Befuddled
GinnyW20 Reviews | 6.4/10 (20 Ratings, 0 Likes, 5 Favorites )
Severus goes on a late night patrol.
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I'm a 40+ year old mother of 4 who works full-time, goes to school, and writes in what little spare time I have. Once upon a time I co-moderate the SS/HG Gift Exchange with Shiv5468 and Scattered Logic.
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Severus will always be a doting, and over protective daddy. Thank goodness his daughter is a Slytherin, I doubt he will be able to catch her out, even with the "Snogging Sensor"{ which is GENIUS by the way }. And the icing on the {Wedding } cake is, he will have to be polite to Neville, at least untill after the ceremony.
very cute! I'm rather surprised Minerva didn't hex Severus into next week for embarrassing her but I guess she was probably just as befuddled! Hermione tried to warn him. *tsk tsk*
I love this completely. I could rapidly be addicted to overprotecting daddy Severus.
Squee! Loved this. Acting as an over protective father is most definatly in Severus' nature. Poor girl, she won't marry till she's 45...still at least Hermione gets somer er, fun out of it :DThank you for a charming read.
A Snogging Sensor?! Bwahahahaha! No wonder Severus was so good at finding those couples amidst the rose bushes and in the carriages during the Yule Ball. Thank goodness his daughter is a Slytherin. At least she has a fighting chance of sneaking in a date once in a while, especially when Hermione is providing some diversionary tactics and keeping Snape much too busy to notice anything.
That was fantastic. I love to see Severus as an over protective father. Good job!
I don't know how I missed this! It's great! I wonder how Minerva is going to treat Severus for the next few days... LOL!Now, what else of your HP work have I missed lately?*goes off to check*
Response from GinnyW (Author of Befuddled)
LOL!I know, it's been so long since I've written this pair! (They were feeling neglected.) The only other thing that I wrote was my 100-word drabble that I wrote when I was working on this... it's over at GS100, though one of these days I need to archive them, I think. :) Thanks, sweetie!
Response from GinnyW (Author of Befuddled)
LOL!I know, it's been so long since I've written this pair! (They were feeling neglected.) The only other thing that I wrote was my 100-word drabble that I wrote when I was working on this... it's over at GS100, though one of these days I need to archive them, I think. :) Thanks, sweetie!
Lol! I love the thought of over-protective Daddy Severus. It is just so fitting!
Funny, cute, sweet and oh so Father Knows Best.Thank you.
LOL oops, mistaken identity!
Response from GinnyW (Author of Befuddled)
Oops, indeed.Poor Severus. :)
Response from GinnyW (Author of Befuddled)
Oops, indeed.Poor Severus. :)
Wonder if he's more upset at Lizzie dating because she's 'only seventeen' or because her beau is a Longbottom! 
Very cute. Loved the Snogging Sensor.
Response from GinnyW (Author of Befuddled)
LOL! I think that it's a mixture of the two. He's clearly over-protective, but add Longbottom on top of that and it's enough to put poor Severus over the edge. :) Thanks!
Response from GinnyW (Author of Befuddled)
LOL! I think that it's a mixture of the two. He's clearly over-protective, but add Longbottom on top of that and it's enough to put poor Severus over the edge. :) Thanks!
Wonder if he's more upset at Lizzie dating because she's 'only seventeen' or because her beau is a Longbottom! Very cute. Loved the Snogging Sensor.
That was adorable, actually. And I love that Hermione was right.
Response from GinnyW (Author of Befuddled)
:) Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
Response from GinnyW (Author of Befuddled)
:) Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.
Love the Snogging Sensor! I enjoy seeing what sort of magical ideas people come up with when they write fan-fiction. The Snogging Sensor is definitely one to treasure! Thank you for sharing this delightful tale.
Response from GinnyW (Author of Befuddled)
LOL! Thanks! I think I'd like to write a bit more about Severus and his little toy... we'll see. :)
Response from GinnyW (Author of Befuddled)
LOL! Thanks! I think I'd like to write a bit more about Severus and his little toy... we'll see. :)
cute. i had wondered what the red marble was. i liked that even though his daughter was a slytherin, she fell for a gryffindor - and not just any gryffindor, but a longbottom! : )
Response from GinnyW (Author of Befuddled)
I think that the Snogging Sensor needs it's own story... I'll have to think on that one. :) Yes, poor Severus his daughter even dared to sit at the Gryffindor table for dinner... I never did have him look over at Neville's face. He may have been just as gobsmacked.
Response from kittylefish (Reviewer)
ah, thanks for that visual, of him glancing over at neville! that was a nice bonus giggle.
Response from GinnyW (Author of Befuddled)
I think that the Snogging Sensor needs it's own story... I'll have to think on that one. :) Yes, poor Severus his daughter even dared to sit at the Gryffindor table for dinner... I never did have him look over at Neville's face. He may have been just as gobsmacked.
Response from kittylefish (Reviewer)
ah, thanks for that visual, of him glancing over at neville! that was a nice bonus giggle.
Definitely fitting. Cute. :)
Response from GinnyW (Author of Befuddled)
Thanks, Sun! :) Father's Day seemed like a good time to post it.
Response from GinnyW (Author of Befuddled)
Thanks, Sun! :) Father's Day seemed like a good time to post it.
I love the Snogging Sensor! How else to keep a castle full of teenagers (and professors!) in check?
Response from GinnyW (Author of Befuddled)
Thank you! Yes, how else, indeed? :D
Response from GinnyW (Author of Befuddled)
Thank you! Yes, how else, indeed? :D
This still cracks me up when I read it!!!You did a fabulous job.
Response from GinnyW (Author of Befuddled)
~giggles~I'm glad that you liked it, hon. Thank you so much for your input! :D
Response from GinnyW (Author of Befuddled)
~giggles~I'm glad that you liked it, hon. Thank you so much for your input! :D
This was so funny and original! I can see Severus acting like this as a father.
Response from GinnyW (Author of Befuddled)
:D Thank you! Yes, I think that Severus would be very protective of his little girl.
Response from GinnyW (Author of Befuddled)
:D Thank you! Yes, I think that Severus would be very protective of his little girl.
Very cute!!!! I can see him being the over-protective father from hell!
Response from GinnyW (Author of Befuddled)
Thank you so much!
Response from GinnyW (Author of Befuddled)
Thank you so much!