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Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge Where Nobody Knew His Name
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Where Nobody Knew His Name

1: I. Last Call

2: II. Dying and Living

3: III. Wake Up, Dead Man

4: IV. Get on With the Past

5: V. Never Coming Home

Where Nobody Knew His Name

sc010f

143 Reviews   |   143 Ratings, 0 Likes, 33 Favorites )

Romance General Potter Place's Anything Goes Challenge 11,072 Words 5 Chapters Complete
Hermione Granger Original Character Severus Snape

All Severus Snape wanted was a vacation.

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Chapters (5)

Chapter 1: I. Last Call

Chapter 2: II. Dying and Living

Chapter 3: III. Wake Up, Dead Man

Chapter 4: IV. Get on With the Past

Chapter 5: V. Never Coming Home


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sc010f

Member Since 2007  |  11 Stories  |  Favorited by 145  |  114 Reviews Written  |  795 Review Responses

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10/10

pookah

Bravo!  So, is he in love with Hermione, Lily, or Kat?  And then suddenly it's the fifth anniversary of his departure from britain.  -(when I look back, it seems like five years go that fast!)  After 5 years, he should be over Hermione, maybe even un-obsessed with Lily, right?I do hope you have more soon!  evil cliffie!  I love it.

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

I'm so glad you like this! :DOh, I'd say there's a Hermione/Kat issue here. Five years really does fly in RL, and I tried to give just a hint of that here. I'd vote for un-obsessed with Lily, but over Hermione? Well . . .:)Thank you so much for reading/reviewing!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

I'm so glad you like this! :DOh, I'd say there's a Hermione/Kat issue here. Five years really does fly in RL, and I tried to give just a hint of that here. I'd vote for un-obsessed with Lily, but over Hermione? Well . . .:)Thank you so much for reading/reviewing!

10/10

Dreamy_Dragon

“Brooding?” Severus was slightly miffed. - I love this line :D
Hm, so who is he dreaming about, and what's up with the English couple? *wibbles* I'm looking forward to more!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

eep! I've sent chapter 4 off, so you'll find out soon! *hides*I'm so glad you're liking this!Thanks for reading/reviewing! :D

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

eep! I've sent chapter 4 off, so you'll find out soon! *hides*I'm so glad you're liking this!Thanks for reading/reviewing! :D

10/10

MoreThanSirius

Well, good to know that Kat knows a rebound when she sees one. She's definitely the type to protect herself. And then, on the fifth anniversary of his disappearance, the screen door to the bar creaked open, and an English couple entered.Five years?! The English couple sounds rather ominous to me...

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

Yes, I'm afraid that time does funny things in this little fic!Kat's got a good head on her shoulders, she knows better. . . Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

Yes, I'm afraid that time does funny things in this little fic!Kat's got a good head on her shoulders, she knows better. . . Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

0/10

StormySkize

"An English couple entered the bar."Why do I think this is going to be the start of something big?Looking forward to more of this delightful tale.

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

Oh, it just might be the start of something!*g*Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed this!Thank you for reading/reviewing!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

Oh, it just might be the start of something!*g*Thank you so much! I'm so glad you enjoyed this!Thank you for reading/reviewing!

0/10

StormySkize

Isn't that just like Severus? He pushes away that which could make him happy if he would only allow it!I understand why this chapter seemed a bit 'rushed,' and I enjoyed it anyway.Looking forward to more!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

Thank you so much! Yes, poor Severus he's being a complete idiot right now!Thank you so much for reading/reviewing!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

Thank you so much! Yes, poor Severus he's being a complete idiot right now!Thank you so much for reading/reviewing!

9/10

beaweasley2

So he's falling for Kat? What a way to escape reality!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

LOL, oh yes he's wanting to escape as far as he can!Thank you so much for reading/reviewing!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

LOL, oh yes he's wanting to escape as far as he can!Thank you so much for reading/reviewing!

10/10

HermioneWeasley1972

Oh man, what a place to end it! Please  update soon!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

Chapter 4 is sent off! Thank you so much!A warning, there's more angst to come, I'm afraid!Thank you so much for reviewing/reading!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

Chapter 4 is sent off! Thank you so much!A warning, there's more angst to come, I'm afraid!Thank you so much for reviewing/reading!

0/10

sunny33

Ok, there could be hope here, maybe the a man for Kat and a woman for Sev??  please?

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

There's always hope! :DThank you so much for reading/reviewing!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

There's always hope! :DThank you so much for reading/reviewing!

9/10

Shadow

Oh, dear. Severus is again giving up what he will not accept is important to him. I hope he can find happiness eventually.

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

Thank you so much - poor Severus, he's pretty screwed up right now. . .

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

Thank you so much - poor Severus, he's pretty screwed up right now. . .

9/10

Shadow

Very interesting start. I hope we get to learn more about Kat and if Severus survives.

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

Thank you so much!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

Thank you so much!

0/10

kimjo2

darn!  i wanted it to be hg/ss but i'm along for the ride regardless.  thanks so much

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

Oh dear, please stay on for the ride! I'm not going to give away the ending, but I promise, Hermione's going to make another apearance! Thank you so much for reading/reviewing! There is more to come!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

Oh dear, please stay on for the ride! I'm not going to give away the ending, but I promise, Hermione's going to make another apearance! Thank you so much for reading/reviewing! There is more to come!

