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A Bet
Malloren Fatima Sims25 Reviews | 5.64/10 (25 Ratings, 0 Likes, 31 Favorites )
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Malloren Fatima Sims
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Yeah right, just this once. This was a nice version of these two. Would love to know more.
Well done! I'm curious if you are going to continue this, because it would be interesting to know how they arrive to this scene.Lisi
she should have known better than to bet with a Slytherine. But well, i don't think she minds losing...
Cute story. Reads really well - good writing!
short and sweet. yay!
ok, i love this story. very nicely done. definitely going to be added to my favorites! :D
looooooooooove itttt
I liked it. More chapters would be great! Angela
Lovely piece of Draco/Hermione here. :) You are on fanfiction.net, correct? I remember you reviewing one of my stories. So, returning the favor, I adore the D/Hr pairing and very mcuh enjoyed your piece. On to the next one!
hahaha. that was funny. :)
Ahh.. got to love a good gratutitous sex scene. Thanks. Am writing my own at the mo' and was worried I took it too far for this particular site, but now I feel much better. Keep up the good work. reads really well. kate
How Slytherin of Draco. How typical of Hermione's curiosity-driven nature to take him up on the bet. And... how perectly understandable that they would each be caught up in it.
I think the boy had that planned out.. muahaha
PWP??
sweet dont cha just love draco i swear after 11 they only get tallerthanks
Cute story
K. i hate malfoy but this actually does seem like a scenario
i could see happening. lol love it
i love it
aww! How cute
A very odd pairing! I didn't like the bit about the damp curls but I love the idea of Hermonie and Draco. I think this is a delightfully naughty story written by a naughty person.
Hey I'll take that bet. I believe I have a few galleons laying around here somewhere. Tamara
I loved it! Awesome
Damn orgasms. LMAO.
AWWW...That was too cute...I really liked it...Great Story...~KC
I love the line about the cold lake... very well done. And the ending was pretty cute too :)