Just perfect!

How very sad. Might have used a little extra narrative regarding the actual bartering of his soul. That part was a little too unknown for me. Still, very good, and very sad.

Elura

Oh my god, that was so sad! Bloody brilliant, but bloody sad! A friend recommend your story to me, and I've just read it whilst listening to the song by Britney Spears, I want to cry. Well done on your first fanfic, it was really good.~Sarah

*sobs* oh... i had the song playing at the same time as I read it, oh this was so moving. I guess Hermione was a happier person, with her departed friends and family. Severus was silly not to see how important it was for them to be together. I wasn't going to read this, after seeing the warnings, but the song changed my mind. I love the song, but after reading and listening, I guess I'm going to think of this story everytime I hear it. Really really sad *wipes tears from face*. 

Oh, gosh, I need tissues! That was disturbingly beautiful. I... there are no words. ~

That was so sad!

*sniffs* that was soooo beautiful and sad :(

Very well written.  You have away with words.   Tamara