10/10

pookah

Well!  not what I expected!  That's good, by the way.  I hate to see our Hermione unhappy, but this is different and I look forward to more.  I hope Hermione and Ron will end up happy, and that Severus will too.  I am such a sucker for happy endings.  I think it was natural for Hermione and Snape to fall into some sort of romantic relationship under the circumstances.  And hard to give it up, even thought she married Ron anyway.    Sometimes it's hard to give up a love that is no good for one.Gee, Now I wonder where he went? 

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

*g* No prizes for guessing where Severus went!I'm so glad you enjoyed this and YES! exactly, it's very difficult to give up a love that isn't good for you sometimes. Neither Severus nor Hermione are in particularly good places right now, and it shows in thier actions, I think.Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

*g* No prizes for guessing where Severus went!I'm so glad you enjoyed this and YES! exactly, it's very difficult to give up a love that isn't good for you sometimes. Neither Severus nor Hermione are in particularly good places right now, and it shows in thier actions, I think.Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!

0/10

KarenDetroit

If there is some connection between these two chapters, I have missed it.

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

I waited to respond until Chapter 3 got posted, hope that clears it up! Thanks for reading!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

I waited to respond until Chapter 3 got posted, hope that clears it up! Thanks for reading!

0/10

elsolel

Wow.  That went a lot angstier than I thought this chapter would be!  I don't know if you are done or not, but if not, where did he go in America?

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

There's more to come, I promise! Thanks for reading/reviewing.

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

There's more to come, I promise! Thanks for reading/reviewing.

10/10

shellsnapeluver

Grrrrrrrr!!!!!!!!! It was going so well until they had to end it!He could barely speak, he rarely left his flat, but he researched and wrote a little, and every Thursday afternoon between one-thirty and four, he fucked Miss Granger. I love that line... I can't explain why its just so casual, I guess lol...Looking foward to more. Sad that she even MARRIED Ron and then he pushed her away but still, it's a great story.

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

Thank you so much! I liked that line as well! :)  More to come!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

Thank you so much! I liked that line as well! :)  More to come!

9/10

MoreThanSirius

That moved forward rather quickly! I don't know whether to believe Severus' statements or not. I do believe I know where he is going, but I have no idea what he may find there.

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

*g* It usually a good idea not to believe what Severus is saying when he's like this!  Thanks for reading/reviewing! Next chapter's coming up soon!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

*g* It usually a good idea not to believe what Severus is saying when he's like this!  Thanks for reading/reviewing! Next chapter's coming up soon!

10/10

MoreThanSirius

Wow! That's quite an impressive beginning. I loved the visual of the bottle shattering on the floor at the same time Snape lay dying. I can't wait to see where you take this!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

Thank you!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

Thank you!

10/10

karelia

And even more interesting and intriguing now. I'm looking forward to see where you're taking this!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

Thank you so much!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

Thank you so much!

10/10

karelia

Interesting start!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

Thank you!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

Thank you!

0/10

sunny33

Did she ask him to let her stay before she married Ron as well?

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

In theory, yes. But one of the problems of writing from Severus' POV, especially when he's in the condition he is, is that his sense of priority isn't necessarily ours! :)  I struggled a bit with this chapter, trying to get Severus more fleshed out, especially with his interactions with Hermione.  But he seemed to prefer to pretend not to want much to do with her beside the occasional, er, session. Thanks for reading/reviewing!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

In theory, yes. But one of the problems of writing from Severus' POV, especially when he's in the condition he is, is that his sense of priority isn't necessarily ours! :)  I struggled a bit with this chapter, trying to get Severus more fleshed out, especially with his interactions with Hermione.  But he seemed to prefer to pretend not to want much to do with her beside the occasional, er, session. Thanks for reading/reviewing!

10/10

Southern_Witch_69

I had no idea she was even dating someone, and then suddenly she was married. :) I'll bet I know just where he's going. But will Hermione find him there? I hope so. :)

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

It's one of the problems I ran into, teling the story from Severus' POV: asking what would be important to him and therefore stuff we, as the reaader, wouldn't necessarily see.  I'm so glad you liked it, hopefully you'll enjoy the rest of it as well!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

It's one of the problems I ran into, teling the story from Severus' POV: asking what would be important to him and therefore stuff we, as the reaader, wouldn't necessarily see.  I'm so glad you liked it, hopefully you'll enjoy the rest of it as well!

6/10

HermioneWeasley1972

I am going to be honest.  Even though I liked the interaction, I felt like I was watching a movie and fast forwarded through it.  I would have loved to see more of his recovery.

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

I know what you mean. I struggled with this chapter a little, and finally decided that Severus' immediate recovery wasn't what I wanted to focus on quite so much.  What happens later, I found, was going to be more important to the story.  Thanks for reading/reviewing!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

I know what you mean. I struggled with this chapter a little, and finally decided that Severus' immediate recovery wasn't what I wanted to focus on quite so much.  What happens later, I found, was going to be more important to the story.  Thanks for reading/reviewing!

9/10

Dreamy_Dragon

Very intriguing start! Despite the sad ending to the chapter I hope Snape survived. Looking forward to more :)

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

Thank you!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

Thank you!

0/10

hgelman

I really liked this.  I thought Snape was perfect - not over the top.  The end was perfect - sad - but perfect.

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

Thank you so much! More to come!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

Thank you so much! More to come!

10/10

HermioneWeasley1972

Oh wow...that was a great start.  Another fic to add to the list of favorites in this challenge.  How am I going to choose?LOL  Please update soon!

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

LOL! Thank you so much! *returns to feverish typing*

Response from sc010f (Author of Where Nobody Knew His Name)

LOL! Thank you so much! *returns to feverish typing*

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