One-shot
Chapter 1 of 1
carley9It starts with a kitten and ends with a snake.
ReviewedI would like to thank my beta Ashley for helping clean this up! Don't know what I would do without you. :)
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Hermione looked down at her list and felt the small hand interlaced with hers tighten. She returned with a small squeeze of her own. She looked down at the curly-haired child and idly stroked a curl while saying, “We only have one last stop to make before we meet up with your father and sister.”
“I don’t see why we’re getting school supplies so early. Sylvan didn’t have to get supplies this early,” the child pouted.
Hermione smiled. “That’s because your elder brother is a procrastinator.” She stopped in front of a shop called ‘Magical Menagerie’ and pulled her child inside. “We’re going to pick out your familiar here.” Hermione looked back at her list and added, “It seems that snakes have been added to the list along with the usual cats, owls, and toads.”
The child wrinkled her nose and let go of her mother’s hand, walking away and slowly looking at the animals. She had already dismissed the snakes and toads; that was her sister’s cup of tea. She slowly walked down the aisles, stopping in front of a little, bow-legged, black kitten. She reached out to stroke the fur and found it soft. “Mum?”
Hermione came up behind her and asked, “This one?” When the child nodded her head—sending a mass of curls shaking—Hermione reached out to pet the kitten and felt it nudge her hand. “What will you name it, Rowena?”
Rowena petted the kitten again and answered, “Phoebe.” She looked up at her mother and stated, “She looks like a Phoebe.”
Hermione tucked a strand of hair behind her daughter’s ear and said, “Let’s finish up here and go meet your father and sister.”
Severus was in the middle of a pet store in the middle of Muggle London with the child most dear to his heart. At the moment, said child was standing on tip-toes with her nose pressed against the glass of a tank containing reptiles and amphibians.
“Papa? Can I have this one? You said that snakes were now on the list.” The child practically hopped up and down. “Plus Mum said that if we found a non-poisonous one, I could have it. So can I?”
Severus looked down at the Muggle wristwatch his wife had given him last Christmas and noted the time. “If we check with the owner—and if he re-assures us that it is non-poisonous—you may have it.” As the child smiled at him, he added, “Besides, it is almost time to meet your mother and sister for lunch.”
“Are we going to the Three Broomsticks?” As her father nodded, she punched a fist into the air and went to search for a sales clerk.
Severus almost smiled as he waited for his youngest child to come back. She was always asking what was in this jar or that jar—always questioning and questioning some more. He was glad that this one seemed to be headed for Ravenclaw or Hufflepuff—it would be difficult to have her in any other House.
“Papa! He says it’s not poisonous! Can we get it now?”
This time Severus did smile as he said, “Yes, we may.” He turned to the clerk and asked, “Do you happen to have a box to put it in?” The clerk nodded and left to get a box. As Severus watched him walk away, he asked, “So, what will your new pet’s name be, Freya?”
“Nagendra.”
Severus pinched the bridge of his nose and asked, “Do I even want to know where you found it?”
Freya smiled at him—allowing a twinkle to reach her eyes—and said, “Probably not.”
“Let’s pay and meet you mother and sister. I’m famished.”
Hermione smiled and reached for her husband. After planting a chaste kiss on his thin lips, she asked, “What took so long?” Without waiting for him to answer, she said, “Rowena and I have been waiting for ten minutes now. We were for certain that you would beat us here.”
Severus pulled out a chair for Freya and said, “You were in Diagon Alley, whereas I was in Muggle London. One cannot very well apparate in a crowd of Muggles.”
Hermione smiled at him and then turned her attention to Freya. “So, did you end up getting a snake or a toad?”
Freya patted the brown box on her lap and said, “I got a snake. I named him Nagendra.”
Hermione snickered. “Lord of the Snakes? Hoping that your snake will keep your brother in line?”
Freya smiled. “Nope, just the Slytherins who try to interrupt my study time.”
Severus asked Rowena, “What did you get, my dear?”
She shyly smiled and tucked a strand of hair behind her ear. “A little black kitten. I named her Phoebe.” She chewed on her bottom lip and said, “I hope that she’ll be okay. We had to get kibble and a litter box for her.”
