanks. The fact that there are two prompts was actually a bit of an accident. I was writing the one and suddenly realised that it also fit the other. :)

9/10

Shadow

I really enjoyed seeing the Severus and Hermione relationship through a cats eyes. That Severus has a kitten Patronus is too funny! I would love to know what sort of revenge Crookshanks get on Hermione.

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

You're not the only one. :D Unfortunately I just couldn't come up with anything sufficiently mean for him to do. :p

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

You're not the only one. :D Unfortunately I just couldn't come up with anything sufficiently mean for him to do. :p

10/10

Dreamy_Dragon

I loved to read this from Crookshanks's pov!

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thanks. :D

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thanks. :D

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I really enjoyed this. hahhaa

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thank you. :)

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thank you. :)

10/10

pookah

This is such fun! Kittens and snakes, from Crookshanks's POV. brilliant! Thank you for sharing this delightful tale.

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thank you for commenting. :) I'm glad you liked it.

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thank you for commenting. :) I'm glad you liked it.

10/10

beaweasley2

This is delightful. You really have me thinking I'm in the cat's mind and I love how you've portayed him. well done.

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

I do? Wow, thank you so much. :D

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

I do? Wow, thank you so much. :D

0/10

StormySkize

A very entertaining take on both prompts.

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thank you. :D(Sorry, I'm so late in responding)

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thank you. :D(Sorry, I'm so late in responding)

10/10

FlittterKat

Your Crookshanks was really funny and loveable. I really liked the idea of him leaving Severus a "present" in his shoe, too funny. "The Dark Arts and the defence against them have nothing to do with foolish wand-waving, Hermione," the male said. "It's about precision and power. It's speed and tactics, it's"
was also one of my favorite lines of the story. I'll definitely want to re-read your story when I need to be cheered up. Thanks for the laughs!

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

You're quite welcome, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)(Sorry, I'm so late in responding)

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

You're quite welcome, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)(Sorry, I'm so late in responding)

0/10

pyjamapants

Loved the Crookshanks POV, especially his commentary on their mating habits. Hmm, it seems that an angry Snape is an amorous Snape. If Hermione's smart, she'll bribe first years to misbehave.

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

LOL! Well, he's not allowed to take it out on the students, so he'll have to find some other form of outlet. :p(Sorry, I'm so late in responding)

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

LOL! Well, he's not allowed to take it out on the students, so he'll have to find some other form of outlet. :p(Sorry, I'm so late in responding)

0/10

Moreteadk

Ha! I wonder how Crookshanks is planning on punishing Hermione. (And how Severus is going to react when he finds the 'present' in his shoe...)

Response from Moreteadk (Reviewer)

HAHAHA!!! A sneaky-sneak fake comment from me to myself! I was just trying to throw people off if they thought they had guessed me. :p

Response from Moreteadk (Reviewer)

HAHAHA!!! A sneaky-sneak fake comment from me to myself! I was just trying to throw people off if they thought they had guessed me. :p

0/10

elsolel

Very well thought out! I liked the story a lot. I can imagine trying to lick ink off and ICK! And of course red ink would taste worse, right? hehehe

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Yes, I can't imagine it would taste very nice. And he'd get a red tongue too. Probably a good thing it wasn't green ink then. :D

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Yes, I can't imagine it would taste very nice. And he'd get a red tongue too. Probably a good thing it wasn't green ink then. :D

10/10

reets67

I absolutely love it! You seem to catch Crooks' inner meow beatifully (plus those of the bipeds). If I could, I would drop a mouse or a bird at your feet in appreciation (hee hee!)I know this seems to be a one-shot, but any more?Cheers

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Inner meow. :D I like that. But sorry, it's just a one-shot :)

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Inner meow. :D I like that. But sorry, it's just a one-shot :)

9/10

debjunk

That was a great combination of those two prompts. Kudos on your imagination. A kitten Patronus! Lol

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thank you. :D

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thank you. :D

10/10

Severina52

Make some more plz :)

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Not on this one, sorry. :)

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Not on this one, sorry. :)

10/10

kittylefish

i like this so much! i think you did an admirable job of keeping the story to crookshanks' pov. and snape with a kitten patronus - i can barely contain my hilarity! i also particularly enjoyed crookshanks' inability to understand why the mated humans would deliberately bait one another. it's something i have difficulty understanding myself, sometimes.

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thanks a lot. It was harder than I thought too, but I think it turned out okay. :)

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thanks a lot. It was harder than I thought too, but I think it turned out okay. :)

10/10

snitchette

That is absolutely delighting. I wonder what poor Crookshanks will say when his humans start having "kittens" ...

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Who yank his tail and pet him too hard. Poor kitty. He'll probably spend a lot of time hiding.

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Who yank his tail and pet him too hard. Poor kitty. He'll probably spend a lot of time hiding.

10/10

blue artemis

Bwah ha ha ha. That was funny. Although I wonder how he got it to change yet again.

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Well, he was making quite an effort to be as mean as possible and eventually, not matter how much the kitten was a representation of Hermione, it just didn't fit anymore and changed.Of course now that he got it to change to something more satisfactory, he'll probably revert to his usual habits and eventually discover that it has reverted into a kitten. How mean am I? :p

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

10/10

Sampdoria

A brilliant solution to the prompt, I just loved your story!

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thank you. :D

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thank you. :D

0/10

septentrion

I like story with Crooks's POV. It's certainly refreshing.

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thanks. :D

Response from Moreteadk (Author of Expecto Patronum!)

Thanks. :D

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