All Yours
selinabln22 Reviews | 6.27/10 (22 Ratings, 0 Likes, 31 Favorites )
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selinabln
Member Since 2006 | 15 Stories | Favorited by 80 | 23 Reviews Written | 289 Review Responses
A dreamy realist, with a heart for bookish witches and ill-tempered wizards.
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That was lovely.
Lucky girl. I wish (dream is probably more acurate ;) that he said it to me... *sigh*
Simply lovely. Heartwarming to say the least. I like how he initially stiffens under her embrace a very Severus thing to do with his untrusting disposition.
Lovely, thank you.
How utterly enchanting this story is! You have written an entire emotional journey in a mere 750 words. My hat is off to you. Well done!Beth
Thank you for making them happy. Thank you for making me cry tears of joy.
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
*hands tissue*Thank you for this review. My heart swelled a little reading it :o)))
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
*hands tissue*Thank you for this review. My heart swelled a little reading it :o)))
So much in so few words! I am amazed at how you captured an entire story - along with such a range of emotions - in this drabble. Excellent!!
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
The word count really gave me a headache while writing this story, to be restricted in this felt sometimes like tying the muse... But I am glad it worked out in the end. Thank you :o)
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
The word count really gave me a headache while writing this story, to be restricted in this felt sometimes like tying the muse... But I am glad it worked out in the end. Thank you :o)
nice. just enough heartbreak to make the happy ending sweeter. and i really liked your magical device - very practical and such a thoughtful gift.
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
Our Hermione is a very practical and talented girl, so I thought it would fit. Glad you like it.
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
Our Hermione is a very practical and talented girl, so I thought it would fit. Glad you like it.
YEAH!!!!!
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Oooh that was so very romantic, enough to make a girl swoon.
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
*smiles broadly* I am glad you like it.
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
*smiles broadly* I am glad you like it.
so much changed in such a short time, very skilful!
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
Thank you :o) Sel.
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
Thank you :o) Sel.
Ok, I forgive cowardness as long as they rectify the mistake in the end like Severus so brilliantly did at the end here:-))A very nice story!
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
Well, I think facing Voldemort felt easier to him as facing his own emotions did, so he needed a little time ;o))
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
Well, I think facing Voldemort felt easier to him as facing his own emotions did, so he needed a little time ;o))
Oh, this was wonderful!!! I like how he ran after her and called himself a coward... very well written.
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
Thank you :o) I think he felt like one for not acting earlier. Sel.
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
Thank you :o) I think he felt like one for not acting earlier. Sel.
Very nice! It seems very in character, to me, for Severus to behave that way - to still be he usual stony self while his heart is saying otherwise. Well done :D
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
I am glad you think his reaction was in character. Thanks for reviewing. Sel.
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
I am glad you think his reaction was in character. Thanks for reviewing. Sel.
This was really sweet! I love how she was able to give him a gift that he could really use. And I also love his reaction at the end! Good job!
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
Thank you :o)
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
Thank you :o)
Wow! From hopeless longing to Gryffindor brashness to heart-wrenching unrequited love to happily ever after in 750 words! Oh, and one very nifty little original magical device, too. Excellent!
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
Oh my. Thank you for this review. It is wonderful to see that the little romatical arch I tried to bend in 750 words worked for you. Sel.
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
Oh my. Thank you for this review. It is wonderful to see that the little romatical arch I tried to bend in 750 words worked for you. Sel.
*Sigh*...*sniffle*...why oh why can't things happen like this more often in real life? (Please bear with me...being the Queen of Unrequited Love that I am, this story hits a little close to home).
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
Real life is a Troll and if writing could change it, trust me I would write the whole day *hugs*
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
Real life is a Troll and if writing could change it, trust me I would write the whole day *hugs*
lucky girl
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
she is, indeed :o)
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
she is, indeed :o)
Very lovely. Thank you for sharing!
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I am glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing 
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
I am glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing
This was lovey. The emotions were tangible and real. The imagery was vivid and intense. Well done!
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
Thank you very much :o) I am glad to know that the emotions and the imagery worked for you. Sel.
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
Thank you very much :o) I am glad to know that the emotions and the imagery worked for you. Sel.
ahh that is soo sweet love those fluffy story'sand for a one-shot ....very good!
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
Thank you 
I am glad you liked it.
Response from selinabln (Author of All Yours)
Thank you I am glad you liked it.
This was adorable! So cute and well written :)