Hermione and Severus watched as their two youngest children talked about their shopping expeditions. Hermione grabbed for Severus’ hand under the table and asked, “How did we end up with twins with such different personalities?”
“My dear, we are as different as the snake and kitten bought today. Why should our children be any different?”
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Based off Prompt # 55. It begins with kittens. It ends with snakes. (There's an obvious SS/HG reference in there, but it really can be anything! As long as there are kittens. And snakes. I'd like for the kittens not to be fed to the snakes.)
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34 Reviews | 4.82/10 Average
You did an excellent job on this prompt. What a cute story. You have made everyone fit perfectly. Well done.
LOL I love that. What a wonderful way to use the prompt. Sweet and touching but not overly so.
Aww that was very cute. I really like your take on this prompt. Very nicely done.
*applause* <- I actually did that for real.That was so sweet! I love the names you picked for everybody, I want to name my next cat Phoebe now. Ten minutes ago it would have been Luna, so see what you've done to me. :D
Cute and unique interpretation of the challenge!
lovely...full of fluffy goodness but not cloying. thanks so much
Made me smile for a very long time. Well done.
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Thank you :)
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Thank you :)
I don't believe that I missed this one till I was reading the fic recs in Potter Place! I though I'd read every single challenge fic, but I somehow missed this!Thank you for sharing this with us. WHat a sweet picture of family life, (a much better future than that mean ol' JKR gave SS) Snape deserves darling children who ask lots of questions. This is a precious and enjoyable tale.
I do hope the sequel won't include the kitten being eaten by the snake. XDWell done!
This is really cute. Almost speechless from the cute.
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Thank you :)
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Thank you :)
Lovely. I really can see Severus and Hermione's daughters having such different personalities.
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Thank you :)
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Thank you :)
Very nice! I love that Hermione's and Snape's children reflect their own personalities - well done
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Thank you!
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Thank you!
This is so nice!!
Very nice! And you used the prompt very well, I thought.Thanks for sharing.
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Thank you for reviewing! :)
Awwwww! So sweet! And I love their names.
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Thank you :) I happen to be partial to the names myself :)
Oh, well done. This was very cute :)
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Thank you :)
Very nice. What color(s) is the snake? I just wondered, since you specify the color of the kitten.
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Green with a yellow belly, kind of like the little garter snakes. :)And thank you for the review :)
Ooh, that was cute. Just what I needed to read after a long day
Response from carley9 (Reviewer)
Thank you :) Nice to know that I made someone's day :)
This was so cute! I love how you were able to bring out both of the adults in the children. Good job!
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Thank you! And I wasn't really thinking of how the twins mirror qualities in the adults. More like how they mirrored different facets of me as a child. :)
Cute. Although I think Sev and Hermione have quite a few similarities as well. ;-)
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
*grins* I do too. The thing is I happened to place a little of myself in both Rowena and Freyja.
I loved it. Hermione and Severus having twin girls with as different personality as they have is brilliant!
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
I have a set of cousins whose personalities are as different as night and day. They don't even look like they're related. :)
Oh, how sweet... that certainly brought a smile to my face. :) I didn't predicted the twins, so it's nice to be surprised. And I like the way you using the differences between Severus and Hermione and imposed it in their twins also. Very good! :)
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
That was the story that popped into my head as I saw the prompt. If you go back and look, there's also mention of an older brother as well. :)
Response from zyra (Reviewer)
Yes, I saw you mentioned an older brother and the first thing I thought was, 'Ooh, how sweet, they're one big happy family!', lol. But what does that has anything to do with the prompt? The mention of older brother I mean ... *scratches head*
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
He was just thrown in for the whiner :) But after the contest, I might do another story to go with this, so I sort of added him for future use :)
Response from zyra (Reviewer)
Oh, okay. :)Ooh, a sequel! Good luck with it! :)
This is really sweet. The twins are delightful. It'd be a cute story to see their first day at Hogwarts.
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Maybe once the contest is over. I'm trying to squeeze out another story for another prompt :)
Such a cute story! I loved the idea of Severus and Hermione having twins with such different personalities.
Response from carley9 (Author of Kittens and Snakes)
Thank you! :)I have cousins that are twins and they are as different as night and day.